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Reviewer: Wild_Mage (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 03:33 PM · On: Prologue

I think it's Jessica or Angela, because I just don't see Bella wearing heels or being disappointed when there's no butler. Can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: Chanimal (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Prologue

i dont know who it is but i definately want to find out!

i'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Prologue

Ooooohhh this is looking like a very enjoyable story. Nothing like self pleasure to get me interested. Although I do prefer to share. However if this story is going where I think it may then one needs to be comfortable to express themselves and do so in front of others. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have you on my favorites.

Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Prologue

Ooooohhh this is looking like a very enjoyable story. Nothing like self pleasure to get me interested. Although I do prefer to share. However if this story is going where I think it may then one needs to be comfortable to express themselves and do so in front of others. Looking forward to the next chapter. I have you on my favorites.

Author's Response:

Yes, the self fufillment always gets me too. LOL! And the sharing is my favorite part as well. See? We have so much in common already. Thanks for adding the story to your favs. The first chapter is already submitted for validation, so it should be up by tomorrow.

Reviewer: madzee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Prologue

intriguing...i want more.



Author's Response:

Thanks :D THe next chapter has already been submitted for validation, so it should be up by tomorrow.

Reviewer: TrueLovEph28 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Prologue

Oooooo....I'm going to like this one! So, what about this story is the part that's going to be so out of your comfort zone? I'm nosy...don't feel like you have to tell me if you don't want :) Anyway, I have a feeling this is going to be one that I will wait on pins and needles for the updates.

I know how unnerving it can be when you start something that you're not used to. I just started my first multi chapter fic, so I'm right there with ya! You're going to do great. I love it already!!

~Rachel



Author's Response:

You did??? I'll have to take a look :D Congrats on starting to write. I know it takes a huge leap of courage to post something you've created, so I applaud you on your bravery. Thanks for leaving me a review :D

Reviewer: daniw (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Prologue

OOOh, this looks to be very interesting!  I can't wait for the next chapter to be up!



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

The next chapter has been sent in for validation, so it should be up soon!

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Prologue

KEEP GOING AND POST SOON



Author's Response:

Thanks:D Next chapter has been sent in for validation and should be up soon!

Reviewer: poupinette (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 04:29 AM · On: Prologue

i have never read any of your stories, so i don't really not what your usual pairings are, but out of habit i'd guess bella?

Reviewer: poupinette (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 04:28 AM · On: Prologue

i have never read any of your stories, so i don't really not what your usual pairings are, but out of habit i'd guess bella?



Author's Response:

I hope you will like my stories. Sing for Me Sweet is a lot different than this one, but has juicy firemen as an enticement. :D

The next chapter has been sent in for validation. Hopefully will be up soon!

Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 01:17 AM · On: Prologue

Oh my goodness! You've got me hooked in under 1000 words! I can't wait to see where you'll take this! I'm pretty sure that the POV is female (as per the heels, or else we have some really "special" guys here ;) ), and I'd like to think that it's Bella (but you're cryptic note makes me think that you wouln't make it that easy).

I'll be holding my breath! Update soon! (Pretty please. With a cherry on top) :D

Reviewer: FOXY-FEET (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:43 PM · On: Prologue

I'm so intrigued! I'm assuming this is Bella's POV, and hoping that she completes her first task. Maybe with a naughty Jasper and Edward watching behind the mirrors? Who knows. Your descriptive writing is excellent. Almost as if  I was entering the mansion myself. *sigh* I'm excited to read lots more!



Author's Response:

LOL! You and I think a lot alike. He he...

The next chapter has been sent for validation, but if you want to take a peek, it's posted over at fanfiction. That is until they pull it for content.

Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Prologue

Wow, great opening chapter!  Can't wait to see where this is going!

 

:)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! It's really out of my comfort zone. LOL!

Reviewer: starryangel1225 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Prologue

Seems promising.  Hope to see an update soon.



Author's Response:

Next chapter is already sent for validating. If you simply can't wait or are really curious, it is posted up at Fanfic for the time being. It will probably be pulled, but oh well...

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