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Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Flight
This is so good, I'm loving it so far. xo
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Introduction
I've been looking forward to reading your story, and now that I'm finally here, I'm all excited! xoxo
Author's Response: Welcome! I hope you enjoy Evermore!
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Oh now you gone and done it, let me with a cliffy...i hate those...lol. Wonderful chapter, can't wait to see what Edward does about James...going to me good.
Author's Response: I do apologize for the cliffie--I'm not fond of them, though I do seem to use the device quite a bit! I am working on the next chapter & hope to have it ready around April 8th.
Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Thank you!
Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
This really must have been tough to write and I was really looking forward to how you were going to handle the break down of the enchantment and Bella trying to come to terms with 'reality'. You did very, very well with it. And then you left it on a cliffhanger. *sighs* But I look forward to more. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I truly have Javamomma0921 to thank. She held my hand while I wrote the mini-lemon and was my listening ear when I started plotting the roller coaster ride that this chapter became. I do apologize for the cliffhanger, but it was really a good stopping place to prevent the chapter from being gargantuan.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Oh that was all sorts of wonderful and sucky at the same time! Poor confused Bella! Alice didn't see that happening! And now, there's gonna be a fight, or a kidnapping! I'm on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: That chapter was a rollercoaster ride, wasn't it? I'm working on the next chapter and hope to have it up around April 8th. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 2: Revelations and Roommates
Oh I am looking so forward to this experience. I want to do it to but I guess I will have to live it through your story. I can't wait for tomorrow to see where Edward shows up. So let's get started.
Lilly
Author's Response: I think a lot of people would instantly sign up for this kind of program (myself included!)
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Yikes ..hello pretty girl...
Author's Response: I've already written the first part of the next chapter & you'll immediately know who is in the library. Promise! =)
Reviewer: annmary (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
fantastic chapter! please go on!
Author's Response: I am! *grin* I hope to have the next chapter up around April 8th.
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Yet another great chapter. I am intrigued to know what L has been writing - and Edward! Naughty, naughty, yummy, sexy Edward ...!
Author's Response: Thank you. We'll cover a bit of what's on the laptop but it's much later in the chapter I'm working on & may get bumped. First we have to find out who is in the library!
Reviewer: Emmet Cullen Lover (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
AHHH! i neeeeeed to know wat happens how dare u end it there? :p ahhh hurry up and update like now!!!!
Author's Response: Sorry! I don't mean to cause heartfail. Really. I'm working on the next chapter & hope to have it up around April 8th. ;)
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
More!
Author's Response: I'm working on it! I hope to have the next chapter up around April 8th. =)
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Wow...wow...wow. Loved that they finally gave into their true feelings. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
L is being held in a rock hut cold and damp. Bree and James really don't care what happens to her do they? I'm surprised Alice hasn't had a vision of L in her rock cage. James wants L alive because he is only going to fight one vampire. Bella and Edward discuss Edward being vampire as well as his entire family. Questions asked and answered regarding being a vampire and himself. They both admitted to being virgins and will experience their first time together. The enchantment around Evermore is slipping and Bella has realized that she isn't of this world. It's all fake. Edward isn't real he's part of the mystery around Evermore. She thinks what Edward told her wasn't true it was all staged for the event. Edward trying to tell Bella it is all true. Bella gets up and runs into the library (a favorite place for Bella -- books, books, and more books.) Only to have a surprise person walk into the library. Edward had better move a little faster to save his Bella before James has his way with her in probably all ways. Looking forward to the next chapter with the confrontation between Edward and James. Should be very interesting and entertaining. Kick his bum Edward. Prove your love to Bella whether it's 1827 or 2010. Your feelings towards her are the same. She feels Edward hoodwinked her into losing her virginity as another notch on his belt. Bella must not believe Edward's statement of being a virgin also.
Author's Response: No, James and Bree have no concern for L. And do remember, with the sunshine, the Cullen's cannot easily get to L during daylight hours. During the dark, James and Bree move around (as indicated by the 2 locations L had already been in). As for Bella, she doesn't necessarily feel Edward lied about his status but rather that he lied about his feelings for her. And just who is in the library is covered in the very beginning of the next chapter (which I hope to have up around April 8th)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
Well, I'm not sure where you get inspiration & motivation from, but I'm sure very grateful for it!
Great chapter, their no longer virgins. I don't think Bella gets it that Edward was, he was wasn't he?
Even though he's taking his time walking down to the library I'd think he'd pick up his pace now that he heard someone tell Bella hello, and seemingly masculine in it's choice of words. What a cliffy!
Again, can't wait for more<3
<3
Author's Response: LOL. My inspiration mainly comes from my own head (tho' I did chat out a bit of this last chapter with Javamomma0921 for which I am eternally grateful.) It's a strange and scary place at times. LOL. Yes, it was E's first time as well, hence his confidence slipping quite a bit as they progressed to that point.
As for who is in the library, it is covered immediately in the next chapter which I'm aiming for around April 8th. =)
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Crashing walls
I had been wondering when would L's "enchantment" would really begin to disappear in Bella's case. Sadly, it came at not a very opportune moment. One thing right now is going through my head, how come Edward hasn't realized there's someone else in the Manor? Perhaps his feelings are clouding his mind? With how things have evolved today it wouldn't be such a surprise.
I can see why Bella feels as she does, what can and should she believe? She has been lied to, not only by Edward but by most everyone there. His lies the ones that have to hurt the most of course.
Did she ask about Lord Masen? If she did, what was Edward's answer? I guess probably not since that would be considered another lie.
As for L... whatever she has in that laptop, which she considered harmless, has turned out to be the opposite...
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. As for Edward's lack of hearing...it is covered immediately in the next chapter which will probably go up around April 8th. As for Lord Masen, no that is just another issue Bella's not tackled. Sort of an out of sight, out of mind.
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 22: A revelation comes
I am really enjoying this story! I only started it in the past week and it's completely addictive. So original and creative for fan fic. I am still a little confused over Lord Masen vs. Edward Cullen. I thought Edward was playing both roles, but was confused at the party when he wasn't. I figured maybe Jake was playing Lord Masen that night? Also wondering if Will is really a good guy or in cahoots with James and Bree. Very sweet story and love the mixing of the time periods.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am thrilled you are enjoying EE. You are absolutely right--it was Jacob. Someone else needed to be Lord Masen since Edward wanted to be Bella's escort. As for Will--he is completely good. I wouldn't do that to L. But you're not the first person to ask!
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Deliver de-letter
So what is the name of your book on Amazon? Where is the shameless self permotion one needs to be successful in this buisness? lol
Author's Response: LOL. My book is to remain nameless (sorry)--I like the anonymous life a little more than selling a few more copies of a non-fiction book geared toward teachers and librarians. *wink*
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 5: Hell and a handbasket
Uhm, so confused....
Author's Response: Ut-oh! Stick with the story! I promise things clear up. If they don't, feel free to PM or check out the thread on the AU forum. A lot of the early in the story confusion is cleared up there. =)
Reviewer: Wilt (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 22: A revelation comes
Now the question is will bells be more pissed off that edward is also lord masen, than she was finding out he is a supernatural being. Should be fun. Keep up the great work. I look forward to easch new chappie.
Author's Response: Very true...even I'm not completely sure if Bella will be ticked or relieved. Guess it will all rely on how Edward decides to tell her. Thank you for the review!
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: The Flight
Interesting. Not many stories here are written in third person. Interesting to see from different characters without switching narrators. Though I am still the greatest fan of first person.
Author's Response: Thank you. I personally prefer to write in 3rd person since it allows me to give reactions from everyone without switching back and forth. I just am more comfortable with it and think I'm a better writer in it. I enjoy reading all points of view, though. =)
Reviewer: mallie518 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 01:58 PM · On: Introduction
WOW! This story is awesome! I'm so glad I found it, can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy EE!
Reviewer: right2write (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Introduction
Interesting. Is this a set up is it fate???? Question, she was on an evening flight? When two weeks later??
Author's Response: Heya! You'll learn more about the set up as the story progresses and yes, an evening flight. Hope you continue to enjoy EE!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 22: A revelation comes
Finally! Edward and Bella are talking and if things stay on this course, I see how they can be so happy together. Hopefully Edward can finally find some happiness in his solitary life. Wow. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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