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Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 22-Damage Control
This chapter and pov...equals the "Worst transition from a major development EVER"!!!!!. Bad writer , BAD writer!. *hitting you on the nose w/ a rolled up newspaper*
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2013 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 21-A Fighting Pardon
Whoa!!! nice one. Rosalie Tearing Alec to pieces, nice!!!!
Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
I love this storu, and am waiting on pins and needles for the ending.
Thank You - Xanath
Reviewer: BellaEd (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
Hi Rachael,
just wondering if you will be finishing this story? You've done such a fantastic job with the storyline! I've tried to be patient :-)
hope everything is okay with you.
Reviewer: Nikkie Volturie (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2012 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 9-Past, Present, Future
Hey!
Just a question, is this a Reneslec story or a Jacosmee story?
Thanks.
<Nikkie Volturie>
Reviewer: WhenLifeOffersYouADream (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1-Merging Families
Enjoyed the first chapter, will be reading more. Good Job!
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Reviewer: tbmiele (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2012 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 19-The Terms
Just wanted to say I love your writing please write more. This is the best spin-off i have read on breaking dawn. And i am a big reader just so you know i think you should write more because you are really good. Thank you for writing this.
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Reviewer: xanath (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 35-The Big Day
This is the only story that I have read that takes into account the problem of shape-shifters and wedding rings. The others I have read have skipped that or just had traditional rings then skipped what is done with them when a wold phases. It their cloths shred them a ring would burst also. Cudos for defining an answer!!!
Xanath
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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
Hey welcome back! I loved the chapter! I'm happy for Ness and Jake a little boy will be sweet. Ella seems wonderful I'm happy for her and Seth! If they both saw peace I'm thinking that Carlisle becomes one of the leaders?
Update soon! Dixie
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Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
Another gifted child for Jacob and Renesmee! Every time they think calm and quiet may prevail, some other supernatural miracle appears! This is truly a magical family and I have loved reading of their adventures. If Ella and Alice are correct, could the peace everyone craves be a possibility? Wouldn't that be a fabulous happening? Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
....What? Ok, i'm thoroughly confused....
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 10:14 AM · On: Chapter 32-A New Treaty...Surprise
omg. I didn't see this comming at all!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 24-Bella's Grief
okay, i have to ask about the sister. where is she?
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 17-The Journey Begins
I'm glad to see Nessie and Jacob as a couple...and I'm glad that Edward is being nice about it. LOL.
I am sorta scared for them though. I hate the Volturi
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 13-Change of Heart
ok. i get it now. cool idea with the biting
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 12-Joy Rides and Cliff Dives
wait what? did she just drink his blood?
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 4-Mental Rambles
this is a really cute story so far!
Reviewer: Chope (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 37- Futures Certain?
That was great. Can't wait to see what Aro says. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: kjhlove (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2012 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
finish it fas please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Working on it! Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: HattieGood (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
Please hurry and write the last few chapters. I enjoy it when you tell the story from Jacob or renesmee's point of view.
Author's Response: I will work on that for the last few Chapters. Thanks for the suggestions. I will update as soon as I can. Thanks again!
Reviewer: kjhlove (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
hurry and finish it please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I am working on it...I promise. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: tnakcurleygirl20 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
great story i get so lost in it for hours at a time please keep writing
Author's Response: I enjoy reading such reviews! I am glad you have enjoyed it so far. Thanks! :)
Reviewer: littlemiss185 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
Great chapter! Love the story! Update again soon please!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
Ella Hope seems to truly be a force of nature, as in, she can manipulate the elements of nature. That's pretty damn amazing! Look out Volturi, I think you have met your match!
Author's Response: I thought that would be a good twist. Ella Hope is from my own imagination and I love her for it. Thanks for the great review!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2011 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 36-Interesting Development
OMG Ella rocks. If I were to ask for anything it would be continuing the Ella and Seth story! I would love to know what their life would be like it 20, 50, 100 years, Maybe the Cullens defeating the Volurri and starting a new more balanced governing body.
Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: I am debating on what will come next...Thank you for the awesome review! It always pleases me to read how others love the stories I write! Thanks! :)
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