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Reviewer: Momica (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
Left us waiting for more... my mouth is watering. I like this chapter a lot more than the initial ones.
Reviewer: madimommie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 The Rule Breaker
oh my goodness that was hottttttt
Reviewer: madimommie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 5 The Sweet Sailor
i love this story so far very clever writing
Reviewer: charliesTeam (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 01:35 PM · On: The Program
please update!
Reviewer: NewAtThis (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 14 The Dinner
This has been my favorite chapter so far!
Great work!
Reviewer: alg (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2012 12:24 PM · On: The Program
wonderful story!!! I have never felt so move and addicted to a story before you are a great writer!!!
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 11:14 AM · On: The Program
So even Jake can see what's going on with Edward. He had some very wise words for Bella, I hope she can act on them and open herself up to her feelings for Edward and vice versa.
I can't wait to hear what Edward has to say.
Jane x
Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 11:00 AM · On: My Betty
I'm so glad you're back and now it's my turn to play catch up.
I loved this chapter. Hearing from Emmett all about his Betty. They have such a deep love and connection with each other it's beautiful and like Emmett says Edward already loves Bella but they're playing a dangerous game. I've said it before and I'll say it again they both need to be honest with each other. They can both have what Emmett and Rose have but they have to be able to talk and be honest first.
I'm glad James is on his way out. Will Emmett get a shot at him before he leaves? I hope so.
Jane x
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2012 12:20 AM · On: The Program
What's next??? :)
Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2012 02:10 PM · On: The Program
This ended way too soon! Oh please update soon!! I love everything about your story.
Reviewer: evisme217 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 10:09 PM · On: The Program
Ohhhhh... you are so mean to leave the chapter ending like that! But I love it at the same time too! I can't wait till the next section. This is a great story.
I do like how Jake was trying to explain the ways of the program to Bella. He was like that in the original Twilight. So considerate, caring, helpful, genuine. That twist of your own was a great touch to the story.
Are we going to hear about Jasper and Alice's relationship more in the story? We've heard Emmett and Rose's and that was fabulous! There was a few also: Angela and Seth, Carmen and Eleazar. I was just wondering if we are going to see more couples mentioned into the story later.
Great imagination, very clever story line. I absolutely love it, but I already told you that.
Reviewer: Sarah1987 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2012 02:17 PM · On: The Program
Please hurry and get the next chapter out soon! :)
Reviewer: Anamika (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 02:39 AM · On: The Program
Well drat, now I have caught up and I will have to wait like everyone else! Congrats on the book, sorry you've had a hard time of it lately. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Anamika (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 02:37 AM · On: The Program
Well drat, now I have caught up and I will have to wait like everyone else! Congrats on the book, sorry you've had a hard time of it lately. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 12:26 PM · On: The Program
I really like your Jake in this chapter. Loved his voice of reasoning and how he makes Bella think. Perhaps Bella will tell Edward he can enter and Jake will quietly exit. Very good chapter. Looking forward tp more of the beauty of this program.
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:17 AM · On: The Program
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Reviewer: roxxychik06 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 08:06 AM · On: The Program
Oh. Come. On. Your killing me!!!!
Reviewer: rtpobsessed (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2012 07:57 AM · On: The Program
Oh Edward! I hope they both see they are mated already, wise up you two!! I can't wait for your update.
Reviewer: MadV7 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 05:47 PM · On: The Program
ahhhh!!! EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 05:16 PM · On: The Program
POST SOON
Reviewer: fprm (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 04:12 PM · On: The Program
NICE
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2012 10:37 AM · On: The Program
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 09:36 PM · On: The Program
Squeee Edward finally pulled his head out of his ass...I hate to say but even Jacob is throwing me for a loop.... I mean is he team Edward now?? Ugh post again soon I am so excited to see such a fast update!!! <3
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 07:19 PM · On: The Program
Your story touches on finding a true soul mate. I understand that it is about learning about yourself, and how to give and receiv pleasure, but like Jake expressed, people get divorced because they settle. Jake can see that Bella has only accepted Edward's invitations so far...and he's out there pacing. Jake doesn't want Bella to leave het, and I wonder if Jake wants to help show Bella too! Dying here. Can't wait to see what Edeard needs to say to Bella. Such a great story. So intense!!
Reviewer: NewAtThis (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2012 06:36 PM · On: The Program
You've got to be kidding me!!1 hahhahahahah
Can't wait to hear edward!
Hope you're doing ok! :)
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