w00t!! New reader! I love how it's a Leah fic, there should be more--Stephenie really left us out in the open on Leah. The beginning was excellent- everything just flowed and it didn't seem like you put in random things to make the story move foward or whatnot. Now Leah has been in the hospital since then so I understand how that flow can't really happen, but try to keep up that seamless storyline as it progresses. That is what made me read this in one sitting :) I really can't to read more, you have a lot of potenital at the moment- Luke becoming a vamp, the werewolves, Voltouri, Leah's and Luke's relationship, etc. I love that :) Keep it up!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm always excited to hear story praise, lol. And thanks for complementing my "flow" of the story line. I'm one of those people who could never write an AU story or anything because then I thinks it's just more of an original story than a fan fiction. I just thought that Steph Meyer obviously knew what she was doing when she wrote Twilight, so I should write my story as close to hers as possible. I know that puts a damper on all those ppl who wanted to hear about "Bella and Edward's Amazing Threesome Love Fest on the Moon", but I doubt Steph Meyers would ever have prudish Edward join in a threesome...or go to the moon for that fact.

great chapter... i love leah!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! 

Great chapter and great fic altoghter  It amazes me now much you made me care about Leah as a person.   The interactions with Edward and Carlisle are perfect and I cant wait to see what happens when they get Luke home and introduce him to the Cullens     or see how Jake responds to this.

 

One question though,  Where are Leah and Seth staying? Leah slept in the woods and is apparently out of cloths   so are they living in the woods outside the Cullens,  traveling back and forth to their moms?   Just seems like the Cullens could find a place for them   at least get a RV or somthing.

Author's Response:

Yeah, the whole "Jake reaction" is prolly comin up soon. Maybe in the next three chapters. And let me tell ya, it's gonna be interesting. As for your question: Before Seth and Leah went to the hospital they had been staying at home, on the reservation. After BD the two packs were at peace with one another and I'm assuming that meant that Leah and Seth were allowed to go home when they needed a place to crash. Plus, Quil and Embry joined Jake's pack at the end of BD as well so that definitely left Leah and Seth with more free time to be away from the Cullen house. Other than that, I suppose they just sleep in the woods.

I just read through this whole story.  It is so intriguing!  I'm adding to my favorites and will definitely be keeping up with it.  Please keep writing and update soon!

Author's Response:

Sweet! Thanks, I'm glad you like it, I'll try and update ASAP

Transition or not, I liked this chapter.  For a multitude of reasons.

1) thank you so much for not having the love be immediate on Luke's part.  While I understand the imprint on Leah's side, I like the more realistic view Luke took on loving her.  I loved it.  Really.

2) Edward and Leah crack me up.  Way more than anything should.

3) Edward just amused me in this entire chapter.  I love the ease with which he undid the wires and I'm glad he was mouthing back off to Leah; the tone (to me, at least) still seemed playful which I liked after the last chapter with the two of them.  And his comment about egos not being able to explode was so great and I could pretty much hear Edward saying that in my head.

4) I'm from NJ and work in NY. And I type out y'all all the time.  And it's so not me but I just can't HELP it sometimes.

<3ed this and can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Okay, I like this review for a multitude of reasons:

1) I hate it when people just randomly fall in love!

"hey, you have pretty hair."

"your eyes are blue"

"I LOVE YOU! HAVE MY CHILDREN!!!"

"ME TOO! WHY DID YOU WAIT SO LONG TO ASK?"

thank you for agreeing with me, we should be friends

2) that ego comment made me crack up too...is that lame, that I laughed at my own joke? Probably, whatever.

3) y'all is an awesome word and should be universal

4) plus your reviews are so awesome that it's ridiculous 

Wow I like this funny filler chapter!

"Four, Belgium, green, lasagna, supercalifragilisticexpialidocious."

That was funny cause while reading it I stoppe dlike what and bust out laughing once i continued I kind of snorted a quick chuckle  I too thought maybe he had gone mad for a split second hahahahaha!  Awesome post again soon I hope Luke still has feelings for her after her change.  I am so excited to see thios go on!

wow, i am addicted, please post more, it is so good.You really have developed Leah into an amazing lead character, well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks :-) I hope you'll keep reading

im really enjoying this fanfic lol

hurry up with the next chapters

keep up the good work!

Write more! I want to know what's going to happen.  I love that this story deals with Leah, I always thought she was an interesting character and deserved to have her story told.  But seriously update soon =)

I am completely hooked on your story. Please keep updating! I have to know what happens next!

OH NO! I ran out of chapters! Please post more soon -- love this story. Love Leah. LOVE EDWARD. Oh, and I love the part where you give credit to Stephanie at the beginning of each chapter - it always makes me giggle... you are very creative and funny!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks, I always try to write something different for the disclaimer thing, for some reason it annoys me when people just put "Stephenie Meyers owns Twilight" over and over again...

this is a good story -- i was always so upset that we didnt get to find out what happened to Leah! i love your version!

I like the tentative friendship between Leah and Edward! And wow, I cannot wait for the next chapter...