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Reviewer: LuvsTwilight (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2013 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 16

Is there any chance you will continue this story? I would love to see the reaction of Katilynn's family once they announce they eloped. Your Jackson is a tall glass of water. :O)

Reviewer: ilovemjrv (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2012 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 16

please continue i love it xx

Reviewer: paula2838bu (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 16

Love this story...just found you today and read both Polar and Opposites in ine day. Love these two and can't wait for the wedding and all the riotous stuff that can happen. Great job with the story telling and making the readers know the characters. Can't wait for the update.

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 16

Hahaha! Rob dancing with an aspiring sumo wrestler not that would be a sight to see.

I'm so glad that creepy Chase has been served his eviction papers, what would Katilynn's dad think of him now if he knew what he'd been up to? Las Vegas eh, good luck with telling everyone they're already married or will they keep the other wedding date and have it as a blessing?

Jane x

Reviewer: cgrind1005 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 16

well hell girl......I can't wait to see what happens now. Keep em coming. I am SO enjoying your stories! Carole

Reviewer: mmaspice (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2011 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 16

Addicted to your story! Please update soon. It will be a wonderful break from classes in graduate school.

Reviewer: aprilm405 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 16

Great Chapter!

Chase is such a dick! And I love them going to Vegas best way to go!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!! update soon!! :)

Reviewer: wildcatlizzie (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2011 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 16

LOL. I love it! I can't wait to see how the wedding turns out. :)

Reviewer: LaBellamora (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 16

Yahoo! its wonderful and the wedding is here. :D Thank God someone beat Chases butt. Great chapter.

I am so excited for all you write.

Thanks

Reviewer: LuvsTwilight (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2011 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 16

Chase is nuts but I wonder what Katilyn's father would say if he heard about his behavior? Would he approve? Awesome story!!

Reviewer: wildcatlizzie (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 15

It was good to see this update in my inbox, even if it did take me awhile to get to it. Hopefully the writer's block is gone now. :)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 15

Oh my God, Chase is here, can he not take a hint, is he deaf, dumb and blind?? Mark is certainly a trier isn't he.

Well I think this may be Jackson and Kate's cue to make Chase's stay a very loud and uncomfortable one.......if you know what I mean, lol. Hopefully then he will get the message.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 14

Poor Jackson, he's just fighting an uphill battle with Kate's family the whole time, when will they ever listen to what she is saying and take all information from third parties with a mega dose of salt? As for Chase, well, grrr Chase grrrr!!!

Trust Kate to not do as she's asked and cause all the rumours in the first place.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 13

Awww a boy, you know traditionally a boy would have one godmother and two godfathers, so they could have Rob and Jackson, if they're throwing tradition out of the window then they can have as many as they like, lol.

I can't believe the guest list is up to 550, never leave it to a man, you'll either have too many or not enough. Oh my God, Kelly, she is so selfish, she should just be grateful to be invited, they could have gone to Vegas.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 13

How long is Mark going to continue to shove Chase in Kate's face, I mean what has he told Chase? Get my daughter away from Jackson and I'll make you partner? He really needs to let Kate live her own life or he could lose her forever.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 11

So Kate is coming round to the baby idea now that she's had a little scare. I'm glad that she's not pregnant yet, I really do think they should give themselves a couple of years of married life before bringing ankle biters into it, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 10

Finally they manage not to get cockblocked. I can't believe Mark, he just can't leave it alone for 5 minutes can he. I wonder what Jackson's Dad has to say about him.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 9

Lol, all their friends love lives keep interfering with theirs, I think they should turn their phones off at 9pm and let tham all deal with their own lives during the night. It's a good job they're not trying to get pregnant because it just wouldn't be happening, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 8

Awww, more baby talk. They should really enjoy getting married and have some alone time before a baby, 'cos everything changes then and things are never ever quite the same again.

Lol, I can't believe Rob and Sarah, Rob thinking it's his and Sarah being completely disinterested. I still can't believe she hasn't told Ben and that was a total surprise about them being fuck buddies, she kept that quiet, is she that ashamed? If she is I really don't think she should be having this baby, it will tie them togeter for the rest of their lives.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 7

Lol, I take it that's her Dad on the phone wanting to charm her into giving up Jackson for a nice lawyer boy with a steady job and the possibility of running for congress in years to come when he's all grown up? Give it up Daddy dearest Kate is her own woman.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 6

Ooooh angry sex is yummy, lol.

What is Sarah going to do, is she going to keep the baby? I realise people may hunt me down with lit torches etc, but she really doesn't have to have the baby, of course I know nothing of her beliefs, but she always has a choice, just saying.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 5

I can't believe that Mark was like that and said all of those things to his daughter, he obviously thinks that women are incapable of making the right choice for themselves or he is just interested in furthering his own career? I think Mark is only happy when everyone is doing as he tells them to.

I feel sorry the Kate has had to see her Dad this way and I hope she doesn't let him dictate to her, it's her life and at the end of the day her Dad won't be around forever.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Sarah, freaking out like that and poor Rob having a girl freak out on him and it's not even his fault, lol. If I was Sarah I'm not sure that I could wait until getting home to take a pregnancy test, it would just play on my mind until I knew one way or the other.

I hope this goes well for Jackson, although I have a feeling it won't.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 06:59 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh dear, so Mark is not the forgiving type then. Surely he'll come around when he sees how much this is going to hurt his daughter??

I love how Jackson is so protective over Brittney, he's right they won't have many more sibling times like that one, each one needs to treasured.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 2

Hmm, why is Jackson so reluctant to let Kate tell her parents about the engagement? Is he still in Mark's bad books? Is Mark old fashioned and would expect to be asked for permission to ask for his daughters hand and Jackson hasn't done this? Ooooh Im intrigued.

Jane x

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