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Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

edward empiza a notar a bella y quiere saber todo de ella yo creo que si edward deberia hacer preguntas a bella sobre si tiene novio o no 

 



Author's Response:

 

TRANSLATION: (Microsoft Word): Edward emissao notice to beautiful and want to know all of it I think that if Edward should ask questions to Bella about whether you have boyfriend or not

 

 

A/N: Hi! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I so love that he is starting to see Bella differently than he first did.  It is great that Edward is noticing his feelings about her and towards her.  Also, I loved that he is notice of her physically and his reaction to her.

I was surprised that he shared the story about Cynthia with Bella.  It is just so sad.  Edward's memorial/tribute to her is amazing.

I really enjoyed this chapter.  I am looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

 

Hey, bb! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and Edward's efforts at building Cynthia a memorial. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: nadiaa30 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

good work :) was excited to read the next chapter but there is none :( lol

i love how mr cullen is really warming up to bella

whats gonna happen sunday night??



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and are keen for more! ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for the lovely rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: VAMPIRE JO (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Love the story! And love Supernatural (should have reviewed previous chap) and that car (with Dean or Sam behind the wheel)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and the previous one! LOL. Pleased you like Supernatural, too ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I think that in life we have all met people that we bond with from the get go and these people generally become our really good friends.  I really like that Edward finds Bella easy to talk to.  But even more so I like that she listens and is able to be herself, for the most part.  The general ease and comfort between them is fun to read and I find myself very excited when I see an update notice in my inbox.

Sandra



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and can relate with Edward's attraction to her, despite him only "really" knowing her for a few days. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I had noticed that he'd transitioned from thinking of her as a girl to as a woman.  I love that his mind is being intruiged by her instead of just allowing his body to do dictate the attraction, thus keeping things shallow.  I adore a deeper connection.  I'm feeling more and more optimistic that he'll value that they formed an attraction for eachother, not status and so not be mad that she deceived him.  Her treating him professionally should count for someting.  Think it's gonna be hilarious when he realizes he accused her of being so unobservant when he's the epitome of the word himself in reguards to her! :D

Oh, yeah!  I think the bf Q would eat at him until he either blurted it out or takes the bull by the horns and asks her. 

So poignant about Cynthia.  Loved the symbolism of the fish.  I'm thinking a fourth one is going to make an appearance.  *wide grin*  Wondering if Rose did something to cause the loss of the baby or someother circumstance that makes E's blood boil more than simply mourn her loss.  At very least I'm thinking Rose acted like either the loss didn't matter or was for the best or something that demeaned the loss in E's eyes.  Look forward to learning about the remainder of the reason for his typical reaction.

Really adored this chapter!!  Excellent revelations and progressions in their relationship.  The changes in his thoughts reguarding her all but have me giddy for her! :D

Looking forward to the call to "Marie" soon and even more to what all else the next chapter will bring!!!

Thanks for writing and sharing!!!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) I absolutely love your long reviews as you pick up on the most poignant things. Thrilled that you're keen for more and love hearing your predictions! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

That was a really good chapter. I'm glad the story of Cynthia was told but I'm kinda curious as to what caused her die. I'm also glad to hear Edward is starting to see Bella as a woman and not just a nanny. I think he should have a roundabout way of getting the 'boyfriend' question answered, maybe get Emmett to ask suddenly during the game, that would be funny. Eagerly awaiting next chapter. ^_^



Author's Response:

 

Hey, bb! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and learning more about Edward's past. There is more to the story of Cynthia which we'll find out about soon. Love your suggestion! Keep 'em coming ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for the lovely rating. You're too kind!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: Emily-Masen (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I think edward should ask bella the boyfriend question,because then he might be all nervous,and it will be funny to read..I think the Cynthia part was really sad...but hopefully now that edward has told bella that,she might open up too him with her past=]



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and seeing Edward open up to Bella. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for your fantastic rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: lsu_mommy (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 08:45 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Yes, he should ask the 'boyfriend' question! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Hey Nyomi:

  He is falling for her!! Can't wait for the baseball game w/ Emmett.

I love the way this story is coming along.

Thanks for writing. I also started following you on twitter. My twitter name is twicrazreader if you want to follow me.

Marie



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Marie! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and are looking forward to the weekend BBQ. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for your fabulous rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Very good chapter you wrote the Cynthia tragedy very tenderly and I'm looking forward to Edward exploring his feeling for her I defiantly think he should ask her about a bf, but subtly. More please soon

Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for your lovely rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: Jorey (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I enjoy these quiet times between Edward and Bella. It makes the story more natural and flows well.

Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and them quietly getting to know each other more. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: DecoyDream (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I think Edward SHOULD ask the boyfriend question just to stir things up a little bit.It should be awkward. 

I loved the bit where "Eddie down there" stirred a bit while Bella touched the car. Yummyness



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and Edward's... stirring when Bella touched his car. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: Tina02 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Great chapter.
Glad that Edward was able to talk about Cynthia to Bella.
Will Edward be seeing more/less of Bella when Rose returns from her trip?
Can't wait to read what will happen next.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Unfortunately, Edward only sees Bella twice a week for Henry's piano lesson while Bella and Henry live with Rose. Rose is due back next Wednesday. ;( Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: Jessybubblz (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2010 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Aaaaaaaw (: i luv this story soo much!!!

Thanks for always updating so much, its really great.

Could I preeeetty please have a teaser?

x



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: JustHereToReview (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Awesome story! I just started it today and I just couldn't get away from the computer, I just wanted to keep on readin'! Edward should probably ask her just for it to add comedy, so he;d probably do it when he's a bit tipsy ;] Keep up with the great work!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far and enjoyed the chapter. Loads more fun in the bag for these two! ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: emmw (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Awww poor Edward i wanna hug him till the pain go away,shame for me that he is allready taken even if he doesn't want to admit it but the fact that he share with Bella about the baby even if it was just the surface well that was a big deal.And about if Edward should ask her about a boyfriend well ibelieve he is going to do it but not straight forward but in a casual way he is pretty sneaky when he wants.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and seeing Edward share a bit about his past with Bella. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND for your lovely rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: SuperFrog101 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Wow that is so sad, such a good chapter



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND your fabulous rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: fangrl17 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Yay! another amazinggggggggggg chapter!! Also the Impala was brought into this chapter again! :D lol  Very happy with the progression of this chapter Edward is starting to see Bella as woman & more of a person instead of jus his son's nanny. i also like that he's starting to have certain feelings for lil 'ol Bella. I would LOVE to see Edward ask bella the boyfriend question, not only becuz it will make Bella wonder y it matters to him but also becuz  i wood love to see how he wood being up the question or jus bring bout askin her the question lol makes me think that itll jus b hilarious hehehe so cant wait for the next chapter i no its goin 2 b great and thanx for always posting those pictures along with the chapters they really help with getting into the story & i jus love lookin at that gorgeous house lol thanx :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and the reemergence of the Impala - it's certainly not gone for good! LOL. Glad you liked the progression and seeing Edward's views towards her change, and that you liked the photos again. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I loved the chapter! So glad Edward's getting rid of the cold shoulder treatment. Poor, poor Cynthia. The loss of a child at any age is a terrible thing.

I wonder when Edward would even have the oppertunity to ask Bella about her relationship status. Maybe another late night couch session? Maybe they will take a stroll down the shore with Henry?

Always excited for more!

~Tay



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. I love hearing the questions and thoughts you have for the future! ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: helpless_12 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I really am enjoying this story! Please update soon! And I hope Edward does ask Bella about a boyfriend

Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

I think he should ask her if she has a boyfriend.

I feel for him regarding his daughter. My first pregancy was a miscarriage and you never get over that pain.

Excellant story



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter, and I'm so sorry to hear about your own miscarriage. My heart goes out to you, bb.  

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing AND rating. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: deleepowman (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

Edward is finally seeing Bella as a woman instead of just a girl and he feels at ease around her, can relax and enjoy spending downtime with her and trusts her enough now to share "his workshop", his love of cars, and to tell her about Cynthia. I think if their relationship keeps progressing like this, he may find himself more drawn to Bella than Marie



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and seeing Edward's changed perceptions of Bella! ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

So nice that they are getting along well! The secret is still safe!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Yes, LOL, the secret is still safe ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

Reviewer: marrisa (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2010 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

yes! they're finally...friends? well they like each other which is awesome. can't wait for the next chapter...when is the chapter with 'marie' and edward talking coming? great job!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter and are excited for more. ;) Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means the world!

 

Hope you enjoy this short but important snippet from chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations, from Edward:

 

Going to Henry's bedroom window, I grasped the curtains to draw them closed, but I paused when movement out of the corner of my eye caught my attention. Looking down to the left, towards the pool, I froze, my hands fisting the heavy drapes. My breath caught in my throat and my heart began pounding wildly.

 

I could see...

 

Bella.

 

Swimming.

 

In a bikini.

 

Fuck.

 

 

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