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Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 16

Why do I like Michael? I honestly don't think he's that bad!

Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2010 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 15

Oh, dear... poor Bella. Edward better kick some ass! :)

Reviewer: angelsmg (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 18

so i love this story so much, this was the first review since i didnt want to stop reading. but this chapter :( please update quickly!

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 18

So, more reviews means quicker updates? What happens if I review 127 times, give or take? I knew this wasn't going to be a cake-walk chapter and you wrote it well. Can't wait to see what you do from here. Bravo.



Author's Response:

if you review that many times, then i am happy. the next one is done, and... okay, fine. here it comes.

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 18

Oh man that was crazy. I can't believe she did that. I mean I would have done the same, but all the same one brave chica! And poor Edward and moreover poor Jason.

Reviewer: thoratwilight (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 18

UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 6

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!

Reviewer: RedRoseBlackThorn (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oh dear, it looks like Edward is in big shit. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 18

hurryhurryhurry! im gripper again, kinda forgot about this site and your story but i came back and your making me stay :)

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2010 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 18

I feel creeped out by the idea of what happened to Edward. I keep picturing scenes from The Lord of the Flies, when the boys became frenzied and attacked, mutilated and killed a classmate.

Please update soon!

Reviewer: amanda1 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2010 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 18

I loved it! When Edward was willing to anything for Bella in order to save her I was Awwwwwwing but at the same time I was like" Noooooooooo! You're going to get yourself frickin killed" haha

 Can't wait for whats next in this story. Update soon, please!

Amanda <3

 

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 17

So I'm reading this latest chapter and shaking my head at the thought process of teenage boys on a mission, when it occurs to me... oooohhhhhhh boy, is Rose gonna be piiiiiiiiissed!!!

Reviewer: Katrela (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 17

I think the theme song should have been mission impossible! I forsee a lot of stuff going very wrong in the near furture!  Looking forward to more.

Bethanne

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 17

Thank goodness, someone gave Edward the location of Bella's kidnappers! I hope that the rescue is a success.

Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2010 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

teehee! I was thinking of the beautiful (yet pale, and not so studly!) Rpatz being in a gang. A gang of...what?  chain smokers? tea drinkers?  hair pullers?   hehe. :)

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2010 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 17

Just found your story this morning - looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

hahaha..I highly doubt there would be a white gang of European descent...more like NAZI or Hitler's view, I'd say..lol...so if you consider NAZIs under that  tho

Reviewer: longtobeme (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 16

Wow! Edward's former gang members are seriously scary. Since they've been following Bella and Edward for the past 2 weeks, they know that Bella is Edward's Achille's heel. I am glad that someone told Renee the truth that she is an inattentive parent. I can't wait to see how Bella gets out of this mess!:)

Reviewer: Nova (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 16

Holy shit! Well, I hope you write quickly! Please, and thank you!

Reviewer: Fantastico (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 15

You. Are. VILE. (Hey, didja realize, 'vile' is a rearranged version of 'evil'? Sumthink to think about. -glares-)

 

I'm only reviewing because you said you'd update. I'm being purely selfish.

 

-Grudgingly and with seething hatred- 10/10

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2010 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 15

noooo! i stopped doing coursework to read this and you leave it on a cliff hanger! thats just cruel! pleeease update soon -L

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 15

Why? Why did I have to start reading this when the last chapter is the biggest cliffie of the entire story to date? ARGH!

Seriously, I am loving this story, and can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 14

It was nice to see Edward finally relaxing and accepting his place within the family. It seems like he's come such a long ways in a pretty short amount of time.

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 13

I have a bad feeling that this isn't the end of Megan and Mario. A really bad feeling.

Reviewer: kissyfur (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 12

I had suspected something like that, but it was still heartbreaking to actually read it. That poor, poor little boy.

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