Hello ElspethGordie

I have to say I was a bit surprised how hooked I got on this story =) this isn't my usual cup of tea but good god I couldn't stop reading it o.o!!!! Very good story.

Sorry I didn't review on the chapters, I'm the type of reader who reviews at the end (especially if it's a completed story lol) when it's not completed and I'm hooked I usually review, but those fics i tend to steer clear of. Not that I have anything against unfinished fics, but I've had way too many fics I've been addicted to and then just poof ....they stopped being updated. (not twi fics either.....all type of fics =D)

So again great story!!! i'm going back on your chapters now and looking at the fics you've recommended ^.^

Till next time!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! And I completely understand prefering finished fics... I've read a few WIP that have gone on hiatus indefinitely. Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Lurved this - read it all in one night as it was so good. All the chars were great and you really felt for Bella.

Glad James finally got his comeuppance but I would have liked to hear a bit more of the trial and see his just deserts delivered to him etc.

Achilles

Author's Response:

Wow! you read it all in one night! Thanks so much, I'm truly flattered. I agree that if I ever revise it I'll go a little more into the end of it all. Thanks for R&R!

xo Elspeth

ok, now im finished, and again... GREAT STORY, i really am amazed by your portrayal of the characters, i LOVED bella, i usually dont like the bellas in this type of stories, it's a little too much, but this one had spunk! yeah, there was drama, pain, crying, but she never losst herself, she was strong, and her HUMOR! HA! i would love to see YOUR bella... now that i would enjoy... anyways, great great great story... 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed my little story. I'm glad you liked B's voice. I really tried to make her realistic, not over the top but strong and funny. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it ;)

I LOVE YOUR WRITTING!! i love the spirit of bella! i cant stop reading!! ive got to go and i cant stop reading!!! its really good, im looking forward to keep reading!!! congrats!!

i love the edward and bella moment in this chapter!

Oh my goodness!! This story is absolutely amazing!! I started reading this yesterday and I absolutely fell in love with it!! I really hope you will find a way to continue it.. Via sequel or just continuing the story. It is amazing! And the story line is definitely better than most stories on this site!! You are a very talented writer. Lots of love.. Jess

Author's Response:

Thanks so much! That's sweet of you. I'd love to know how you found it since it's been finished for a while. I have a hard time finding stories on this site that are not a WIP. As for continuing the story, I don't have any plans right now. When I finished Untouchable I did create a rough (very rough) outline for what would come next if I got a hankering to come back. But for now, it's done. I'm on to other stories. Keep and eye out in the next few months for another story from me ;) Something different from Untouchable, but hopefully fun nonetheless. Thanks for R&R! xoxo

I love this! Ii especially love your courage in writing about something that is politically incorrect.  I myself have had an abortion and can tell you from personal experience that it is not all its cracked up to be.  I had nightmare about dead babies for 7 years.  I've never really gotten over my "choice".  I was essentially talked into it.  And then it took me 10 yrs to get pregnant when I wanted to be- they don't tell you how it can totally mess your cycle up and all the down sides in addition to the mental anguish.  Maybe is ok for some folks, but I wish I'd had someone on my side back then. 

I almost didn't read it because of the subject matter.  I'm still quite sensitive to anything related to teen pregnancy.  My heart goes out to anyone in a similar position.

Thanks for sharing your story!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks, I really appreciate your honest review. I never set out to be preachy at all with this story. But based on my own thoughts and the character's this is what happened. I'm sorry for your loss and difficulty-- thank you for sharing with me. I'm glad you enjoyed the story! ;) xoxo

Ohh, so sweet!

This story was real and very well written. I relly enjoyed it write to the end. Thanks so much for sharing.

I really enjoyed this story.  It was well written, the grammer and spelling was also on par with the story.  I hope to read more from you.  Thanks for a great read.

Just found your story for the 1st time today and read it in one sitting. It was really great and I'm so glad you decided to post it! I thought the way that Bella continued to struggle with her PTSD issues all through the story was very believable. I'm also glad that you didn't try to 'pretty things up' by having her and Renee experience some magical reuinion where all was glossed over and forgotten. I hope to see you begin another story soon - hopefully your writing brings you as much happiness as reading it does for all of us!

This is a beautiful story.  Thank you so much for sharing it. I am sad that it is over.

I'm glad that Bella is so healthy now.  It is so great to see her in such a good pleace emotionally.

I would love to see an outtake of Bella and Edward telling Cara they are getting married.  Maybe Edward could ask Cara if he could be her daddy.  Just a thought.

LMFAO!!! I LOVE Charlie He Came In With A Fucking Gun In His Had, Way To Go Daddy-O, Protecting His Daughter. You Gotta Love It