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Reviews For Bella? Marie?
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

good chapter....

Reviewer: yanebrouillard (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 14: Deja vu

It's going to get ugly.....  I'm all nervous! Glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: shegoddess (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 3: Failed Expectations

great house!!! Bella is funny.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Excellant

Her dad is a jerk. I work with abused kids and see so called parents ( I use that term losely) pick another over their kids everyday. There is no going back.

Reviewer: yanebrouillard (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 11: Massage

Delicious!  Con't wait for them to hook up again!  And I wonder how he'll react when he finds out she is Marie...  They would make a great little family!  Once Rose and Uncle Emmie get together, of course...  love it!

Reviewer: sperrin17 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I LOVE this story!.... soo cute!

Reviewer: yanebrouillard (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls

Love it! Great story! Great writing! Interesting and original plot!  I like how you displaced Twilight details too, like her truck and his Volvo! Makes your story more original! It's noce and sunny outside today and here I am reading.... goes to show!

Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

incredible update soooooooooooooon please!

Reviewer: bellamie (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Welcome back! I've been checking almost everyday for a new update and so thrilled to see a new chap. I hope they will reconnect soon. Their first encounter was amazing. They are good together and Henry is the icing in the cake. He is a joy. Looks like you will be having a busy shedule ahead of you. Please find time to finish this amazing story. How many more chaps to go? 

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Great update! Thank you.

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

very very very good keep going and post soon

bye bye

Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Very nice I love that they are opening up to each other, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

OMG I'm so glad he has feelings for Bella and possibly more that just sex Henry loves her and I think Edward is starting to .Why cant he have someone to make him happy she 's not going to be Henry's nanny for long..Will stick with you to the end this is a great story and don't want to miss anything!!!

Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

next time will be soon, right? RIGHT?????? So good.

Reviewer: muldergirl (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Finally..he GETS it. Sheesh!!! LOL

Reviewer: PosyThatsMe (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I love this story, I can't wait for the next chapter.. I want to hit myself for being so unoriginal about this review, sorry.. I hope you're well ;)

 

~Posy (Isabelle)

Reviewer: Twijules (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Oh it was so sweet, but Sue must suffer and Charlie needs to feel just a little pain.

Reviewer: WhitePen (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I thought for sure Edward was going to dig himself into a huge hole.  I'm glad he didn't.  Can't wait to see what he does with his newfound realization. 

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I am glad she came back and Henry is just wonderful. Maybe now these two can move on and let themselves fall in love . Love your story . Till next time.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

I am glad she came back and Henry is just wonderful. Maybe now these two can move on and let themselves fall in love . Love your story . Till next time.

 

Lilly

Reviewer: mada (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 03:08 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

fantastic as always.... what a sh*t Charlie is - and dont get me started on Sue !!!!    Glad to see Henry happy again - look forward to next time.

Reviewer: NornIronGirlie (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Such an emotional chapter! Finally we get Bella's backstory and it was very sad indeed. Poor poor Bella. At least though it helped kick Edward's mind back into place and realise that having Bella as his fuckbuddy was most definitely not his best idea ever :P

Fabulous chapter that was very well written. Great job!
~Anna-Margaret
xx

Reviewer: oxyymoronic (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

aww what edward said made me fell all warm and fuzzy and happy :D 

thank goodness, he's not just thinking of her as just...you know.. a fck buddy.

ugh charlie is such an ass! sue too! grr..

Reviewer: oxyymoronic (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

aww what edward said made me fell all warm and fuzzy and happy :D 

thank goodness, he's not just thinking of her as just...you know.. a fck buddy.

ugh charlie is such an ass! sue too! grr..

Reviewer: rreader (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 18: My Exception

Love the quirk to the Charlie/Sue relationship was't expecting that but I like it.

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