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Reviews For Paper Cut
Reviewer: Midnight Ariel (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 05:03 PM · On: Paper Cut Part IV

Good story.  Enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: Black Phoenix (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

I found your story recently and love it.

I took the liberty to review it in The Readers Little Corner.You might want to check out on it.

http://thereaderslittlecorner.blogspot.com/

 

 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Paper Cut Part IV

Excellent story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it! 

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:43 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part III

I really like that Alice stands by her principles where humans are concerned and lets Jasper know he has to respect human life. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope that's what Alice would do - she loves Jasper but has her morals, and I think she would have hopefully made a comment like this in NM.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:30 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part II

You've written really excellent action and emotions.  There's one tiny thing I'd like to point out: the word you want is emanating (meaning flowing from) and not emulating (meaning imitating or trying to surpass.) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, and for pointing that out...I'll go fix...

Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

Great descriptive language.  I can feel what Jasper's feeling.



Author's Response:

Thank you1  I worked really hard to write Jasper, and I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: tinmanfan12 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Paper Cut Part IV

It was so sad, I love the stories that are sad cause they really get to you, ya know? Good job!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I tried to do Jasper justice, and I'm so glad  you liked it! 

Reviewer: boulderpa (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

Hi, I read this story on another website not ff.net but another one...And was your first reviewer there with raves, of course, as it appears you've continued (rightfully) to receive here on Twilighted with more readership which is great. I just wnated to make sure you knew how much I really enjoyed your story and make a plug for you to continue it. I know you originally stated that it would be a 3 part fic, but its too lovely to end and its such a unique opportunity to explore the family dynamic through the seasoned and empathic eyes of our beloved Jasper.

I had begged in my reviews on MVF (?oops) for you to take the story forward on into New Moon from Jasper's perspective, shedding more light on Edward's condition and mindset, as well as the rest of the family's experiences which he would've been uniquely positioned to share. I love your Jasper as I am most impressed with fanfic that seems to inform and expand on the original Twi. You do it beautifully. So, please don't stop!



Author's Response:

Well thank you!  I'm really flattered that this fic has gotten the attention that it has - I had no idea that it would.  I just wanted to write a challenge piece that I would normally never do.  Thank you for the sweet reviews and all of your thoughtful feedback - it really means a lot.  I put a LOT of work into this small fic that I didnt' know I would.  This was originally a 2k word piece.  It turned into MUCH MUCH MORE!  I DO plan on writing another longer one-shot for Jasper and Alice that covers a little bit of their time in New York while Edward is gone - I'm hard at work on that, but I have no idea when it will be finished.  I'm hoping to have it up in August sometime, so look for that on *ahem* another site.  It will be posted here, but it will most likely take longer. 

Thanks again for the kind words! : )

Reviewer: life_after_bella (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part III

NOOOO! This is so thrilling. This can't end. Not now. I'm so anxious. I love waiting. NOT!



Author's Response:

haha well thank you!  I'm hard at work on part IV as we speak!  Hopefully the wait will not be long!

Reviewer: life_after_bella (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 09:44 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part II

WOW! So intense! HEHEHEHE. OMG.. moving on to the next chapter as I bite my nails.



Author's Response:

Why thank you : )  It's nice to know I can still write a good cliffie!

Reviewer: life_after_bella (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

Very powerful first chapter. I love the way you write your characters. They're absolutly amazing. This is definatly something others should read. Keep adding more! W00t W00t!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the lovely review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  And yes, I am hard at work on the next chapter! : ) Thanks again bb : )

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2010 09:31 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part II

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP. This was brilliant!! I LOVED THIS! Jasper's thoughts about Alice, loved it. Jasper thinking about how Edward controlled himself, his jealously towards the rest of his family because they were under control. But mostly, I loved how he had to keep checking his eyes, making sure that they were not black.

Oooh. That last bit was amazing! Especially the Wasted. Cannot... be... wasted... part.

I cannot wait for the next chapter!

By the way, you can add the Eternal Hope contributor banner if you like, you can find it in the series. If you scroll down to the bottom there should be some there you can save and upload from other stories :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I really wanted to encorporate as much Alice as I could - she is one of my favorites!  I also wanted to play with how observant Bella is, and the fact that she would have noticed thirsty vampire eyes.   So glad you enjoyed this one!

Reviewer: Ithil_Duin (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 03:32 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part II

Ahhhh!!

I am sure we all know what happens next...but you just have Jasper shown to your readers in such a way I want to hear more.

 

I think your retelling of the birthday disaster (as POV/Jasper) would make Stephanie Meyer proud.

 

Bravo and please write more!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, what a sweet review : )  Thank you so much!  I'm so glad you liked the fic. 

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Paper Cut - Part II

Wow.  SM never really showed us how hard it was for them to be around her.  She spoke of Edward's control, but not of the agony.  You really explained a lot here.  Poor Jasper



Author's Response:

I agree - that's why I chose to explore it a little more.  I think he's a really underplayed character, so it was really great to get to explore him more.  Glad you liked it! 

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 11:18 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

Sorry.. I have to correct myself.

Jasper's thoughts throughout the whole Jasper was just.. Jasper.

*slaps head* 'throughout the whole chapter' not 'throughout the whole Jasper'. I have Jasper on my mind :P



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  lol, no problem with the typo, I got what you meant : )

I would LOVE to be added!  Yes yes yes!  This story is also on FF.net, and all the reviews have been great, I just don't think anyone really knows about it yet.  The next 2 chapters are written, and I'm working on part IV.  I *THINK* that will be the last part...but not sure yet.  Anyway, thank you for the review! : )

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

Brilliant first chapter. You really got into Jasper's mind perfectly. I especially liked how he described things, and the bit about the newborns trying to change a human for a companion. It's the first time I've read that before, so it was a nice add on to the story :)

Jasper's thoughts throughout the whole Jasper was just.. Jasper. There is no other way to explain it. The last part, about how they chuckled to themselves and felt human, only for Bella to walk in and say that they all felt less human. That is true, and I loved that final sentence.

I can't wait for the next chapter, this is going to turn out to be a brilliant little story.

I'd love to add this to my Jalice series called Eternal Hope. Let me know in your reply :)

Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 09:30 AM · On: Paper Cut - Part I

I like this!  I usually stick to the NC-17 stories, but this one caught my eye.  Can't wait to read the rest!

 

 



Author's Response:

First of all, thank you for being my first reviewer!  *yay* you made my day.  And also, it's really flattering to know that you gave it a try - so thank you so much!  I hope you like the rest of it - the next chapter is in the que.

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