Reviewer: Jennixst (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 22-Damage Control
This is really awesome. I bet Jane didn't like the mouthful of Jake she got! Really enjoyed reading your tale and ma looking forward to the next update.:-)
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!!!
Reviewer: Hopeforastalemate (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2010 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 22-Damage Control
Nice, but way too short! All this does is ask more questions. Please give us more! Update soon!
Author's Response: I knew this was short I will update soon!
Reviewer: esmessong (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 1-Merging Families
nice start!!
Author's Response: Thank you! It gets better keep reading! :)
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
Okay, now you're just in trouble! First I'm thinking they may pull this offand you dash my hopes , with yelping and screaming. Not nice! Hurry and write more, please!
Author's Response: I will try and update as soon as I can...Thanks for the review :)
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
A loud yelp! Who's hurting Jake? Why are you picking on poor Jake?
Good for Rose is Alec dead or will the piece him together? I hop enot. Anything that will cause jane pain is a good thing. Did anyother guard member's get hurt?
Please don't take so long to update!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Updates will come as soon as I can...don't fret...I have another story now...but I work with my followers...Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
:-( Please don't hurt Jake. But it is getting intense. Now I can't wait to see if Jake is ok . Update soon please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!! Don't fret...all will be explained in time...
Reviewer: Jennixst (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
Oh hell no! Please update soon as I love Nessie and Jake and want to know thye are ok.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: BSean (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
Ugh, why the cliffies you're killin' me! Love the story though:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I have always heard...always leave them wanting more...
Reviewer: Hopeforastalemate (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
I loved the chapter, but I hate cliffhangers! Please update soon and put us out of our misery.
Please?
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I have a new story as well but updates are coming...
Reviewer: kristaa19 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2010 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
oh this is sooo good
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: lilangel_me (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2010 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
I just found your story and started reading today. I am quite impressed. This is a great story - I love that Harry Charles is around! I sure hope that charlie doesn't have a heart attack. I am such a happy ending girl, I hope you are too. You have some good insite as to writing from differant POV's. You keep the story in cannon very well - the only peice of advice I have to offer is when writing from Edwards POV - add a little more of other peoples thoughts. he hears them all and it's gotta get noisy in his head. Thanks for writing and please conitnue to update. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you for the awesome review. I saw Edward's POV as he wouldn't want to hear private thoughts even though he does already...But I also like your suggestion and may integrade it in later chapters. Thanks again!
Reviewer: teamwolf (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 9-Past, Present, Future
its really nice fic i like readin about them getin on with thinks with out to much crazy like half the family dies and then the other half are on the run of sumthin rubbish like that so yep im enjoying this fic lots, but why is jacob takin on the pack dont they have leave soon with the hole not ageing thing? i 4t they should of left ages ago
Reviewer: twilightbi (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
More, more, more! You can't let Charlie die now! He's got to survive and we have to see if Nessie and Jake get married and have a baby!
Thanks for a Great Story!
:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review... Updates again soon.
Reviewer: robert cullen (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
What the hell is she thinking!!!!
Author's Response: She wanted to feel something worse than death...
Reviewer: AnnieBella (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
Great cliffie. Can't wait to read more. Update soon :D
Author's Response: Thank you! Update soon to come.
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
Damn Bella! That was pretty brave. I understand what her thinking is….. anything to take away the emotional pain, which is sometimes worse than physical...but ouch. I'm sure Jane enjoyed that little exchange a lot!
What’s the deal with Ness? Is she going to be ok? Why is she running a fever? I would think she would be healed by now…..
I can’t wait for Bella’s POV!
Author's Response: It will be okay...every girl remembers her first period, or first couple...magnify that by 10 to 20. All her life's cycles into one. Anyone would feel weak. Sorry for the gorey details. She is still growing so she will have these issues. Fully grown and she will be good. Thanks for the review and Bella's POV should explain more.
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
Oh I love it UPDATE ASAP!
Author's Response: Thank you and I will!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
Holy Shit!
Author's Response: Indeed!
Reviewer: brittlovesyou (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
OMG! I LOVE how Bella calls Jane a BITCH!!! lol That is amazing!
Author's Response: I thought that would be a good punch. Bella has always been so meek and the true wicked side comes out when her family is in danger. Keep reading it gets better! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
You killing me with the cliffs!!!! This was the perfect next chapter, it helped answer some of the stuff that Ness 'saw'. But how did she see? And why did Bella's shield leave her? And man I hope Bella beats the shit out of jane!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I know I have said this before but the next chapter will tell all. Its from Bella's POV so it should be easier to understand. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
I know how painful Charlies impending death will be for Bella, but what possessed her to goad Jane like that? This can lead to no good outcome for the Cullens. I hope they all get the hell out of Volterrai in one piece.
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! The next chapter is Bella's so it will explain more...
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 20-The Verdict
I know how painful Charlies impending death will be for Bella, but what possessed her to goad Jane like that? This can lead to no good outcome for the Cullens. I hope they all get the hell out of Volterrai in one piece.
Reviewer: JaobsStephanie (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2010 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Terms
This was great! You have me on the edge of my seat. Is nessie getting new powers now that she is maturing?? I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them coming!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! Future chapters will reveal what is happening...
Reviewer: tammgrogan (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2010 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Terms
great story!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Terms
I think Ness's gift is getting stronger evolving. I think it's because she is reaching maturity. Is she somehow able to tap into other's gifts, like when she projects her thoughts into others, while she in their heads, she can share or take their gift and use it?
I don't know so please update soon! Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: Updates will be coming soon. Patience will be rewarded.
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