Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1 The Trial
Bella was actually quite teasing in her own way as she certainly had their attention. I pretty much guffawed at two of the lines between Seth and Jake ...
"Dude, she's moving," Seth whispered ..."
"Fuck it's about time," Jake grumbled. "I feel like I've been watching water boil."
I did go to your ff acct page to check out your blog. I even checked out The Official Fans of Fan iction Forum. What an interesting site that is. I am going to want to go back and spend more time there. Thank You.
Sandra
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Great chapter as always!!! Update again soon please!!! Love the story!!!
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Great chapter as always!!! Update again soon please!!! Love the story!!!
Reviewer: JLW4108 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Holy crap!!!! That was so freakin hot. Yummy. Yummy. Yummy.
And may I just say that whoever you were talking about in your A/N shouldn't even be permitted here. I don't understand negative and ugly reviews. Why do people even bother saying such terrible things??? Go take out your aggression elsewhere. I completely agree with everything you said.
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Wow that was something else. I can't even tell you how excited I'am for more.
Reviewer: BookAddict (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Oh. Em. Gee. If anything could ever convince a girl to try batting for the other team... lol! Going to go wake up (and ravage) my hubby now. Thanks for writing!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Awesome! Bella finally gets some "play" time! Rosalie was a good instructor; very hot! You're the best!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 07:06 AM · On: Prologue
My initial response is Bella. But perhaps it is not. Very interesting start.
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
WOW that was so hot *fanning myself* can't wait for the next chapter with Emmett joining in.
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Holy crap. That will be fun.
Reviewer: chvz (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Awesome. Thx for the quick update. I will be controlling the shakes and sweats from my withdrawl systems, which I am already experiencing even though I just read this update, until the next update. I am completely addicted to your story, thanks again.
Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Great chapter! I have to say I'm partial to the femslash (first story I wrote was femslash), so this was awesome. But I also can't wait to also see Bella and Edward go at it. Yeah, I'm a pervy girl, so the more smexin' the merrier, lol.
Your rant was well-worded and appreciated. I was shaking my fist in the air, lol. When I post a chapter I literally bite my nails in anticipation of what folks will think. We write for free, just like we read for free on this website (however I've heard that donations are always welcome to help keep the site running). If someone has a reaction to how things work out in my story, I like to hear that -- that let's me know I'm making them feel something and are invested in the characters. If they just want to say "This is stupid," I'd rather they just move on and keep the comment to themselves. That's just hurtful. I'm not made of stone. Good reviews do make me write faster. :)
Ok, MY rant is over, lol.
Looking forward to seeing where this is all going. I think I'll just sit back and enjoy the ride (pun most definitely intended). When I receive an email letting me know this story has been updated I always smile big. :)
Reviewer: roon0 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Hot girlie lovin. Excellent :-)
Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
wow - great chapter - need a cold shower now, I think :)
Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Dayum.....that was smokin'! I knew there would be play but didn't see that one coming....literally & figuratively!
That's what I'm loving about this story, the surprises & excitement!
You have a vivid imagination & I'm so glad you're taking the time to share it!
Cannot wait for more....I think I need a cold shower or maybe a ciggie!
Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
It was with a heavy heart to read what any good friend would do when one is being attacked by an asshole..aka fellow writer. I love your story and the way you make the reader feel like she/he is a fly on the wall, that is truely the making of a very good writer. I am sad to hear the lack of respect this "fellow writer" felt the need to share on a public forum..but plz do not let this discourage u or any other writer to share the art that makes others smile and/or gives a quick escape from everyday life. I look forward to your next update and future stories. thx for sharing xo
Reviewer: 4CullensandaBlack (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
OMG amazing chapter...
Reviewer: lonely_angie17 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
that was a HOT chapter!!!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!!! loving it!!!
Reviewer: badkfare (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
I LOVE ths story! I mean that was incredibly hot! I cannot wait for the next chapter when all three of them play. I really enjoy Rosalie like this. I know people like to write her cold and slightly bitchy but I like it when people write her unbroken. I CANNOT wait for Bella and Edward to come together. I mean I can see the room catching on fire the way you write them.
About your rant...I want to apologize to that author. I write fanfic as well and I cannot imagine how awful that had to be. I write for the enjoyment of it and to have someone rip that to shreds is horrible. I love and support all stories that I read and in fact I am recommending yours on my next chapter. I love the way you write and I want others to read this fun little piece!
Have a great weekend and hurry up and go write the next chapter!
Reviewer: jesicka309 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience
Oh wow! Totally didn't see that lemon coming - you had me fooled with the "talking" thing from last chapter!
And it was HOT. Yum. Definitely enjoyed it.
I will have to go investigate this blog now... but maybe when my family aren't in the room LOL
Jess xo
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
Wow this story gets better and better, I can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Thanks :D I think its where it needs to be for the fun to commence...
Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
For some reason I could totally see Jasper and Alice as the BDSM couple. I have to say that I am definitely curious as to what Bella's training will entail. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Everyone is saying J/A... I think its funny. Great guesses, too. I like that someone said Carlisle and Esme. LOL!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
I like how you are building a nice foundation for this story. Looking forward to move in day and who besides Edward has requested Bella... even though its probably Jacob. Love love love your story.
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 The Rules and Regulations
more please:) lots and lots and lots
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2010 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 8 The Rule Breaker
hands down the hottest thing EVER!!!! Wow...just wow. I"m really liking this E
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