This chapter was brilliant!  But then so was the whole story. One thing confused me.  Did Bella intend to destroy the journal?  And if so, why?  Thank you.

What a treat! And what an interesting scenario, of course, now I'm even more intrigued! Lol!

i love this story is so funny

omg i love it is so amazing

omg is amazing i love it

I've left reviews for the last few chapters over on FF. I got a little too impatient to wait for the updates over here ;)  I'm so sad to see this story come to an end - it was brilliant!  I can't wait to follow you on your next adventure.  Thank you for sharing your wonderful stories with strange twists.  I never grow tired of reading them.

Yummy lemos ... the visual you shared between Bella and Edward was excellent.

Happy to see that Edward is coming to his senses regarding "other" Edward and the need to not be selfish in his desire to be human again if it means "other" Edward's misfortune. Wondering how this is all going to work itself out.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the lemons. Ah, this is a learning experience... for everyone...

This really was a unique,interesting and well written tale. Thank you so much for the time and effort that went into writing it and the creativity that you showed.

 

Excellent.

A

Author's Response: Thank you so much - and I really am glad you enjoyed it :-)

Thank you for creating an Edward that isn't all Victorian. Honestly, the guy lived with Emmett for how many decades, would he really have been that much of a prude?

Author's Response: You're welcome. No question Edward is still a product of the era in which he was born, and I'm not certain he'd allow someone like Emmett to influence him. One of Edward's problems has always been hubris, the sense he's better than those around him. In this case, it appears he needed a small dose of 18 year old teenage hormones to push him off the cliff.

Okay, so clearly neither of these Edward's have read Harry Potter, as anyone who has knows that you don't respond to a book that writes you back, lest you start a conversation with a teenaged Dark Wizard intent on killing you.

Gesh, read much, guys?

 

Great story, even if the leads are a tad dense.

A

Author's Response: Thanks, even if Harry Potter was the last thing on my mind when I wrote this. :-)

Okay, so not only are you an amazing and gifted writer and this story is really complex and interesting, but then you go and mention on of my most favorite writers (Booksgalore -- who I also am fortunate to count among my electronic friends) and finally, you tell me that Douglas, the most awesome squirrel in all of creation could make an appearance -- that's just amazing. Now I am hooked and I'll waste a chunk of my day reading chapter after chapter, ignoring the two stories that are on my desktop requiring my attention. Thank goodness it's Friday and I'll have loads of time over the weekend to play catch up.

 

Again, great chapter (although the licking the blood thing was a tad, eewe). Need to see where this is going!

 

A

Author's Response: Thank you! Oops, Douglas never got in. Books had him under lock and key ;-)

lovely lemons ... I always wanted Bella to get her way ... or a bit more of it

and love the last bit with the conversation via the "book"

Author's Response:

Thank you :-)