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Reviewer: love-volvos (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 02:28 AM · On: Doors, Snores, and Trying Not To Burst Outta My Clothes (R)

LOVE IT!

*smiles hugely*
sosososoos great, :):):)
cant wait for the next update



Author's Response:

Thanks! I got three smiley faces! Today was a win!

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Doors, Snores, and Trying Not To Burst Outta My Clothes (R)

"Psychic with boundary issues?"  great line.  I really liked this chapter the meeting with Leahs mom was unexpected.  The convesation with Jake was very unexpected    but also very insightful   I like seeing Jake as something other than a broody hard ass    he is only 16 no matter what he looks like.  I cant wait for the meetingn with Sam and the formal introductions to the rest of the Cullens   that should be gold   

 

Dont keep us waiting  update soon



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm lookin' forward to writing all the intros, I don't even know what I'm gonna write for them yet and I can tell they are gonna make me laugh out loud!

Reviewer: Jasperholic (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Doors, Snores, and Trying Not To Burst Outta My Clothes (R)

love this story! Update soon please!!



Author's Response:

Thanks! As soon as midterms are done I swear I will lock myself in my room and write, for now though, I am biology's slave.

Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Doors, Snores, and Trying Not To Burst Outta My Clothes (R)

I was so happy to see this updated again.  I really do love everything you do with these chapters and I liked the conversation between Jake and Leah; it went the way I thought it would, with sarcasm, a bit of underlying friendship-love, and an outburst or two.  I can't wait to read how it goes with Sam.  Still loving this story, definitely.

Also, Carlisle FTW.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I have a feeling that Sam's encounter is gonna be a lot more angsty and angry, but, pshh, whose afraid of the big bad wolf anyway? (was that cliche? probably...)

Reviewer: lauraweasely (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Everything Smells Like Leeches

Wow. I've only read the first chapter but I'm really enjoying this. I'm always impressed when an author takes a somewhat minor character out of the book and writes it so well. I think you've captured Leah's personality. I'm really looking forward to reading more!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope you'll read the rest!

Reviewer: PreferBrunettes (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

I have one complaint - too short :(, but I can deal.  You're doing such a great job at maintaining Leah's wit and sarcasm and keeping her real at the same time.  She's got a lot to deal with it, from telling Sam/Jacob to preparing for Luke's transformation, that I think she uses her abrasiveness as a shield to protect herself.  I can't wait to see how your story unfolds. 

BTW, the description of the Cullens was awesome and clever.  I couldn't stop laughing.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I tried not to make her all mushy and lovey dovey just because now she has a lover...ok wrong noun, but you get my drift.

Reviewer: love-volvos (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

i love this story so much its like un imaginable

and i love the artist in the ambulance. good song :)
post more soon. looking forward to it



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! Oh, and Artist in the Ambulance is indeed a good song, normally I don't really care for Thrice, but this song is just awesome. Hope you keep reading!

Reviewer: Lauren Stryder (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Wow, I love your story, its really good. Keep at it. I've always thought that Stephanie Meyer could explore Leah's charater a bit more. So i'm really happy that i got to read this one. And its interesting reading about Bella from a different point of view.

O_O PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! O_O

hehe.

But really, i think it has a great plot. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the story praise! And I will definitely keep writing, writing Leah's sarcasm is too satisfying to give up.

Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Leah Likey Speed

I love this story! Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Next chapter is just waitin' for approval

Reviewer: MeggieBeth (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Thanks for the new chapter --- it was good and I can't wait for more....

 

 

Also, I nominated you in 4 categories so GOOD LUCK! And stay warm!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nominations! And I'll try to stay warm, friday there was a windchill of -15 (but of course that wasn't cold enough to cancel school), but frostbite would make it sorta hard to type...

Reviewer: FCgrl (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

ur story is sooooooooooo awesome!!!!! plz keep on writing it!!!!! luving how its playing along 2!!!!

FCgrl

Reviewer: FCgrl (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Everything Smells Like Leeches

being of a sarcastic nature myself (lol) i loved leah's attitude. the sarcasm was awesome-trust me!!! u eally captured the way i'd expect her to think and act. u couldnt have brought her more to life. skills. u write great!

FCgrl



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm also a sarcastic one, makes the whole sarcasm point of view just a little easier...and more fun cuz I don't have to worry about offending anyone lol. Anyway, thanks for reading and for the review!

Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Ack, short chapter..actually I think I just wanted to read more an dit ended haha. I'm so excited about this story!! I really can't wait to see what happens, I need more!! And as always, Leah is awesome with her sarcasm! :)



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks! Next chapter is gonna be longer, I promise :-)

Reviewer: blondie (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

"I bought it on ebay"

and

"I was going to say 'unaccepting'"

Just two of the gems in this chapter.  I LOVE your Leah...and Luke...ooo I want more Luke!

Wonderful!

blondie



Author's Response:

Haha, thanks! I'll miss you as my beta, but I'm glad I get to have your reviews now!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

OMG that was funny but I am so on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!  LMAO!!!  Awesome you know how to please an audience!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I try :-) (I was gonna make a wink smiley face, but uh...I don't wink...yeah, I just think I would look either waaaaay sketchy, or just like I'm twitching or something)

Reviewer: newtwilightguy (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Really short, but satisfied my craving for more (little bit) Lovin the story so far  (far as the weather I thought 18 was bad)



Author's Response:

Glad to be of service *insert captain salute*

Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Ok so I've been reading the story and I have to say Leah is the funniest damned thing I've ever read. Her wit and raw sarcasm is adorable (is that weird? lol) and I love seeing how she thinks about the world around her!

I cannot wait for the next update because I'm excited to see what Jake and Sam think.  I kinda hope one of them (Sam...perhaps?) blows their lid!



Author's Response:

Oh yes, prepare for the blowing of the lid! I might have to spilt Sam and Jake's reactions into two chapters though, just because it is going to be THAT epic.

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

I was SOOOO excited to see an udate!!! :) This is definitely one of the stories on here that I get jazzed about reading. 

So, as for Sam....I think that yes, he will "flip his shit" (I say that all the time!!!) but will also be happy that Leah is finally happy.  Maybe he'll even be a lil jealous that she doesn't even really care about all that went down with them anymore because she imprinted.  Hmmm...will certainly be interesting.  :)

If anything, Jake will be the most understanding.  I can see Bella reminding Jake that he allowed Edward to change her so she would still be around because he knew how much Bella meant to everyone.  Seeing that Jake and Leah have come to some sort of new friendship/bond in Breaking Dawn, I think that he will support Leah here.  I hope anyway! :)

 



Author's Response:

Sweet! My story invokes momentarily "jazzed" reactions! And "flip his shit" is an awesome expression, I use it a lot and people always give me weird looks, but whatever they obviously aren't awesome like us.

Reviewer: GoldnWlf (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Leah Likey Speed

"the used-to-be-a-human-until-her-half-demon-baby-tore-through-her-uterus-and-killed-her-one."  I love it!  I've never heard of Bella described that way but it is definitely accurate.  Great job - I can't wait to see Sam flip his shit.  lol  It will be interesting to find out what everyone else thinks.  Update soon!



Author's Response:

Yeah, makes Bella sound like the ultimate masochist doesn't it? Plus uterus is a funny word. Yes, I am immature.

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Also 1st review on the new chapter    VICTORY FOR ME



Author's Response:

Thanks for the nominations! And yes, first review victory for you indeed! 

Reviewer: BloodRedNight (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Leah Likey Speed

Yes  finally Luke meets the family this is going to be GREAT, and i cant wait to see Jake flip his shit, or how Sam reacts to "his Lee-Lee" impressing on a future vamp.   That is going to be straight Gold  dont keep us waiting  *please*.

Also  nomination is covered *thinmbs up*

and great line  "Dang I was hoping there was a 'cures cancer' one"

Reviewer: Master of the Boot (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:15 AM · On: Corny Movie Lines Are My Forte

I have to commend you on this excellent story.  I really never liked Leah, but in this story I can understand her and enjoy her interactions and her sarcasm. 

I loved the most the contrasts and similarities between her and Luke's love.  I can't wait to see the transformation.

Ta

Master of the Boot



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story and, just out of curiosity, where did you get your penname? 

Reviewer: cynthiacullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Corny Movie Lines Are My Forte

thank you for the chapter!! as always i loved it, which surprises me actually cus i'm not exactly a leah fan..i mean i do understand why she's so mean and that but i somehow never really "liked" her..anyways in your story i love her totally!!!! so congratulations on that one haha and i would gladly vote for it,although i think i need to know where to go to do that...:)

i'm really curious to find out how luke's transformation is going to be, and i have a feeling that he's going to have some kind of ability that will make it easier for him and leah to be together...so i really can't wait for an update!!

ooookay...i think i got a little inspired ...¬¬ haha so resuming this I LOVE THIS STORY haha ok i can go now, <3

Reviewer: cynthiacullen (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Corny Movie Lines Are My Forte

thank you for the chapter!! as always i loved it, which surprises me actually cus i'm not exactly a leah fan..i mean i do understand why she's so mean and that but i somehow never really "liked" her..anyways in your story i love her totally!!!! so congratulations on that one haha and i would gladly vote for it,although i think i need to know where to go to do that...:)

i'm really curious to find out how luke's transformation is going to be, and i have a feeling that he's going to have some kind of ability that will make it easier for him and leah to be together...so i really can't wait for an update!!

ooookay...i think i got a little inspired ...¬¬ haha so resuming this I LOVE THIS STORY haha ok i can go now, <3



Author's Response:

Haha, that's okay, I love "inspired" reviews. And thanks for the story praise, I'm glad I made you into a Leah fan, it is my goal in life after all...okay, not really, but it's still an accomplishment.

Reviewer: Swedish_Chef (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Bloodsucker Bonding?

I had to reply to your reply so I'm reviewing another chapter haha. I completly agree with you on "Bella and Edward's Amazing Threesome Love Fest on the Moon"!! I always laugh when I see stories like that just because they're too AU, they're not really fanfiction anymore. I mean it took 4 novels for Bella and Edward to have sex! Now people are using it for plot points. But some people like that...*shrug*

I also want to add how amazing Leah is. I was thinking about how you wrote her earlier today and you're pretty dead on. The whole imprinting thing cannot be completely known but I think she is still in character. Congrats!! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! And I enjoy your penname by the way, just thought you should know.

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