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Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 6

mmm, very very interesting chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :-)  More to come.  Or cum.  No...come.

Reviewer: KeiraEveMacDonnell (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 6

I love the small things that are coming through, like the facial hair.  I think the subtleties are really making the story.  I'm also glad there wasn't a long drawn out time period where they weren't talking to each other.  And citrus is always good!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  One of the things I try to do when I'm writing is eliminate what I don't like.  I don't like long and meaningless separations, and you'll never see me add angst simply for the sake of angst.  I think to keep a fic interesting is to keep it moving.  Everyone reading Twific already knows canon, so I can just try to flow from there.

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1

LOL! I think one is more than any woman can handle.

Author's Response:

I'll volunteer to do a study on this.

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Now that is a twist. I wonder if the physical changes will only apply to Edward or also to the rest of the Cullens/Masens. I can't wait to find out. You just want to violate Edward, admit it! ;)

Author's Response:

This is my goal in life.  My fantasy.  It's why I always write about multiple Edwards.  LOL

Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is so cool. I love how the two worlds are meshing together.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hehehe, wait.

Reviewer: AMusefan77 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story so far. The mystery of it makes a little more sense to me with each chapter but I don't have any really good theories yet. I loved the lemon rind with vampire Edward at the end as well. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and I'm so happy you're enjoying this!  This is not your grandfather's Edward... Not with how he's being affected...

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

wow!...So both edwards are becoming a mix between the two.

Author's Response:

Yup :-)

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 6

This is so friggin' fascinating! I love this story! It seems as if the two Edwards are morphing into one and the same - the human is getting paler and has a desire for Bella's blood, the vampire needs to shave... I just love this! More, please! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I'll be getting another chapter into the queue this evening :-)

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 6

Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you!  *dances around*

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 6

Damn that was hot! I get the idea about the decision making influencing the other side, but I don't quite understand the manifestation of the physical changes. It's like EAM is becoming a vampire without being bitten and EAMC is turning into a human. Am I way off base here? God, I love this story!

Author's Response:

Nope, you're not off base here.  There are physical changes occuring to each of them.  How far will they go?  I won't go too far in violating biology.  Much. ;-)

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 6

Yippee!  Kisses!  Groping!  Boners!   Two Edwards!  What's NOT to love about this fucking story?

Author's Response:

LOL!  Thank you!  I love writing about multiple Edwards, as I guess you guys can tell at this point...

Can never have enough Edwards.

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 6

OK. OK... I mean, come on!! This chapter was insane! Insanely good. So it seems that in fact they're not only experiencing things from each other universes. They're little by little becoming one another. WOW!

And if this is the case, I feel REALLY sorry for EAM. He got the short end off the stick, I imagine that becoming a vampire alone, without guidance wouldn't be easy. If that's what really happening.

Author's Response:

Thank you, and yup, you're absolutely right.  EAM is definitely getting the short end of the stick here.  How far will physical changes go?  I'm not going to completely rape whatever biology can be maintained here, but no question EAMC has a better idea of what's happening than poor EAM does.

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 1

What? You mean the fact that it's possible that there are multiple wormholes out there? That is a scary thought. Then again ...

LOL, indeed best to keep things relatively simple. The physics of Dr Who was tedious enough to grasp.

Author's Response:

Mutliple universes.  Wormholes have already been proven ;-)  But they're small.

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 1

Across the Universes, Sliders style! Oh the possibilities are endless ;)

Author's Response:

That's not only the theory, but it's been proven experimentally.

Scary, isn't it...

But if I tried to do that, we'd all be lost.  LOL

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

LOL, I can see where it would really get confusing if you tried to develop this story around popular scientific theories. I like your twist because when it comes to alternate universes there's usually a Bizarro version of a person somewhere in the parallel universe. I can still appreciate this story to the fullest even if I am rusty on my physics from college way back when.


Author's Response:

If I tried to use the formal definition of Multiple Universe Theory I think we'd all be lost in this story.  LOL  We'd have a new universe every time one of them made a decision ;-)

Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

Really enjoyed what you've started.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next chapter is in the queue, awaiting validation...

Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 5

Mmm, interesting... oh, the possibilities! I for one suck at making decisions lol...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying this!  Now, if I can continue to surprise you...

Reviewer: Erilu77 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 5

Eeeeeeeeeee!!! this is getting GOOD!!

Author's Response:

LOL, thank you!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 5

I'm really enjoying the creativity and originality you're bringing to this story, especially the unknown aspects of quantum physics. The theory you outlined in your end notes is quite an interesting one since it suggests that, in this case, what one Edward does has an effect on the other Edward. So technically they're linked, as is every other sentient being. Most of the other theories I've ever read about suggests that we're all seperate and our choices are our own, so this is a pleasant twist. I'm just curious about the photo ending up in the other universe though. I'm guessing it's because EAM placed it in the journal, so it somehow got transported or duplicated there?Dying for chapter 6!!!

Author's Response:

I really am taking liberties with the multiple universe theory.  However, there is no question their actions, and how they're affecting each other, will alter how things might have played out had there been no connection between their universes.  I'm not really devling into Heinsenberg's Uncertainty Principle, per se, but mostly looking at how timelines will change because of unexpected influences.

As an example, is EAMC behaving per canon?  Not quite...  He's being flooded with the hormones of a 17 year old human, and it's having a massive affect on his behavior.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 5

Fascinating!  Though, I definitely feel a little more sympathy toward EAM than EAMC (snicker!)  And they both are starting to think they're crazy!  I can't wait to see what happens when they run into Bella again!

Author's Response:

Thank you, and I do think you're right.  EAMC is definitely getting the better part of this deal.

Reviewer: minimunchkin (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 5

Cool story idea.  I love scifi.  Looking forward to the next post.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  The next chapter is in the queue, so it should be soon :-)

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

I don;t have words for how interesting I find this story!  I wait for you to update like you are a crack dealer and I am an addict.

Write faster, am getting DTs already!!!!!

Author's Response:

I know I shouldn't be an enabler but... I'll be putting another chapter into the queue this evening... ;-)

And thank you!

Reviewer: Daybreak (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 5

This just gets more and more fascinating. I wonder how Edward the vampire will solve his "problem"... And it will be really interesting if the two Edwards actually initiate some kind of contact through the journal. I really like this. More soon, please.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Another chapter will be hitting the queue tonight...  Again, thank you so much.

Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 5

Count me in for this Ride. It looks like it promises to be an E-ticket one. I'm loving it for orginality. Kudos for going down a road no one else has

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  And I hope you continue to enjoy the ride!  Or their ride.  Oy, their ride...

Reviewer: ASK (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

I love the premise! All kinds of things are possible. I'm wondering how you are going to handle the New Moon analogue--actually I'm hoping you'll skip it altogether, and use the parallel universe premise to derive the angst.

Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter...


Author's Response:

Thank you!  Ah, don't make too many assumptions here.  The infiltration of one universe upon the other is bound to change some things..

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