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Reviewer: lknots (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Just One Fix
I'm sure they'll meet later, I still can't believe Bella's thoughts, that she'll enjoy this while she can and then go back to her dull life. I don't think she'll ever be able to go back, only forward, which is a good thing. Can't wait for the next update! Thank you for writing!
Author's Response: We'll have to see if she finally wakes up, huh? I agree, it would be awfully hard to go back.
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:08 AM · On: Just One Fix
Damn girl. I wish not only did something like this happen in my life (who doesn't...if we're being honest huh? *L*) Ok, that just made me sound like a horny house-wife, but I think the idea of someone wanting you that badly, must be a empowering thing - especially having the option.
I laughed heaps at Bella's inspired present for Edward and blushed in second-hand embarrassment at what he used it for. *L*
Author's Response: Hell, I wish I had that for real, too!!! Thanks for the lovely review!
Reviewer: Debra Fox (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:57 AM · On: Just One Fix
Way to go, Bella! The note she left for "Stranger" was PERFECT! That was a really close call when the limo went by. I wonder what Edward and Bella's reaction would have been if they saw each other.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I thought he might like finding a note from her.
Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:08 AM · On: Just One Fix
Loved this chapter! My eyes got big - okay, almost bugged out of my head -- during the limo scene. Played out in my head like a movie. You're an awesome writer!
Loooooove the Fuck Songs playlist, btw.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I try to write things as I see them in my head, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wouldn't you just love to spend the day with Edward and an ipod full of fuck songs???
Reviewer: biddyswife (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Just One Fix
W O W. Jacob sounds like a real nice guy!! NOT! I just loved Bella leaving a reminder of what he'd missed for Edward. That was so HOT. OMG. It got suddenly very warm in here when I read both parts!! Phew please write more soon. Can't wait too long. Am like Bella, can't keep away!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked their little self lovin sessions!! ;-)
Reviewer: Leanne (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:00 AM · On: Just One Fix
Oohh I do love this story!
Author's Response: Yay!! I'm happy to hear it!
Reviewer: kaybrans (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:34 PM · On: Caramel
wow!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:25 PM · On: Skin
Haha, I got lucky ;) Guess I even beat the tweets seeing as they came in way after. I'm good!
Author's Response: Very very good!!
Reviewer: caligal13 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:22 PM · On: Just One Fix
HEARTS Eagle vs. Shark. Still liking this a lot--but still worried how you will end it...and still looking forward to butter :)
Author's Response: Yay!! First to mention E vs S!!
Don't worry, the butter will be delicious, and the ending will be happy. Eventually. ;-)
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Just One Fix
Love this chapter even though they don't connect directly. There is a deep sense of longing and hunger for one another by way of the separation that is needed for the story to unfold. They both need each other desperately right now and it hurts me they are not together....but I can hope! I just hope you don't make us wait too long.....please?
Author's Response: My dear, you will certainly love the next chapter!!! That's all I'm going to say!
Reviewer: emeralddahlia (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:55 PM · On: Just One Fix
Bella is doing the wrong thing but that is her character, she's been deprived far too long to not take the easy way out.
Not a fan of infidelity yet I am reading this, speaks of your wonderful talent.
Good job!
Author's Response: I'm not normally either, in real life. But I have been dying to write this story and always wanted to loosely base it on the original movie, and that girl is engaged. She is even worse about it, because she is perfectly happy with her boyfriend and thinks nothing of cheating on him. I couldn't go quite that far! ;-)
Reviewer: DezLMT (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Just One Fix
The near miss was good but I was hoping that Bella and Jake would argue enough so she would have gotten pissed enough to take him home and stop to visit edward while he happened to be getting ready to finish the job. Cant wait for the next chapter though. And sorry about the 8, it was really only only because I was hoping for super steamy lemonss!!!!
Author's Response: Dude, I can't give it all away up front! ;) lol
Don't worry, next chapter is going to get some tongues wagging.
Reviewer: Rachel000 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:52 PM · On: Just One Fix
This story is great. I'm loving how the characters are playing out.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:51 PM · On: Just One Fix
oh yes they def need to see eachother son
Author's Response: Don't worry, next chapter!
Reviewer: Caius (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Just One Fix
Talk about a near miss. I wonder what would have happened had he seen her then overheard her name. Bella isn't as timid as I first thought. Her inner monologues give me hope that she can be feisty. Oh and Jake, he's a real win, not! Damn, Edward is so HOT! *thud*
Author's Response: Wow, girl, you were ON THAT! It JUST posted!! ;-) I love the enthusiasm!!
Reviewer: Bellina (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:01 PM · On: Snuff
Hot damn! This is a fantastic story thus far! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are liking it!
Don't worry, the next chapter will be up very soon!
Reviewer: LemonLuver (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 10:22 AM · On: Skin
If theres Edward and Hot sex involved..yeah definitely the same place!..I Love the original Edward in Twilight..But I gotta say..I like my Edward a little darker. Thats why I love your stories. You make our little Edward do bad bad naughty things;)
Author's Response: Well, you know, in my opinion, even canon Edward wants to do the naughty naked dance. He's just too shy and polite to admit it!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Snuff
So sad, but probably very real.
Author's Response: His whole situation is very sad right now. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 09:21 AM · On: Caramel
That was steamy goodness.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:42 AM · On: Awake
Was she on drugs or something? Did she commit suicide?
Author's Response: Keep reading! You'll see very soon!
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Let Go
yes i wanna throw things. jeez are the planning on living with charlie
Author's Response: Actually it will come out later that he expects to live at La Push. Not gonna go over well with Bella.
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 07:17 AM · On: Skin
Is Edward a sleeze. He sleeps with a girl that drunk?
Author's Response: What do you mean? Neither of them are drunk here. He has been crying and is upset.
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:48 AM · On: Snuff
Poor Edward...he's got a lot of anger & guilt to deal with. I've had a recent suicide in my family so I know exactly where he's coming from. It sucks. Linda XO
Author's Response: Wow, I'm sorry to hear that, but I'm glad that you think his emotions were realistic. Thanks.
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 06:17 AM · On: Snuff
Wow, so sad,poor Edward. I can't wait to find out more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lknots (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:31 AM · On: Snuff
Just started reading this, so this review is for all chapters so far. Intense! I wonder how long Bella will hold until she breaks up with Jake. Poor bastard, he really should have made more of an effort, shouldn't he?
Looking forward to reading more of this!
And now I want to watch Last Tango in Paris again...
Author's Response: I agree!! Maybe he should have tried a little harder rather than being lazy with her.
I'm happy you found this story. I hope you like the rest of it and let me know!!
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