Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Mated
:)
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 6 The Sponsor
nice...this story make me wanna race through each chapter to get to the next:)
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
just as I expected...pure hotness:) Somehow I'm thinking this is just the tip of the iceburg for these two
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 4 The Consorts
good to see all the characters taking their place in the story. cant wait for B and E's first interaction...bet its gonna be something special
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Dame
I'm kinda diggin this R...
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 2 The Rabbit Hole
Tanya and Lauren are 2 of my least fav characters...glad to see you keep their depiction from the original...
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Trial
love having EPOV...so many writers can't handle more than one POV...well done
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Prologue
hooked...I'm hooked. can't wait to read more
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Victoris and James, huh! This is getting so good.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 The Trial
So yay I was right it was Bella (I can hear a collective - DUH!) - it could have been someone else just to throw us off the scent. I can see this is going to be hot, so without further ado, and anymore family interruptions it's onwards and upwards. Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Prologue
I've just found this story and I have to say I'm intrigued. I'm thinking this is Bella, probably wrong, though I can't wait to find out. I'm not sure that I would be able to perform under those circumstances....3 times.....I would need more that 2 glasses of champagne - LOL. Anyway, on to the next chappie.... Jane x
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
wow very very good chapter keep going and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
so good can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Kazbar (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
I am so loving this. The long slow burn to set up the story, the unspoken things to make the reader think and wonder. All of it flirting with my mind. I'm thinking one thing, only to discover it is something else. I want to be in your mind. What an imagination. Please can I be a Betty too?? Thank you for writing this and thank you for allowing me to read this for free. I really appreciate your time and effort in doing so. Bring on the next chapter and take me on your journey.
Reviewer: jkane180 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Great chapter! I love learning what's going on slowly along with Bella! :)
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: AdaBella (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
:)
Reviewer: lonely_angie17 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
really good chapter!!! could that couple probably be james and victoria or maybe alice and jasper???? cant wait to find out!!! :D
Reviewer: Krizzglass (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
OMG! Your story is so good! Nice twist on it too. I love they way you write! It's amazing! Update soon... can't wait.
Reviewer: jesicka309 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Hmmm... is it James and Victoria? They seem to be the type.... :P
Great chapter! Keep them coming! :D
Jess xo
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
gotta be james and vicki
Reviewer: rtpobsessed (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Fantastic chapter, I can't WAIT to read more. This is such a good story, SUPER HOT!
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
You totally have my attention here!!!! Are there more rules? I can't wait to read more.
Rox
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next update!!!
Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
You are obviously into the "slow buildup" but come on. We are now well aware of what the mansion looks like, the grounds, etc. Time to get to the good stuff promised in the intro. Just one other criticism. Bella answering yeah instead of yes does not seem to fit with the general idea that she is an educated and mature 25 year old. Yeah makes her sound like a gum chewing teen. Hope I didn't offend. The criticism is meant to be constructive, not destructive. Looking forward to further updates.
Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2010 04:15 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Loved this chapter, and love the story! I hope you update soon! :)
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