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Reviewer: BELLAxMOMENT (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens!
Author's Response: Hey! Pleased you're enjoying the journey and are keen for more! Thanks for reviewing!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: MandMCandy09 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I continue to LOVE this story. I cant wait for more updates. Keep up the awesome writing!
Author's Response: Hey! Soooo glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reviewing - it means the world :) Hope you like chapter 8, too! Here's a taste...
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: kareedelane (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Wow...the shit in the pot gets deeper and deeper!! I love drama (when its fictional), but please don't torture Bella for too long!
Author's Response: lol. What makes you think I'd torture, Bella? *evil laugh* :) Glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for reviewing. Here's a taste of what's to come...
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: ggmt (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I LOVE this story. Can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response: Hey! So pleased you're enjoying the story - and it's only just started! lol. Here's a taste of what's to come...
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
LOL, interesting. Seems like stalkerish tendencies to me. If its only Wednesday and she won't call till Sunday...wonder what will happen in between. *evil grin*
Author's Response: Awww girl! You pick up on so much! lol. Love your evil grin! :) But you're right, a lot can happen between now and then - but that's all I'm saying. *Hides under desk* See you next time sweetie, and thanks again for reviewing and for those gorgeous stars!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: mom2bells1 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Cute story! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hey! So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for your review and for the lovely stars. You're wonderful :) Hope you enjoy chapter 8, too!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: envy (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Wow... this is so going to get very tricky and messy for Bella.
Author's Response: Hey again, envy! Glad you can see what Bella can't just yet. Lots of excitement to come! :) Thanks again for reviewing :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: fangrl (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Holy Smokes! What is she going to do on Sunday night?
Author's Response: Hey fangrl! Thanks for reviewing! I can't give away trade secrets, but I can say that things are going to get very, very interesting. *winks* Hope you enjoy chapter 8, too :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: indiainksky (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
The plot thickens...can't too wait how Bella pulls off being Marie again. Oh, but Edward is so blind...
Author's Response: Hey! so pleased you're excited to see how it works out! Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy chapter 8, too :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: renesalecau (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
haha! desperate times call for desperate measures for poor little whippedward!
Author's Response: Hello again! lol. Love you're whippedward name! Poor guy. He's getting desperate and it's not helped when he's got a woman living with him that reminds him of Marie! :) Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy chapter 8!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: bellanote (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
This just keeps getting better and better! Keep up the good work!!:)
Author's Response: Hi bellanote! So pleased you're enjoying the story! Thank you so much for your review and for the rating! It means the world ;)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: janell (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I can't wait for their phone call on Sunday night.
Author's Response: Hey janell! Glad you're excited for more! Things are going to get a lot more interesting, so hang on! :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: arian134 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
nice very nice i really love the story update soon please!
Author's Response: Hey arian134! So pleased you're enjoying the story. Thanks for your review, it means the world! Hope you enjoy chapter 8, too :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: Paige Parkker (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I didn't want the chapter to end!! It's funny that Edward saw so much of Marie in Bella ... it will be interesting to see how you have him clue in.
Great chapter!!
Author's Response: Hey again! So glad you're excited for more and that you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy chapter 8, too!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: ladybird2 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Hi Nyomi:
Oh this is getting good. I can't wait for game night w/ the Cullen's . Is Bella going to get tipsy and show a little of Marie that Night????
Can't wait for more and thanks for wiriting,
Marie
twicrazreader
Oh and I so glad that her sexy side is my name too!! LOL
Author's Response: Hello again, Marie! So pleased you enjoyed the chapter and I love hearing your suspicions! Thanks again for your review and for the wonderful rating - it means the world :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: cullenscougar (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Oh boy, this is getting a little complicated isn't it? See, it never pays to lie. One little lie grows into one huge one, followed by another. But I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter. hugs Clare x
Author's Response: Hey Clare! You're right about the lying escalating. It's something Bella certainly didn't anticipate, but who does? Now she's going to have to live with the consequences. So pleased your enjoying the story, and thank you heaps for your review!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: soccergirl23 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I just love this story!! I can't believe Edward stole Ben's phone, I guess he couldn't get Angela's phone number from Ben, but still that's pretty extreme. Angela should tell Ben and get Edward in trouble.
Author's Response: Hey again! So pleased you're enjoying the story! Yeah, poor Edward is getting desperate. Not helped when he has a woman living with him. lol. In case you accidentally missed it; Ben was waiting outside the bathroom for Edward to give him back his phone, so Ben knew what Edward was doing, but they're friends so it's all fun. :) Hope you enjoy chapter 8 - in being validated now.
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: joss859 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I love how he is so desperate for her! Looking forward to Sunday evening and the phone call! How on earth is Bella ever going to untangle everything?
Author's Response: Hello again! Glad you're enjoying his desperation, I think it makes us women sigh with longing, LOL! Love that you're excited for what's to come - be prepared for some tension and UST! That's all I'm saying. :) Thanks again for your review...
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: breaking dawn 84 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
que lio!bueno edward encerrado en el bano y robando el movil de ben me muero de la risa ahora bella va a empezar a hablar por telefono con edward y todo se va a complicar
Author's Response: Translated by Microsoft Word: that mess! good edward locked up in the bathroom and stealing ben mobile me die laughing now bella is to begin to speak by phone with edward and everything is going to complicate
A/R: So glad you enjoyed the bathroom scene! Things are certainly going to get complicated, so hang on for the ride :) Thanks again for your review, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter. :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: cranberryblue (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Oh my gosh. This is brilliant. I want you to write more, you need to, I have become addicted to your writing and it makes me smile. You feel the anticipation and all of the emotions, and Big C, desperward is brilliant.
Catch you next chapter.
x
Author's Response: Hello! So pleased you're enjoying the story. Your review made ME smile! lol. Thank you for your review and for the wonderful rating! Glad you're excited for more... Here's a taste -
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: Nikki0684 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Loved the chapter, I am just hoping that he will start to be attracted to Bella more and more, but also to figure out that Bella is Marie, hopefully sooner than later. Thank you for the story :)
Author's Response: Hey! So glad you enjoyed the chapter! I love hearing what you want to happen, but my lips are sealed. lol. Thank you for your review and wonderful rating. It means the world :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: emmw (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
oh i love how things are getting,but the more the charade last the more likely that shit is going to hit the fdan very ugly i'll be on the edge of my seat by the time that happens!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey again, emmw! So glad you enjoyed the chapter, and are anxious/excited for what's going to happen between these two. Lots more to come, I can guarantee you! :) lol. Thanks again for your review and rating - it means so, so much :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: cdgilman17 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
Yay! I agree, shorter chapters but more often is what I like! Will she get to be Marie again over the phone? Will she get to be Marie again IN PERSON?!!?!?! They're both acting as 2 different people, hiding who they really are from each other. Bella is a little bit of Bella and Marie, and same goes for Edward. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hey Collete! I love reading your reviews every time as you tell me how you understand the characters! :) Thanks BB xx
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
EXCELLANT
Author's Response: Hello again, hc4metal! I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter! Love seeing your review every time :) Thanks again for your encouraging rating and hope you enjoy chap 8!
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
Reviewer: Cullenbychoice (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 7: Cake & Calls
I like this story more for every chapter :) thank you for writing
Author's Response: Awww. So glad you're liking it more and more! Thank you for your kind review and encouragement. :)
Enjoy the teaser for chapter 8, from Bella:
Suddenly his eyes scorched a meandering path from my Chucks, up my jeans and the front of my hoodie then over my glasses and hair. I felt my entire body inundate with warmth, like his eyes had the power to ignite my blood into lava. Holding my breath, I bit my lip again, hard.
Don't jump him, don't jump him.
"If I had to guess," he muttered, "I'd say you were... nineteen?"
My mouth opened as I gasped. No wonder he thinks I'm not trustworthy. He thinks I'm still a teenager.
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