Wow, that was fantastic.  It should have been in new moon!  It was so well-written and helps explain not just their feelings, but their compatibilty and really makes Edward & Bella seems more likable than they are in the beginning of New Moon.  

I really enjoyed it! Thanks!

Author's Response:

What a wonderful review! Thank you, folm. I appreciate it more than I can say. Meyer left a lot unexplored in the series, so I had fun adding some depth to this scene. Thanks once again!

This was really good :) Especially this line: He could watch a thousand romantic movies with her, whispering the lines seductively in her ear, but he could never be a normal boy for her.

He couldn’t even kiss her properly.

That was a little sad.. Edward really wants to give her more, but he is so unsure of himself. Especially in this part. For me the 'Romeo and Juliet' movie was really important in New Moon.. it was a good explanation of what happened later in the book.

Also.. I liked the part when they quote :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind review, vegeterianvamps! I completely agree with you. The Romeo and Juliet scene was crucial to New Moon in foreshadowing what was to happen next. It's actually one of my favorite scenes in the book, so I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks once again! :)