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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Proposals Redux

Ewwww James just totally killed my buzz after Edward. Man can Edward make a girls brain turn to mush...snicker. I like Edward's ideas and can't wait to see them come to life.

Aaacckk but that James...yuck...that creep needs to take a hint and get lost...



Author's Response:

that's the thing about creeps -- they get under your skin and fester.  sorry he killed your buzz, hon.  but bella needed to have SOME wits about her before heading back to rosalie.  but i hear what you're saying.

mmm, just imagining edward painting.  *wipes drool*  oops, sorry, did you see that?  i've been tempted to create some of the art myself, but painting is NOT my forte (i'm better at 3-d stuff).  maybe i'll host a challenge when the fic ends.  who knows?  that would be kinda cool, though, i have to admit!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

Emmett really is something isn't he? LOL...adorably agressive if I do say so myself. I laughed hard when Bella fell off he couch...way to funny. Aww isn't Edward sweet to bring a peace offering...



Author's Response:

emmett is such a love.  who else would get excited about irritated grizzlies?  SM certainly brought some vivid characters to my life, and now i just get to play with them!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

LMAO...I was wondering if Rose was the still life model...oh thats going to be a fun one to explain. I am glad she is going to give Bella a chance. This is just so exciting. I just loved Rose's overgrown Tinkerbell remark...lol



Author's Response:

HAHAHA!  thanks!  yeah, that tinkerbell line is a personal favorite.  i can just totally picture it!

i'm so happy that you are still reading and reviewing.  i saw your bio page, and DAMN, GIRL!  read much?  (hee hee!)  i imagine that after reading so much, you must get pretty jaded, so i am truly honored that you like my fic and seem excited by it.  i am definitely taking your support as a huge compliment!

so, thank you, yet again!

--jen

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Moving Day

Awww hell this is not going well...Rose is just not one to reason with anyways so this is not going to help Bella...sigh...



Author's Response:

well, you didn't really expect everything to be all sunshine and roses, did you?  *smirk*  have no fear -- things only get more interesting from here!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 3: Beethoven and Daffy Duck

Interesting to say the least. I can't wait to see how Edward gets Bella to be his subject...



Author's Response:

the boy has it so bad...

i'm eager to see your future thoughts on these two crazy kids!

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

Aww, super cute. And really funny!



Author's Response:

thank you!  i'm really glad you liked it!  thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

Love drunk Bella! I wish I could have Edward care my ass home lol



Author's Response:

oh, i know, right?  sigh... rob could carry me off caveman-style any day of the week and 3 times on sunday.  just sayin'.

thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 2: One o' Them Days

i hope to all that is holy that she gets another room...perferably one to herself. lol...glad bella dished it back to lauren



Author's Response:

yep, bella can get feisty when provoked.  the meek-mouse skin is slowly starting to shed.  vixen bella, come on down!

a room all to herself?  aw, but she'd get so LONELY.  we wouldn't want that to happen, would we?  *bats eyelashes*

thank you for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 1: Proposals

ahhh james is such a douche...shiver. i am glad bella is branching out and trying art. i know  mine were  so much fun...



Author's Response:

hello and welcome to my fic!  i am SO excited that you found me and that you review EVERY CHAPTER!  whoo-hoo!  you are an author's dream!

hee hee, so you don't like james?  aw, that might make him feel bad.  NOT!

yep, i have some good memories of figure drawing class.  one particular memory triggered this chapter, in fact.  wanna guess?

thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: latuacantante98 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

EPIC chapter. i like how he wants to wait until she's sober. 



Author's Response:

awwwww, thank you, hon!  *hand on heart*

yeah, edward is a good guy.  now if i can just finagle a way to get him back into just a towel...

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

Great chapter!

Drunk Bella is fun. XD I hope that she remembers that Edward told her to ask him to kiss her when she's sober. =)

Looking forward to your next update!



Author's Response:

hee hee!  thanks!

ooh, the suspense!  will she?  won't she?  what will edward do?  what did rose hear?  this fic is just too much fun to write, seriously!

Reviewer: botsy (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

Bella introducing Edward as Jiminy Cricket to Angela got me. that was great, LOL! Actually, Bella as a happy drunk was just enjoyable to read. I always love observing people when they are intoxicated. :p

until next time!



Author's Response:

thank you!  glad you got a good laugh out of it!

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

i think we are friends right?

 

I love drunk bella - she needs to come out a play more



Author's Response:

duh, of COURSE we're friends!  you made my awesome banner, chica, and i cannot begin to tell you how i love you for doing that!

drunk bella.  what can i say?  she is near and dear to my heart!  TWICE-BAKED!

Reviewer: orangemonkey (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

What a really cute chapter!

“Ask me again when you’re sober.” ...... sigh .....



Author's Response:

mmm, yeah...  my hubby inspired that one, i have to admit.  freshman year of college, no less! 

i'm glad you're enjoying the story -- thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: xAGNES (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

i love it .. please write more



Author's Response:

hi there!  i'm writing as fast as i can, but i'm still a slowpoke.  but don't worry, i'm not even half-way thru the tale yet.  i don't think, anyways... !

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

Great chapter...Edward is so gentlemanly...he could'a gotten anything he wanted from a drunk Bella.  He's even taking Angela home too, good time to get info on Bella although it doesn't look like Angela can speak around him.  I love drunken whispers, I admit I'm the same way, WAY louder whispers when I'm drinking, erm, drunk.  I'll find ya on FB, add to your numbers! 



Author's Response:

thanks, denise!  yeah, edward is a good guy.  but is he too good?  heh heh...  and at first i had some zingy one-liners that angela would say, then thought better of that.  if i was drunk and stumbled upon the Pretty, i think the only thing i'd be able to say is GUH.  so i'm totally with ang on this one.  *she and i fistbump*

i'm happy you liked it and continue to review -- that means SO much to me!  thank you!

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

looking forward to more



Author's Response:

i'm glad you're still reading!  chap 9 is about half done, sohopefully you won't have to wait too much longer...

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Proposals Redux

Just when Bella is feeling good James pops up like a bad penny...asshat!  You are completely right, a short chapter is better than a long wait for a long chapter, thank you thank you for getting back to writing.  I've been debating on whether to read the Dragon Tattoo series, maybe I'll pick it up.  About this chapter, we learned what music Edward uses for inspiration and what his plans are for his next painting series.  Personally, I love his music collection.  Looking forward to the next chapter and Bellas face to face w/Rose...



Author's Response:

let me just tell you how good it feels to ME to be writing again!  i really was blocked this summer.  but now i have TOO many ideas and can't seem to write fast enough!  when it rains, it pours... just like Forks!

i love reading your comments and seeing what you're getting out of each chapter.  (and thanks for the compliment -- i picked music from my own collection!)

one word of caution re: dragon tattoo -- the beginning third is really slow, but then it REALLY picks up.  i haven't read the other 2 yet, though. 

thank you again for your reviews.  consistent reviewers like you always make my day!

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Tater Tot and Jiminy Cricket

hahaha... tempted but can't be obtained *yet*... coz conscienceEdward won against drunkBella... a bit short, but @ least i was laughing while reading it.. happy w'end!



Author's Response:

LOL!  yeah, sometimes i wish edward would just shut his brain off.  but actually, i like to think that's why he's so good at his art.  he concentrates all of his mental energy on that instead of poring over endless what-ifs. 

i have so many ideas pushing their way into my head lately and i never seem to have enough time to write.  darn real life!  i'll try to make the next chapter longer and juicier!

thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

-jen

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 4: Moving Day

Fun!



Author's Response:

heh heh!  you like?

i just got the BEST idea for a halloween party chapter this morning while drinking my coffee, and have been laughing to myself thinking of all the details.  this story is so much fun to write -- i'm glad you like to read it!

thank you again for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 3: Beethoven and Daffy Duck

yay - they've met up again ... I love your descriptive interactions between the two, more please???



Author's Response:

aww, thanks!  i just want to say that you totally ROCK for reviewing each chapter!  that really means so much to me!

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 2: One o' Them Days

Still fun ... can't wait to see Edward again.



Author's Response:

thanks, hon!  i can't wait to see what you have to say about future chapters!

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Proposals

Fun 1st chapter!



Author's Response:

hee hee!  thanks!

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

hahahaha... what a coincidence.... Bella, u can't hide or runaway for too long... LOL... "the Edward"?? ^_^ v creative!



Author's Response:

LOL!  thanks, hon!  that chappie was lots of fun to write.

and i have to say that you are all kinds of awesome for reviewing each chapter!  i love it!  thank you!

Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2010 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 4: Moving Day

HAH?? was E's appearance juz a mere illusion? what's going on? so B didnt have place to stay now?



Author's Response:

mmm, i wouldn't mind hallucinating about towelward!  and dontcha worry about poor Bells -- things always work out somehow for her!

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