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Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:58 PM · On: Delirious

Well, I certainly see a Carlisle meeting coming up.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Delirious

I am really enjoying this story. Great job.

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:46 PM · On: Delirious

I am really enjoying this story. Great job.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Delirious

Well well well, we seem to have come to a bit of an empasse' when it comes to Bella wanting to kiss Edward. To bad Edward hasn't told Bella the truth about himself and why he won't kiss her. Jacob sure didn't make it easy on Bella buy giving cryptic clues. Although Bella was confused, I am pretty sure the wheels are starting to turn. Hmmm Edward has her? Wow...did he pass the treaty line? I know he may not know about that but it makes me wonder what he was doing on the Rez...I can't wait to find out...

Reviewer: Kalikir (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Delirious

YAYYY!!!

That was a GREAT chapter (another GREAT!)

????? Edward is on Quileute land- okay... He's not a Cullen (yet?!) So he doesn't know about the treaty but shouldn't there have been wolves on his heals? Or is there ]; )

LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

Sorry if I didn't make it clear enough, but Edward isn't exactly on Quileute land. As Jacob says, they're actually just off the reservation - somewhere in between Forks and La Push - so the wolves might be upset, but Edward isn't technically trespassing. Also, you were right on when you said he has no knowledge of the treaties, anyway ;)

Reviewer: karene (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 11:00 AM · On: Delirious

Update before the week ends..or i swear i'll find you... trying uploading on fanfiction please.



Author's Response:

I'll do my best ;) This story usually updates a few hours earlier on ff.net, but my twilighted beta has been amazing with getting the chapters up here ASAP.

Reviewer: sapphire_light (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:31 AM · On: Delirious

ok, so that's not the way imagined that happening but i wouldn't change it, poor jacob is so frustrated, heck i was frustrated!!--the truth is right there, and she's grasped the concept but denied it so many times. maybe her mind needed to focused on something else so she could see the bigger picture here, see whats going on. i'm sad that she got hurt in the process,  and i know she wouldn't conciously consider it because it's out there, but come on!  it's not an irrational conclusion at this point.  i mean her best friend is a werewolf!  and he freaks out around/about the culles and is angry about edward, and he was hinting at the cold ones--gah, i just wanted to shake her. i wonder if she'll think that thinking edward has similarites to the Cold Lady is part of a delusion or something b/c she's not in her right mind...are they headed to carlisle's? and how did edward know to be there? and is she bleeding?



Author's Response:

I've had the ending two scenes of this chapter in mind since I started this fic, so maybe I'm a little attatched to it, but I think sometimes the things that seem most obvious, we don't want to believe for personal reasons, even if we have an inkling, deep down, that they're true. Bella knows something is different about Edward - it's come up in her thoughts repeatedly - but she's also all but in love with him, so it's hard for her to picture him as one of the monsterish cold ones, even if certain qualities of his match up. It's easier for her to see Jacob as a wolf, because she knows the werewolves aren't actually bad guys. Jacob is trying to convince her one of her closest friends is evil, so she's not quite so willing to accept that at face value contrary to evidence proving otherwise.

I do feel a little badly about how I've treated Jacob this far in this story :P He's gotten a trampling via Bella's stubbornness.

I can assure you I won't be back-tracking pretending Bella's realizations are just delusions she doesn't take seriously. After thirteen chapters, I think it's time Bella knows! :P (And yes, she is bleeding, it's the smell of blood that causes her to pass out. Poor Edward must be awfully tempted...)

Thanks for your interest in this story :) It makes me strangely happy when people question my characters actions, maybe because it makes them seem a little more real :)

Reviewer: LittleLisa (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 10:16 AM · On: Delirious

Aww, she's almost figured it out. Can't wait to see what's happened next. Update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the new banner :) I didn't think the old one said much about the story.

Edward and Bella will be making a few discoveries that I think you'll be pleased with in the next chapter ;)

I can assure you there will be a HEA for this story, no matter how we get there. I'm not really the kind of girl who can write something that doesn't end well :)

Reviewer: LittleLisa (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2010 09:27 AM · On: Anxious

Love the new banner. Love your story. Hate that Edward pulled away. Hope that he tells her what he is and figures out he can hunt animals. Would love a HEA. Update soon!!!! You're a great writer.

Reviewer: peygan (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Anxious

Awesome story I look forward to more

Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Anxious

ohh I thought for a moment Edward was just going to at least "try" - but I guess he still needs the soothing that he'll hopefully find once he meets with the Cullens.

Reviewer: Kalikir (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 08:02 PM · On: Anxious

I've never written a review before but I absolutely love your work thus far! Just wanted to encourage you to keep it coming and not leave us hanging for too long..

I don't know how you feel about people catching typos or not- As an author I would want to know but I'm not one-

 Found this- How would know about what Edward is ‘supposed’ to be, if you’ve never met him?”



Author's Response:

Glad my little story inspired you to give reviewing a shot :) I'll try not to leave it hanging too long this time ;) My update goal is sometime next early to mid-week.

Thanks for the tip on the correction :) It's been fixed.

Reviewer: melanie (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 12:32 AM · On: Anxious

stupid edward though i understand why it happened  can't wait for the next chapter so  hurry please!!!!!!!!!!!

Mel



Author's Response:

Yeah, Edward is being frustrating isn't he? I had a debate with my beta on whether we thought he should kiss her or not and this is what came out. Don't worry, he won't be so frustrating for too much longer ;)

Reviewer: elegantbonz (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Conflict

..." fight the urge to lick the wall to see if it tasted like her...."  THATS  HYSTERICAL...  you made me scream out loud with laughter..and my husband thinks I' m nuts...     this story is excellent...I am enjoying it ...but I am running out of chapters.....More Please.....

 

bonz

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Anxious

Hmmm....so he has finally run into a reason to stop drinking human blood, has he?  That was nicely done, by the way!

Next step...meeting Dr Cullen and hearing about the veggie diet, maybe?  ::crosses fingers::

I felt sooo badly for Bella, there at the end, for putting herself out there and getting rejected!  That had to hurt so badly.  HOpefully, he will smooth it over.

Great chap, thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Anxious

Argh!!  Please update soon. I want Bella to know and him to meet the Cullens. Sorry if I am rushing you. I just love this story.

Alaina

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 03:17 PM · On: Anxious

Where is Emmett?  I noticed that she said 3 kids when she was talking to Embry.  Do not like my Emmie Bear?  He is my number two guy.  #1 Edward #2 Emmett #3 Jacob so on, and so on. 



Author's Response:

You're the first one to notice that. I like Emmett just fine. He's got his own special role to play ;) He'll be around, trust me.

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Jealousy

Oh I hope that maybe she can by a little self confidense.  Maybe Edward can get her a self-help book or something.  Uh oh.  Embry is going to freak.  I bet it's going to be bad.  When will he finally tell Bella the truth?  I also want James and Vickie gone.  I got a bad feeling about when they smell Bella on Edward.

 

I love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks :) I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the story so far.

The next two chapters will answer some of your burning questions :)

Reviewer: PBJilly (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Anxious

Oh my, the story becomes clearer.  When she mumbled "hippo sandwich" I thought for sure Edward would think about drinking from animals!!  How long will Bella let him string her along until she wants some answers?  I am not sure when she would be ready to hear the truth-if ever.  But I see the lines being drawn as Edward aligns himself with Bella and maybe the Cullens against James and Victoria.  I think he is strong enough to kiss her.  He went and spent the night in her room, without feeding before.  I'm sure he doesn't trust himself.  This is my favorite chapter so far because much was revealed!



Author's Response:

I didn't even think about that with the hippo sandwich! I just picked random words, but it's a good point. Maybe he was just too focused on not eating Bella to think about it, especially since he's never heard of vegetarian vampires before :P

Bella might be ready to hear the truth much sooner than you think ;) She's pretty much got all the components in hand, she just needs ot piece them all together now.

I agree, Edward could kiss her if he wanted to... he just wants her to know who he is before he takes that step which will bond them closer together.

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Conflict

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

I'm glad to hear you're liking the story!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:47 AM · On: Tenacious

Awesome CHapter!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Disconcert

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:57 AM · On: Confusion

Great Chapter!

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Delusion

Great Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2010 06:36 AM · On: Distraction

Awesome Chapter!

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