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Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

oh yes, perfection   Thank You



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know your thoughts :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

Oohh, I love reading Edwards POV! Poor Bella, i bet she was just dying to jump him there and then!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know your thoughts :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

Well, I'm in the same boat as E and B both at the moment, sobbing and worked up! ;D

My (not so inner) perv self is down right pissed at her being a fraidy cat, but the rest of me is enjoying the build and agrees they have some more hurdles to cross before they can sucumb joyously to eachother.  Be pretty handy to have them get married and E get custodial custody of Henry.  ;P

Holy HOTNESS, bb!!!!!!

Whoo.  Gonna go seek the shower in a minute and may just take the kids to the beach for a LONG soak in the COLD water! 

She's feeling rejected when he didn't mean it like that, and he's doing the flip side as well.  Very well done and logical, and appropriately frustrating for those of us getting to ride along inside their heads! lol

Makes me tripply eager for the contact with "Marie" he'd been promised.  I'm back to wondering if he'll be pissed that she decieved him or relieved.  Probs a bit of both, but think initially at this point pissed would win.  With his escalating feelings I think he'd be glad to have verification that she'd not behave in the way that had him make his "no employees" rule, but he may have to think on it abit to get to a place to see that, eh?  LOVE that he's attracted to her as a person now and not just as a body and sexual experience.  Wonder if at some point he'll realize he wants Bella more than "Marie"?  That might be a nice solution.  Morally she needs to come clean, though, hungh?  *sigh*  Know I'll like what you do whatever it is since I'm loving everything so far!!

Thanks for writing and sharing, bb!!!

(aka RosaBella75)



Author's Response:

 

Hey, bb! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing again and for letting me know your thoughts about what they should do - always great to hear! Thanks also for the vote of confidence and the encouragement, it means so much to me :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

OMG Nyomi:

    MY heart is pounding so hard.  I was excited for both of them letting go and then they had to go a THINK!!! Shit well I guess we get to watch the uncomfortable next morning!! LOL  i still think the attraction will be hard for both and i really think he is falling for her and i guess round 2 when he finds out she was Marie!!  Ok now I am going calm my heart down.

Thanks for writing and I really really love this story.

Marie

twicrazreader



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Marie! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing, rating and for letting me know your thoughts, as always - you're fab :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: cemcclelland (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

Blocked by the damn glasses! I hope they can get it together soon! I am loving the angst, I have to tell you. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know your thoughts :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

I loved this chapter!

I think the morning after will be a little awkward for both of them. But, I have a feeling that they'll get through it...and either one or both of them will be hurt due to denying what happened between them.

I wonder when Edward will figure out that Bella is Marie...

Looking forward to your next update!!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing, rating, and for letting me know your thoughts :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

I loved the small insight into Bella's past. Its quite an intriguing sub-plot and I can't wait to read more of it.  Also the story regarding how Edward received his injury was quite heartbreaking but beautifully portrayed.

The massage was seriously hot! Very sensual and wonderfully written. The desire pooling off of them both was so tangible and expressed well. It ended perfectly with bringing back Bella's fear of Edward realising she is Marie. I absolutely loved this chapter and think this even tops the Edward/Marie stuff at the beginning. Its my favourite chapter yet.

Great job!
~Anna-Margaret
xx



Author's Response:

 

Hello again, Anna-Margaret! I'm thrilled you enjoyed the chapter so much! That was music to my ears. lol. Thank you so much for reviewing again and letting me know that the glimpse into Bella's past has sparked your curiosity. Your analysis of the chapter was spot on as well :-) 

 

Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

I loved it!  can't wait to see how and when they will really get together!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and letting me know your thoughts :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

It was better than what I was hoping for!!! So sensual, I loved it. Can't wait for that first real kiss, it's going to kill them, and me!!!



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter and that it was more than what you'd hoped for! Thank you so much for reviewing  :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: wetgirlie (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

wow. lol i love this story!!!! keep it up:P



Author's Response:

 

Hey! I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thank you so much for reviewing and for your awesome rating :-) Chapter 12 is coming really soon, but here's a little taste to wet your appetite until then! It's from Bella:

 

My smile faltered as I got the feeling I was being watched. Cautiously, I raised my eyes and was instantly met with Edward's twinkling gaze. His happy expression quickly vanished, replaced with one of indifference as he stood behind the far end of the island counter. He looked down at the countertop, loudly clearing his throat, his eyebrows knitted together in a tight frown. His serious demeanor instantly engulfed us in an uneasy, awkward silence.

 

Quickly helping Henry to his feet, I dragged myself up from the floor, brushing my jeans off and straightening my plaid flannel shirt. I tried to ignore how my chest was constricting around my rapidly beating heart while nervousness rolled coldly in my stomach. The lighthearted and cheerful atmosphere quickly became so heavy and tense, it was suffocating.

 

 

Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

Shoes ??? REALLY SHE EQUATED THAT HOT NIGHT OF SEX TO SHOES??? Oh well I guess that's better than an outfit or food!!But I would have gone with a car!!! great story can't wait for more!!!!   :)

Reviewer: pencilitout (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

UH OH. I love this story so flippin much...



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

I spent the last hour playing catch up and what a treat!! :) Can't wait to see how this massage goes. Actually.... I can't wait to see Edward's reaction when he gets to talk to "Marie" on Sunday.

Author's Response:

 

Hey, bb! Thank you so much for reading, rating and reviewing again. I'm thrilled that you're still enjoying the story! :D   

 

Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: JustHereToReview (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

wonderful chapter... as for the next chapter... maybe its time for marie to cave and give an early call...



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: Lisa254 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Supernatural

Hi there! It's me again--your slow reader. Ha ha :-)

I really loved this chapter. It was so nice to see Edward and Bella just being themselves and getting to know each other. 

And I can really relate to the age thing. I'm 23 and I often have people thinking I'm still in high school! I really hate it. I ALWAYS have to show my ID to order a drink. *sigh* Sorry. I know you probably don't really care, but I had to get that out, lol. 

Anyway, great job as always, and I look forward to reading more when I get a chance!



Author's Response:

Hey Lisa!!! So glad you're still here. :D Thank you as always, for the wonderful review and rating!

So glad you could relate to Edward's perception of Bella being younger than she was! I'd love to feel sorry for you, (lol) but now that I'm 30, I wish I looked younger. :D Ah, the joys of life! Thank you for continuing to read, and I look forward to hearing from you soon! Take care, bb. Nyomi xx

Reviewer: destiny4eva (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

I lovd this chapter n I cnt wait 2 read the nxt 1.

I dnt kno y, but i hav a feelin that the tables may turn in l8r chapters n it will be Edward strugglin 2 keep his cool around Bella.

I cnt wait 2 read more :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for rating! :D I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter and are eager for more! Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: anna272 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

Yep, this is a goodie, I'm hooked. Feel like we're all getting a little insight into the mind of Jude Law!

p.s. must say, when I read:

"Am I really going to spy on her?

Yes. Yes, I am."

I totally pissed myself. Don't know why, but I found that really funny.



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter and thank you for sharing your favorite part! So glad it tickled your funny bone! LOL. :D

 

Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: megster8919 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

Your story has got me hooked! Can't wait for the next update :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter and are hooked on the story! :D Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: ariesgirl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

i'm really enjoying this story,looking forward to seeing what's ahead



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: fangrl17 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

Ok so i HAVE to see wat happens during the massage! and poor Bella she coodnt get those expensive Edward Shoes :(  i cant wait for the next chapter & teaser ! lol I loved that lil edward & Henry Scene hahahahahaha Henry has NOOOOOOOO idea wat his father was doin lol cant wait for the next chapter More Bella & Edward!!!!!!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeeeeee w/ an Impala on top :D

 



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Since you offered an Impala on top!!! LOL. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing again, it's so good to hear your thoughts. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter and Edward's interaction with Henry! Glad you understood the shoe talk, too. LOL. :D

 

Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

aw great  part :)



Author's Response:

 

Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing as well as the lovely rating!:D I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter! Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 9: Fish & Chevy's

aww edward likes bella eh?

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 06:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Failed Expectations

wow i cant believe he doesnt recognize bella. thanx for the pics too.

Reviewer: AlysLuv (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: Ooooh Yeah!

great part

Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 10: Cryptic Conversations

So, is Bella talking about her time as Marie with Edward as something she tried but had to give back? Loved the chapter. Hearing about Cynthia's garden, created out of love by Edward to remember his dead baby was so beautiful but sad. I loved how much detail he'd put into it. Reading about him spying on Bella while swimming was great, he's beginning to see her as more than just Henry's nanny. Let's just hope they get it together soon. Mmm wonder what will happen with the massage? Love this story. hugs Clare x



Author's Response:

 

Hey, Clare! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the chapter and enjoyed the amount of effort and thought that Edward put into Cynthia's memorial garden! Glad you enjoyed him peeping (ha ha) and that he's starting to see her more than the nanny. :D

Here's a little taste of what's to come shortly. It's Chapter 11: Massage. In Bella's view:

 

"So... er... you still want me to give you a massage, or what?" I asked, half expecting him to tell me not to worry about it.

 

He smiled, raising his brow. "Are you sure that's okay? I wouldn't usually... But my shoulder is killing me."

 

I nodded. "Of course it's okay. I wouldn't have offered if...." My voice tapered off. This was really happening. I was actually going to touch him again.

 

"Thanks. I truly appreciate it. So... how do you want me?" His lips twitched, and if I didn't know any better, I'd swear he enjoyed placing that little innuendo in there. My nether region certainly liked it.

 

"Uh..."

 

I honestly didn't know how I was going to do it. Should I ask him to lie on his stomach, so I could sit on his butt? He had such a cute, tight ass... I remembered squeezing it so many times the other night... I even recalled biting him. He was just too delicious. I hadn't been able to help myself.

 

But just thinking of me sitting on him, my girly parts so close to his... My mouth went dry.

 

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