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Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Yes! Thank you so very much and Merry Christmas to you too.

Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 03:09 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Thank goodness Bella doesn't think like us. I hope the next chapter starts where this one ended. I'd like a clue as to what's going on in Edward's head.

Reviewer: mgonz595 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Where can I sign up to be a Betty? Hot chapter. I know Bella was anxious but please tell me they'll have more foreplay.

Reviewer: ellizabethcullen (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 02:44 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Oh YES! Got what i wanted for Christmas!  So glad it was Edward.....and I am left hanging on for more.  Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: jb578 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

WOW! So glad it was Edward and not Jacob. Loving this story!

Reviewer: simplydazzled (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Oh my, oh my, oh my! If that is a taste of things to come?! Merry Christmas to us all!

Thanks so much. This story is so intensely erotic it practically sizzles. It 's the best little gift not found under the tree.

S.D.

Reviewer: dedreader (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

F'ing HELL Yeah!

Reviewer: KeeWit (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

I need a cigarette.

Reviewer: whereiselvis (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Smokin'!  Great xmas present to me :)

Thanks!

Reviewer: JeanneC (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Loved it!

Merry Christmas

Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! is what I can say..  Is this what he was looking for too?   I think so..............  Can't wait for more juicey lemonsssssssssssssss. 

Merrry Christmas..  Leona

PS>  Glade it was EDWARD..  If you would have picked jacob..  BELLA would have walk out.  That my thought on it.  Edward all the way.. 

Reviewer: psund123 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

love it I WANT MORE

Reviewer: ginkgo00 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

more, more!

Reviewer: devonad27 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

thank you thank you thank you

Reviewer: westosobear (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

edward hard and fast equals Yummy.  Merry Christmas.

Reviewer: mysty1234 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

WOW....... I'll review again when I can type properly.... that was fuckin panty scorchin hot!

RIP Mysty

Reviewer: Truefan (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

*mouthdrops* holy....fuck.................yep, that's all I got.

Reviewer: twimomof4girls (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

holy hotness.  Damn, I want Consort Edward in my bed.

Reviewer: just the girl (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

I cannot even believe that chapter... absolutely wonderful, loved the suspense! 

Reviewer: acey (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

WOW!  2 HOT 4 da faaken hot tub!  cant wait 4 round 2..do u think u can top round 1??   Have a Happy Happy Holiday xo

Reviewer: xKirsten89 (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Loving the steamy scenes! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Merry Christmas to us! ;) I've been a good girl, but I wanted something sordid this year...

Edward was so sweet..Bella would say too much so. I was so worried it would be Jacob. Shiver.

Reviewer: she-rah (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

Yes!  Yes!  Yes!  Edward!  Yes! 

Something tells me that after this night, Edward is not going to want Bella near any other consorts.....and she isn't going to want to be. 

Merry Christmas to you too!  :-)

Reviewer: brikpete (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

(throwing confetti in the air & singing holy jolly Christmas.....it was Edward!!!!! Of course it was a hot chapter, but my mind kept wandering to whether or not he would allow himself to be with those Betties we love to hate. Guess I'm a little territorial. :)
Merry Christmas to you & your's!

Reviewer: tinaconnor (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 16 The Seduction

It took a while to get here but it was so worth it.  Sneaky of you to keep the identity of the consort a secret after leaving the cliff hanger in the last chapter.  I was so grateful that it wasn't Jacob.  Given the premise of the story I supposed we will see him at some point, but I really prefer Edward.  E&B do it for me.  Thanks for the update and Merry Christmas

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