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Reviewer: tracylk (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 The First Experience

i just read your 'rant' and can't agree more! i do not write; i want to, though and have tried but keep getting stuck so i can't even imagine what it takes to get to the point of actually posting a chapter or one shot. all i can say is this, as an avid reader, i THANK YOU and PRAISE you for your commitment and dedication. your story is amazing and it would break my heart for you to stop sharing your gift (or for other writers to stop) because of an idiot who had nothing better to do but bring someone down just because they can.

what you do is greatly appreciated... just felt compelled to share that.

now, i'm going to go back to reading this chapter, which i am sure will be freakin' amazing!!!

muah! xoxo

Reviewer: tracylk (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Rule Breaker

OMG... Finally. God that was H.O.T. Awesome chapter, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2010 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Hey Honey!  I loved this chapter  - your story is so awesome - the intricate twists and turns are amazing.  Thanks for recing my story  - have a great weekend.

Michele

Reviewer: Panarican (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

this is such a good story - can't wait for the update!!!

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Woo hoo! She let him have it and I'm so glad he didn't try to cover up with a cocky front.  I can't wait to see how these two progress!

Reviewer: Source76 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Wonderful chapter! We know why Lauren is upset with Bella. I can't wait to see what happens from here. I wonder who else Bella will sleep with. They dont all have to sleep with all the consorts right? I dont remember. Thank you for your story!

Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

*wipes brow* I was a tad worried Cockward would keep his feelings all bottled up and this angry tension would last another chapter or two. We now return to your regularly scheduled sexual tension. 

As always you amaze me. 

Reviewer: alphabetty (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 13 The Meltdown

I let myself get behind, and then, aww shucks, had to read chapter 13 over. Poor me.

You need to win something for all thoses Bellas! 

Reviewer: sr2011 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Prologue

AWH MAN................THIS IS SOOOOO GOOOD!!!!!!

Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

so good love to see an update!!!!  So Edward got his head out of his ass, just in time!

Reviewer: hln3twimom (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Oh this chap was so good! I love the tension between Edward and Bella--cant wait for more between them.

Reviewer: luvsux (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

I want, no, I need more of TBC, ASAP! The wait has been excrutiating.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

I LOVE THIS BELLA!  And her chemistry with Edward is the BEST. 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

I love this story, ever chapter gets better and better.  What's with Lauren, she needs to learn to live and let live, a persons clothes are not an indicator of the type of personality they have if they were Lauren would have to walk around with a poker shoved up her arse, oh wait, she might actually enjoy that.  I loved that Bella stood up for herself and pointed out to Edward exactly how he'd made her feel. Looking forward to the next chapter.  Jane x.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Awesome baby. Just awesome.

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

This was such a wonderful chapter. I love how Bella stood up for herself. I always look forward to more.

Reviewer: txgrl (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

good chapter.  Are we getting to the GOOD stuff?

Question ... if Bella and Edward fell for each other quickly, does she have to agree to be with other consorts?  Is there a specified period of time before they could claim exclusivity?

Reviewer: scarlet (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Hot!

Reviewer: closetfanpire (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Loving this!  Can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: inbetweendayz (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

great writing i like cocky edward i am fearing the havic and angst bitchy tanya and lauren will be causing i cant wait to read more

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

I loved seeing this side of Edward.

Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

I LOVED this chapter.  so glad that bella stood up for herself, and hate that feeling she had when lauren made her feel not up to par.  so happy also that edward apologized and understood and that bella gave him another chance.  love this sexy edward and am hooked on this story!  i have a feeling lauren is going to be horrible...

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Interesting story so far. Although the premise of the "Cullen Sex Club" is interesting, I can definitely see some issues that will probably come into play later. Absolute trust and honesty is required for all relationships such as the ones manifested in an environment such as that, and the girls are lied to from the get-go. The men all know exactly what is going on, and the women are pretty much lambs to the slaughter. I don't know how the dames can live with themselves, selling out and flat-out lying to the new girls. You seem to be quite precise and thoughtful in the way you deal with things so far in this story, so I can only hope that these are subjects that will resolve themselves later.

I am really enjoying watching this unfold, and can't wait for more.

Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

Great chapter!  Good recovery, Edward...you almost blew it!  I absolutely LOVE this story, and I can't wait until the Betties get beyond the preliminaries and really start seeing some action.

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner

More, more and more. We've gotten past the preliminaries!

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