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Reviewer: elless (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
i have to tell you- this is possibly the most original premise for a fic i have read. it's really refreshing and I'm so excited to keep reading it!
Reviewer: wendy sue (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
Great story... more please!!!!!!
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
I love it when two minds meet and the flirting begins. Sexual tension right there. So Edward thinks he's a ladies man and can satisfy them all. I think he has met his match in Bella Betty. Oh how the sparks will fly.
Reviewer: green2130 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
This story has peaked my instrest. one of originality
Reviewer: jesicka309 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
mmm I'm loving this story, can't wait for more - this seems to be the longest party on earth!! I really can't wait to see more of how the Cullen program works! ;) Jess xo
Reviewer: Laine Quinn (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
Whoo-hoo! This story is heating up. Can't wait to see how Bella surprises Edward next...
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2010 12:01 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
great chapter
Reviewer: madison elliott (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
this story just keeps getting better i love this story keep up the great job
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Awww, I'm caught up! :( lol Loved Mike. He's such a dork. :D
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 02:52 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Dame
Well, at least Rose isn't a bitch! LOL And poor Jessica! lol
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Rabbit Hole
Eeek. Lauren is a first-class bitch, isn't she? lol
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Trial
Wooboy! lol Jake's a jackass in this chapter, but I love Seth. LOL
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 02:22 AM · On: Prologue
Ooooh, the plot intrigued me and now I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: AngieDoll (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Loved it!!!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Great diolog with James and Seth... but bring on Edward...
Reviewer: Nightmare1991 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Another great chapter! And we're not even to the smut yet! ;D
I really like your rendition of Jacob. I have a feeling we're going to have quite the love-hate relationship, he and I: his original reaction to Bella during the trial brought out the hate, but - reading him now, with Bella - I just couldn't help but smile. =D
Keep 'em coming! I'll be waiting... :)
Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
love it keep going
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Wonderful! Jacob is a little forward - Mike is so silly! Love it!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
I loved the party-Jacob was just too cocky for words. Of course there's no sex at the party right? But Bella's raring to go.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Rox
Reviewer: jslack0816 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Dear Jacob-
Let's review, shall we? M'kay. At Bella's trial you referred to her as poor, plain, and a gold digger. In fact, you directly said that she was out of the running for you. Let's get back to this line of thinking, please.
With that said, holy shit dude! Seriously? You can spit some game! My panties were definitly affected by that little spiel about what you could do to someone in that outfit. Super hot, that little bit.
Let's just agree that all of that game should be used on someone else. That's really for the best!
Thanks so much,
Jen
PS. A vampire? Really? Hahahahha!
Great chapter, chick! Just from that little Jacob part, I can't wait ti read your lemons! How long til THAT happens?
Author's Response: LOL!!! You are freakin' HILarious. And yes, Jake has a mouth on him. But so does Eddie;) I knew someone would like the vampire thing. I freakin' laughed my ass off when that little nugget popped into my melon.
I like my lemons on a slow build. They are coming... :D
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
nice, fabulous story idea! can't wait for more
Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Great story - hoping your getting to the point soon!!!! :)
Author's Response: Wow... she just got to the party, my friend. Can't rush passion. Eddie's coming in the next chappie :D
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
Gee where is Edward ?? Isn't he there? or has she just not met him yet at this party? Interesting story!
Author's Response: He's there, watching her from afar. ;)
Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Trial
I'm quite glad that I began reading TBC's. I like what I've read so far and think it is very well written.
Is Edward the only person that gets to choose Bella, or do others have a choice as well? I was wondering because Edward said she was recommended as a match for him.
Jacob sounds like he may be causing trouble sometime in the future.
Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 03:46 PM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
keep going and post soon
bye bye
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement :D
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