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Reviewer: zoe1982 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 3
Crap! I'm hooked! This is heartbreaking
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 1
With a "homeless guy"? Jeez Bella. What his story you think? Wonder why he chooses to not say anything.
Reviewer: tkeaton1 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 9
EDWARD....he is too stubborn just like Joe said! Ugh! I feel awful for bella, poor thing is seriously putting herself out there for the man she loves. Please tell me Edward wakes up soon and realizes how much she really cares for him!
Reviewer: zoe1982 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is too good! It makes me want to know more about the story
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 9
Why does Edward always overthink everything? Please don't let him leave again; I don't know if Bella could survive another heartbreak! Love the story so much!
Reviewer: Chiquitaf16 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
This chapter on it's own was beautiful it actually made me all misty eyed.
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 9
Arg! Really good. Can't wait to read more. Edward needs to wake up! LOL!
Reviewer: klingie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
Damn it Edward....DON'T U DARE LEAVE HER AGAIN!!!!!
Reviewer: 4everintwilight (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
I adore this story like you don't even know. But I have to say that Taken is my absolute favorite. Are you adding it here too soon? I've read all three of your stories over on FFN and I keep re-reading Taken because I can't get enough!
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Author's Response: Thank you. I have considered posting "Taken" here but at the moment it is just not possible. The first 10-15 chapters need a lot of work from both me and my beta before it meets the standards of this site. The first chapters have never been read through or beta'ed and I actually cringe a little when reading them because there are so many things I want to change and so many mistakes in both grammar and language. Eventually I will look it over and possibly post it here, but it won't be for a while because I simply don't have the time.
Thank you for reading. :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 9
i just hope that the only thing that your gonna make him do is go in that room and explaine why he was acting so strange and make it right are you trying to get thing thrown at your head
Reviewer: VampyreAngel (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hugs and tissues! So sad.
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 9
Hmm... I think you've just made me very grumpy. I guess I shouldn't be surprised, every single AH story follows the same dang formula. Why I keep reading is beyond me. Oh yeah, maybe because Edward is worth it- most of the time. You better make him worth it! *rounds up a mob complete with torches and pitchforks* J/K LOL!!
Update soon, please.
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
God damn it all to hell! Don't you dare leave her Edward! I will come there and smack some sense into you. Believe me, it's not a pleasant experience.
Reviewer: Odenc (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 9
Don't let him leave ...noooo!!!
Reviewer: lolabean (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 9
So...Ive spent about two hours (maybe more, I dont really know!) reading up to this point; I think this story is amazing. So insightful and touching, but now Im going to be tearing my hair out waiting for another update...so update soon please, and put me out of misery!! I have to go back to Physica revision now :( XxLolaxX
Reviewer: La Tua Cante (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 9
I love this story, it really shows Bella's good heart.
I am a little worried that the second last line and the "someday" sounded to me a little like he's thinking about leaving.
xxx
Reviewer: harrypotterrx (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
Awww get him to come back!
One of the best fanfics ever btw.
Reviewer: Flowergirl82 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 9
Okay, I understand Edward somehow, but does he have to be such a stupid ass about it?
Ungh! This is soooo frustrating. If he decides to leave, I swear, I´ll.... jadsiikpfjdsipjhaiohghfds
Great update! ;D
Author's Response: I know, I know. So typical of Edward. *Sigh* That boy needs a good ass-kicking.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh Edward no! Please don't let him just leave her! He can't keep leaving her. Eventually she won't be willing to take him back!
Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 9
Oh dear, he's going to bail isn't he, without a note or anything........big douchebag if he does
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 9
NO! Bad Edward. Don't leave her! *Sigh* Fix this PLEASE?
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 9
Excellent chapter I love how Edward is being such a dumbass. Can't wait for more
Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 3
((hug)) you are fucking brilliant at this. x
Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 9
He cannot leave again! These two crazy kids are just adorable together!
Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 9
please dont make him leave again, that would break Bella. loved this chapter x
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