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Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

i cant get enough of this



Author's Response:

ooh, sounds like you've got it bad, just like edward!  ;-)

thanks, hon!

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

Ooookay I know and believe me I understand that 70 or so reviews and climbing is an absolute dream  for a writers fic but Come On Where Is Everyone...   I love the humor...the connections...the monologue and it is so well written too!  Chapter 7 is awaiting and I can't wait!

Thanks for Writing!!!



Author's Response:

hahaha!  i just became your very own fangirl!  you rock! 

i had wondered the same thing, then decided to just shut up about it b/c it sounded so arrogant.  i really should try to pimp it out to more fanfic sites, but i just haven't.  if you happen to feel so inclined, feel free!  (hint hint!)  it's also posted on FFnet and TWCS, but i still don't have too many total reviews.  kind of a bummer, but... oh well.

the reviews i do get always make me feel great, so i know that my work is appreciated, and i really don't need anything more than that.  i will admit that i have never written as many reviews as i have since i became an author myself!  now i see the true value to them! 

so i thank you most sincerely for your kind words! 

--jen

Reviewer: liefrebrus (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

i absolutely love this story!

i dont really take the time to stop and tell most authors that but this is by far one of my favorites. the grammar and the flow is amazing i love it

please continue soon!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you SO much!  *blushes*

i have so much fun writing this, and i LOVE to hear readers say that they enjoy it, too!  whoo-hoo!

i happen to be a bit of a proofreading nazi myself, and obvious typos bug the crap outta me, so i try to self-edit as well as i can.  that said, my two beta-readers are just phenomenal!  they point out lots of silly grammar mistakes that i miss b/c i've read it so many times.  if you ever need a beta, i can't say enough good things about Project Team Beta -- they totally rock!

and my twi'd v-beta is astounding -- i just posted this chappie yesterday afternoon and i woke up to a bunch of reviews!  i'm still amazed by that fast turnaround.

i had 3 hours alone, without the kids, yesterday and was able to write 2 more pages of chapter 7.  it's still not done, but getting closer!

thank you again for the wonderful review.  it totally made my day!

Reviewer: iwannabe (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

Honestly, why do boys do that?  get so close to your face and you can just reach out and kiss them?  but you know you can't?  Sigh...I feel for Bella, I really do.  Awesome chapter :)



Author's Response:

i know, right?  but i have a feeling that once bella embraces her inner vixen, edward will no longer be safe!  ( i can't wait to write that chapter!)

thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sparky Strikes Again

Bella better let Edward draw her again. I want the lust to grow between them.

Author's Response:

not to worry.  it only gets bigger from here... hee hee hee.

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

LOL! the Glamazon! Brilliant!

oh poor Edward... he really needs a single place... to have to suffer with the little fella until he gets to the showers.. just not right !

that Rose is a feisty one! can't wait to see how that all turns out!

great chapter my dear! sorry it took me so long to get to it! 

MWAH!

steph



Author's Response:

thanks!  so glad you liked rose!  she's a lot of fun to write, and actually one of my favorite characters.  so many possibilities...

i have to say -- is someone a little addicted to exclamation points?  hmmmmm?  (sorry, i couldn't resist!  SNARK!)

about the timing -- pshaw -- i'd rather read a new NTE than a review.  (god, did i really say that?!)  i really want to know what you have in store for theatregirl!  yeah, that's random, but that's how my mind works. 

smooches right back at-cha!

--jen

Reviewer: KathyK (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Pretty good, even if it was a dream. I hope it's not too much longer before it is reallity. Well, as real as fiction is. Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

haha!  i know what you mean.  as for timing, who knows?  these crazy kids have minds of their own...

thanks for reading!

Reviewer: memphis76 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Like your story!!

The lemon was great i think....



Author's Response:

thank you!  i was a little nervous, but glad you liked it!  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: memphis76 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 3: Beethoven and Daffy Duck


Reviewer: annie_mpf (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Proposals


Reviewer: Morbidmuch (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

LOVE this story, and you need to update asap!



Author's Response:

thank you SO much!  i hope to update soon -- chap 6 is written, it just needs to be beta'd for grammar, etc.  thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: aly1390 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

it's just one mishap after another.. i feel bad for bella but so glad that she lives so close to edward. hehehehe..... really hot dream at the begining by the way. ;) can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

yeah, bella is Queen Klutz, but that's why i love her.

glad you liked the lemon -- hopefully the next one will be easier to write!

Reviewer: Olinka (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

hehe, Bella saw Rosalie naked :)



Author's Response:

hahaha!  thank for reading!

Reviewer: Ma Cherie ya habebi (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 10:26 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

I like Edward so far but I hope he becomes a bit more dominant/agressive about his advances. I know he has to be gentle with bambie/bella but it is part of his undeniable sex appeal. love little alice and I am looking forward to character development with Rosalie and Emmett. Thanks for the post



Author's Response:

yes, i definitely agree with you.  nobody likes a wimpy edward.  have no fear, things start to heat up soon.

these kids are so fun to write -- i have them fully realized in my head, and then i just let them talk to me.  wait a minute, that didn't sound right...  ;-)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

I like the story. Rose needs to mellow. Tanya - that should be interesting



Author's Response:

hmm, rose = mellow.  wouldn't that be like alice = lethargic?  hee hee!  and yeah, i can have a lot of fun with tanya.

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

EEPP!!!! 

:D LOVE this! Please post more~



Author's Response:

thanks!  chap 6 is finished, just being beta'd for grammar, etc. 

um, what does "eepp" mean?  my dirty little mind read it as "edward eats pretty pussy" but i'm sure you didn't mean that.  or did you?  ;-)

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

I like that story. Yeah what kind of history do Edward and Tanya have?

 



Author's Response:

thanks! 

their history... hmm.  guess you'll have to wait a bit for that one.  sorry to be a meanie, but i don't like to give too much away too soon.  i don't follow an outline, so my writing is pretty organic, meaning that my first ideas may transform into something else while i write.  so while i have an idea about their history, i won't actually know for sure until the words are on the screen!

Reviewer: bigsis0829 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

The day she moves in she manages to crush Rosalie's leg. That is amazing even for Bella. On the bright side, she and Edward are practically neighboors. Want could be better than that? Post Soon!



Author's Response:

i know, poor bella.  she even makes ME feel graceful by comparison!  (maybe that's why i write her that way!!)  and being nearly neighbors is great, usually.  until they see things they wish they hadn't.  hmmm.

Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Great story! I'm loving the plot so far. I can't wait to see what will happen with Bella and Edward living in the same building.



Author's Response:

thank you!  i'm having so much fun writing it, and i love hearing that others like to read it. 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Poor Bella! I mean I'm glad to see the issue with Rose starting to resolve itself.



Author's Response:

i know, right?  but bells will be ok.  she always is.  she just seems to attract a lot of trouble while she gets there, is all!

Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Figures that Rose is the Glamazon...she would be much more fun to sketch now w/the cast.  Edward did a good job at smoothing things over w/Rose, but I have a feeling that Tanya is gonna be a problem later.  And when do we, I mean, Bella, when does she get to see Edward practically naked again?  What, its a serious question...can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

hahahahahahaha!  LOL!  all in good time, my sweet, all in good time!

thanks for the review!

Reviewer: amydee (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Loved the lemon, you and hunny did a wonderful job!

So...Tanya huh?  ::sigh::  Wonderful.  A jealous past fuck already?  As her new RA?  This poor girl just cannot catch a fucking break, can she?

And Rose the Glamazon art model?  Dear God...I want to hug her to my bosom.

Or...perhaps direct her to the shower on Edward's floor.

j/s



Author's Response:

i almost snarfed my coffee reading your review!  i loved it!  and yeah, i wouldn't mind helping edward out in the shower, either.  there's no reason to soil the tile if i'm available, right?  eww, that sounds so wrong!!!

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Proposals

Like it so far . Very good for your first. It has nice flow and Artward is always good.

Merrily

Kat



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  that means a lot to me!  i'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: ECsparkles4me (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

Just found this story and I love it!! Can't wait for chap 6!



Author's Response:

thanks for the encouragement!  i hope the wait won't be too long.

Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: A Rose By Any Other Name

This story is really good.  So far, very funny, interesting and well written.  Keep it up.



Author's Response:

thank you so much!  those are some powerful words you used.  i'm really glad you are enjoying it.  thanks for reviewing!

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