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Reviews For In Your Room
Reviewer: CullenCraze95 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1

Continue please! This piece is so good that I don't even care that I just got epically cockblocked! (okay, so maybe I care a little. Or a lot. Or maybe you should just finish what you started so no one gets hurt.)

Reviewer: Missredwine1 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 1

Omg! Please do more! I love this

Reviewer: Hellasweet (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yummy--good lemon, even if we didn't actually get a lemon :)

Reviewer: vavikinggirl (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 1

What fun! I don't know how I missed this story before. I would love to see some sort of little continuation. I want to know if Edward managed to successfully mislead Carlisle, what the 'rents do to/about Alice, and a lovely lemon of Edward and Bella's first time together would be brilliant.

Reviewer: SophieHarold (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1

Please please please continue!!! Loved it.

Reviewer: BandE4eva (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

When will the next chapter be up?

Reviewer: EmiMills (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey, do you think you could continue this? It's great!

Reviewer: Jealous_of_Bella (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes please!!!!! God, i'm all hot and bothered just by reading this, and they didn't even get to the deed, lol XD. I would love for this to be a continued story :)

Reviewer: staree (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

OH MY GOD!!! You have to continue this. Loved It!!!

Reviewer: LizzySwan1022 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was great! I'm all for a continuation!

Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, continue this!

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 1

Love it!!!

Reviewer: addictivelyhopeless (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 1

expand expand expand expand expand

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

so yea I love this and would love to read more.

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 1


To NOT would be utter freakin' TORTURE. 

Forget "CONSIDEERING" expanding this! DO IT!!!!!! 


Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1

Dear!  I hope you do well for the writing thing you are going for.  And yes, having Carlisle be the one to bust up their fun goes perfect with his spirit.  I would love for you to continue this so that some issues can be resolved.  I can tell that their encounters could be explosive!  Thanks.  :)

Reviewer: angelic_ninja (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

Wow! No other words needed, just Wow!

Author's Response:

I hope those are good wows!  I'm planning on doing a continuation for this, so I hope to wow you again soon. ;)  Thanks for reading and leaving a review, it's always nice to know that someone's reading the silly stuff that floats through my head. :D

Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1

Dude, it wasn't Carlisle that just cockblocked anyone... it was YOU! *LMAO* I was all 'yes, they're gonna get it on... *cues boom-chic-a-wa-wa music*' and then just leave us hanging.

*shakes head* Totally not cool.


Author's Response:

I know, I know...but I had to do it for the contest! :)  I promise that they will have their moment.  I am currently working on continuing this so don't fret your pretty little head!!  Thanks for reading & leaving a review, it really means a lot to me as a writer!

Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

I am so excited to read something new from you!!! And if this chapter is any indicator of what to expect...Mmmmmm!!! I cannot wait to read more.

Author's Response:

I know, I've been absent for far too long! :)  I miss writing & hearing from readers.  Thanks for coming back to read & leave some love.  I am working on a continuation for this nonsense, because I feel really bad about leaving them all hot and bothered! :D  Stay tuned!!!

Reviewer: amberdee1219 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2010 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

OMG..I love this.  I would have to say that Carlisle realizing his son and his daughter's best friend was going heavy at it would be hilarious!  

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing this silly little thing!  I thought it was appropriate for Carlisle to bust up the fun in order to stay with the spirit of the contest I entered it into, but now I feel really bad for leaving them in limbo like that.  I am working on a continuation so that these crazy kids can, um...resolve their issues. :)

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