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Reviewer: dinotopian (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2011 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 29: A Modest Proposal
Thank you!
Author's Response: You're welcome!
Reviewer: tashacoleree (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
You're killing me! I love this story to pieces and am dying for an update. Dying, I tell you.
Author's Response: Love this review! Oh, and there will be a sequel...not sure when it will post but Beyond Evermore is in the works. Right now, I have another story (Hands On History) to work on.
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Hope you had fun in N.C. Have some sweet tea and some bar-b-que and take comfort in knowing that just because you have a southern accent doesn't mean your IQ is 10 points lower than everybody else's!
Author's Response: I always have fun in NC! And yes, BBQ and sweet tea make the world a much better place, imho! =)
Reviewer: farsideomoon (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Nice. Good for you.
Thanks for the new chapter update, I love reading this story;D)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: grumpbear (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
i love the scene with rose and edward...very sweet
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing that part.
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Yay! A proposal. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: THank you!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: Get me to the ball on time
I have really liked the last few chapters. I find myself hitting the 'next' button so I can continue reading and thus, not reviewing! So sorry!
There are so many diffferent turn of events....I am so thrilled to be reading this story!
Author's Response: I do the same thing myself so I completely understand. I'm so happy you're reading EE!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 11: Two of a kind
you said you wanted to know about typos......do I found these two. Take from them what you will.
“I do not care if that is what he is sees it as."
She cautiously took the offered arm and gave a wan smile up at Edward.
Love the story so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! I will double check my master copy and make the corrections! I do love it when people catch these things. =)
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 10: Rumors and relations
So can we have access to what you wrote on that site?
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
A good book a gentle breeze and a swing HEAVEN. I can't wait to read more. Oh how I love to loose myself in these stories. This is one of my favorites. It is such a great concept. You have a wonderful time and I will be here when you get back.
Lilly
Author's Response: Am I truly this far behind in responding? Ack! Regardless, thank you...I had a lovely time and I am thrilled you enjoyed EE.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Loved James being twarted at every turn. Phase 2 stopping him from killing the young woman at the coffee shop. Now getting Bella on the airplane safely across the pond home where James can't reach her before the Cullens and friends destroy him for good. That's why Edward doesn't want Bella anywhere close to McCarthy's store this evening. Knowing Bella's she's pretty stubborn he might have a problem on his hands. Will wants L out of danger as well and I know L wants Bella safe as well. Rosalie wants Edward to discuss all aspects of pros/cons of losing humanity vs becoming vampire to Bella before Edward changes her. Rosalie hands Edward something before he leaves the garage. Edward wants Bella to marry him before she leaves Evermore. Down on one knee proposing. That should give her the security she needs that Edward will follow her to the states to collect his wife. He wouldn't marry her and just forget her. She wouldn't just be a fling, she's someone he wants to be with for a long time like forever.
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Oh, that scoundrel knows just what to say to get his way! Swoon! Nothing like a completely unexpected proposal!
Author's Response: Very true. But then, who could say no to an Edward proposal?
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
awwww that was such a sweet ending!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 5: Hell and a handbasket
ok...this just gets stranger and stranger!! I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 4: First day jitters
OK...just so I am not confused.....there was an Edward Cullen that ran into Bella on the street...........and then there is a Lord Masen who's face was covered by a leather mask.
Did I get that right?
Author's Response: That is right!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 3: Back in time and first impressions
i am starting late but happy that i'm starting at all. I love this story so far.....it is really different than anything i've ever read, it's wonderful!
Author's Response: Welcome to Evermore! As far as I'm concerned, I'm just glad you gave it a try! Thank you.
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
James going into a coffee shop was a nice touch. Sadly for him he didn't get hsi fix as Bella was able to a while later. Emmett thinking about getting hernsomething was a good one.
I loved Edward and Rose's conversation and interaction, it was sweet and filled with interest and concern.
James is getting sloppy and Jasper's tech skills are coming in handy.
What happens now? Does someoneleave? Stay?mis there to be a wedding?
Author's Response: I apologize for the delay in responding--By now, you know the answers to all of your questions. Regardless, thank you for your kind review. They make my day!
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 04:23 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
I really have to say that I have enjoyed your story....every chapter. This chapter no exception. It was so sweet. I especially enjoyed a few parts. First, the part with Rosalie was unbelievable. How they have a secret way of talking as brother and sister, as she was holding her car up...lol. It was really enjoyable. I loved how she related her life to Edward's and knew in an instant that Bella would be good for him, and if he ever, ever did anything to hurt Bella, and if he did, he wouldn't be using his junk anymore. Loved it! How she threatened his car if he started talking too sappy, lol. Really written well. She knew Bella was his Emmett. I loved the confrontation at the coffee shop where Esme and Emmett showed up, perfect! And most importantly, how Edward finally got down on one knee. Got to love it! I believe in your writing. Keep giving us more! We'll be waiting.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've always thought Rosalie gets a bum deal in the books and wrote it how I thought it should have gone. Too bad I can't convince a publisher to see it my way & give me a big contract! Ha!
Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
(*laugh*)
“And you were thrown down a set of stairs and through a window, breaking both legs, a few ribs and suffering from extreme blood loss,” Alice chimed in with an unsettlingly happy face for having relayed such grim news. “Oh, after being bitten by James."
Author's Response: I always thought that is how it should have happened. Alice saw it all and very dryly tells all.
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
Yay! I love a wedding!
Still have a pesky vamp to get rid of first though.
Author's Response: James got his in the end. =)
Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
I love what their doing to James. you almost want to feel sorry for him.. NOT. haha.
I hope she says yes to marrying Edward..
My questions is that they made love. is she going to get preg? is there that chance or just a scare? have a great night :)Leona
Reviewer: Nona Cuddles (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
I love what their doing to James. you almost want to feel sorry for him.. NOT. haha.
I hope she says yes to marrying Edward..
My questions is that they made love. is she going to get preg? is there that chance or just a scare? have a great night :)Leona
Author's Response: James is vile. He has to go. As for the pregnancy...you know how that ends up if you've read the rest of the story (and I know you have!)
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
OH wow...
Author's Response: Good wow, I hope! *wink*
Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2011 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 28: Have a little talk with...
ahh, Marry me then go?
sigh
Author's Response: He has to get rid of James! Then he gets his HEA.
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