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Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
This looks like a really interesting story with mystery to boot! Really looking forward to more updates!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am working on Chapter 5 (tentatively titled Hell and a handbasket).
Reviewer: gloaurora (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Introduction
This story is so great, I really like it... I want to know the story behind every character haha :P more Bella & Edward haha! ... keep up! I looking forward to the next update ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! And there's plenty more B&E coming up. =)
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
MMmmm, is Lord Masen Emmett? I can't think of any other character that would be as big and commanding of space. Its nice to see Jane is a pleasant character, she's always so mean. Still trying to figure out who L is...seems like a fairy though... Great chapter, but it brought out more questions than it answered! Update soon!
Author's Response: Can't answer your first question. Sorry! I like Jane, too. She & Alec are just kids for the purpose of this work. As for L, she's who she is, warts and all (and no, that's not a hint). I'm working on the next chapter but have company coming Thursday for a week so hopefully, I'll sneak in some typing time. If not, I'll give it my best brain power & jot it all down furiously!
Reviewer: Dahlia Raynes (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
I'm guessing that was Jacob? All giant and scary? Obviously they would have to hide his face...he'd be a walking anachronism! Very exciting so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Actually, Jacob wouldn't be a walking anachronism but that's a future plot point. As to who it was....I can't say right now. Thank you for the encouragement!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
would love to know what she had the children repeating
Author's Response: *giggle* It's the first thing I had to learn back in my high school Latin class. And all these years later, it's the main thing I remember so that shows you how useful it was to me. Mica Mica....twinkle twinkle...
Reviewer: Rie (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2010 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
hmmm interesting...Can't wait to read more. She is retaining her memories, could she have a gift?
Author's Response: Maaaayyyybe! You're so clever to spot it.
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
No clue on L's first name...will you give us a hint? This is an intriguing story. I like the fantasy part, and that they do time travel. Does everyone get a script? How do they know what/where they need to be? so many questions, hopefully the answers will start appearing in the next chapters?
Author's Response: There are a few hints planned in the upcoming chapters. L hates her real name, hence the nickname. All of the student participants get a vague script. Knowing what to do is part of L's gift & I hope to explain it better as the story progresses. Thank you for the encouragement & review!
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:56 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Thank you for sharing your creativitywith us all. I am really enjoying this unique story. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you for the encouragement! It really means a lot to me. I hope to get the next chapter to my validation beta by the end of the week & then it's up to her!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
L.. something interesting and uncommon maybe? Leslie? Can't wait for more. :)
Author's Response: L's real name isn't usually used as a woman's name (at least I've never heard of it as such). But thanks for the guess! And for the review.
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 2: Revelations and Roommates
Wow this story is amazingly cute. XD
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Sixasee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
This is definitely something different.I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to get the next installment to my validation beta by the end of the week.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Interesting story and a lilttle confusing.
Author's Response: Thank you! BTW, what's confusing to you? Good confusing or bad confusing? I'm happy to try to answer your questions. I won't give away too much (I hope) but I do like to respond to my readers!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
I like this. Good plot.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I can keep you interested!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Congrats on the book ranking! :) One of mine is chiming in at #1,856,491. LOL
No guess as to L's first name, no, sorry!
Interesting how Bella's head changed while she slept. Some gift the hybrid has, eh? Gracious!
Fascinating tale! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Congrats on your book! Mine's a few years old & has a rather limited audience so frankly, I am still happy when my publisher actually sends a royalty check.
Reviewer: ownedbytwins (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Loving this story!! It is so different!! Please keep it up!!!
I cannot figure out who L is... It's bugging the heck out of me!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I plan to write a bunch this next week. ;D What about L bugs you? I love writing her but she's not the focus of the story.
Reviewer: olwils (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
I just found your story and it is amazing. I love this concept and I can't wait to read more! Thanks for writing :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really appreciate it.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
well we have: L, Philia, and Mother
could be Lauren, Philiamina, Lilith
Author's Response: Nope, nope & nope. (Though I did consider Lilith until the brainstorm hit me.) It'll come out in a future chapter. Frankly, I'll be floored if anyone guesses.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
the only "L" that I can think of is Leah?
Author's Response: No. It's not Leah. L isn't a canon character. She's one of my own creations.
Reviewer: aborealis7 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
This story is loads of fun and quandrys! Great start!
Author's Response: Thank you! Hopefully, the characters will keep speaking to me! I've got a lot planned out for them but sometimes they hide in their rooms & don't want to play for me.
Reviewer: ferret (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Love this story! I'm not sure what's going on yet but my money is on some kind of spell. I have no idea what 'L' stands for - I'll just have to wait until you tell me. Being british and a history lover, I'm looking forward to the details. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: irishluck (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
wow love this story just came across it today so different thank god lol
Author's Response: LOL...different, good, I hope! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
In general terms, I am delighted and will go on reading. I hope you answer reviews. Anyway, what I can't figure out is why the Cullens put this charade up. And are the characters all playacting or there are also other unsuspecting humans, Bella apart?
One note I have is that some more period details would have been appreciated. I don't think I would find it easy to dress in a costume. Bella seems not to have problems, despite not having zipprs etc. And, what was the underwear? (easier than Victorian, surely, but not that easy). And what about toilet arrangements?
Finally, please, when you reccomend a story do specify if it is AH. I only read AU and Canon.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review (and right now, I'm answering all reviews...maybe not answering all the questions because I don't want to give too much away, but I'll respond).
Why the Cullens do this? It's an opportunity to learn. An amusement. L has the ability to make people believe they are in any time period (at a personal cost). Other than the canon vamps, L is the only other person playacting. The rest (inc. Bella) are college students (remember L's little rant before saying 'believe'?) interested in some aspect of this time.
I'll try to throw in a few more details...this is my 1st FF & I'm growing with each chapter. I appreciate comments/criticism because there's no other way to improve if no on points out "you could do...".
And thanks for the comment on AH vs AU vs etc. I hadn't thought of it.
Hope that answers some of yours (and anyone else's) questions.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
Just found this story....and I can't WAIT!! This sounds like it has lots of twists and turns...just please promise it'll be an Edward/Bella story!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I am glad you are enjoying the story. Yes, there are lots of twists and turns planned out. And I'm all about the canon couples. =) We're just getting started.
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 2: Revelations and Roommates
The full immersion thing sounds good but also ominous, in context. I am wondering what mischief you have up your sleeve for Bella!
And she's living off the property? A governess? Well, that's nice, certainly, I suppose, not to have to be in the same house as her charges.
Author's Response: All has a reason....esp. why Bella lives off property. Chapter 3 explains more. =-)
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Flight
Ooh, and the tension mounts!
A governess? Awesome. I'm excited for her!
I like how you're layering the characters and introducing them slowly. Thank you!
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