Wow!  Edward is brave in both worlds, of course EAM has a lot more to lose in his world!  And Bella is a lucky danger magnet to have someone there for her!  I can't wait to see how they figure out that they are the same person in different dimensions!

Author's Response:

Uh.  Hmm.  No, I can't say ;-)

Please say you're going to have more edward on edward literary action in the next chapter...ooww maybe have some alice talking with alice (sounds like it would be a funny conversation, but then again having a conversation with myself sounds weird.... hummm)

PS... Douglas is only missing because I caught him and holding him for ransom...
Price... one key ;)

Author's Response:

Absolutely.  Communication between the Edwards will be a main part of the story from here on out - with the exception of the developing relationship with their Bellas.

It's unlikely the Alice's will talk.  Edward knows contact with the book increases the "bleed."

Ohhh, you're holding Douglas for ransom?  Glad no one ate him.  Whew!

Can't stop reading. ;o) 10/10 review though!

Sorry can't stop reading!

So EAM is seeing EAMC's image in the pic and vice versa? A little confused but can't seem to stop reading! Haha!

SQUEEEEE!!!  OMG, I love it. Love it. More?  Please?  ::hurries up with the reviewing thing so she can click 'next' already::

Awesome chapter, I had to skim a lot of the middle-ish with Edward two, but I'm really excited for what's going to happen.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope it wasn't too much for you, but it's rated NC-17, so... *gulp*

I loved this chapter! Especially the ending, finally, they had an entire conversation, and it was incredible.

So, it seems that so far what they're feeling is what the other is feeling, but their bodies didn't change completly. Obviously EAM is stronger, but EAMC doesn't seem to be weaker in the fisical sense, and he still can't digest food.

It's all very interesting. I wonder where this is going, what's going to happen once they realise the truth.

Author's Response:

I can't tell you, or I'd have to...LOL

We're not done with our boys yet.  They will continue to change.  And oh yeah, lots more "talking" ahead.

And thank you!

Wow!!!

Author's Response:

LOL, thank you!!

Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!!

Okay this is the first fic in ages that has really piqued my interests and actually makes me squeal when it's updated! And I am not a squealer!

Your portrayal of both Edwards are remarkable, they both seem very much in true character. Bella seems lesser characterised...human Bella is less forward I think but that could be because of circumstances. Either way I like them both.

I love how you clash both worlds without it being over dramatic or stupid. The food drama and the scents all work so very well.

When I first checked out the summary I can say I wasn't that interested. I had read a few Edward turns human fic (they were seriously lacking) a fic where Bella is like Dorothy and takes a trip to OZ with a different Edward (okay) and twin Edwards (just plain weird and confusing lol). So when I clicked I was readying myself for disappointment...

Lesson learned today boys and girls: Don judge a old decrepit journal by its cover...hehe!

Will do some major pimpage for this baby!

Keep writing...I love it!

JayJayHale out!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  See?  Don't judge me, the old, decrepit... *cough*  LOL

Seriously, you have me blushing bigtime, and I'm so happy you're enjoying this!  I'm not sure what more I could have put into the summary without giving things away, but I'm so glad you're not disappointed!

Well, it's times like these that Edward has to be glad that he is retaining certain vampire qualities!  Things would have gone very different if he couldn't hear thoughts, and if his body weren't quite so impenatrable!

Author's Response:

For now...

Seriously, it would have been disastrous!