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Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am sure Edward is missing Bella as much as she is missing him! She has to find him soon. I would be scared out of my mind for him too. I can't wait for Bella to talk to Alice. I love this story!!! Great job...thanks so much!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 4
Awww this is so hard...its been three weeks! THREE WEEKS!!! Bella is a wreck...I wonder how Edward has fared? Is he ok?
Yay Angela is going to help!! I do hope they find each other soon!
*looks at author with pleading eyes...please, pretty please update soon*
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
Oh my god...I can't stop crying. God, I hope she find him. Please let her find him!!! This is just amazing to me. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Reviewer: Mrs_Dynamint (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
I just read all four chapters and all I can say is OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH. I desperately want them to get together and fix each others broken selves. This story is definetely one of my favorites of all time- the characters, the humor , the imagery, the sex... everything is just too good for words. Please don't keep us hanging and update soon.
-Mrs. D.
Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 4
“Now who could give that Fucker guy a lesson in run-on sentences?” she asked with a small smile.
“Faulkner,” I said automatically. HAHAHAHAHA! It may not have been the most earth-shattering line in the chapter, but it just struck me as so funny! :)
My heart just aches for both E&B. They truly need each other. This is a great story. I read all the chaps on here and then went looking for them elsewhere... but I had to leave a review here.
Reviewer: Amie Roberts (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love Angela... What a great friend.....Great Story. Please keep it coming....
Reviewer: Mav (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 4
Loved it!!! More soon, please!
Reviewer: SonnieShine (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 4
Just found this, and it is so heartbreakingly b!eautiful! I can not wait for more
Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 3
AWWWWWW! *hugs* I really like it please continue! ^_^
Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
just...vow!
Reviewer: littlebells (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 3
You have me hook, line, and sinker! Holy crap! I am very interested in finding out Edward's back story. BEautifully written and I like both POVs. :)
Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 4
that was amazing.. thank you so much! My eyes are all watery and shit... anyway... utterly and officially hooked.. please update soon! (and don't keep them apart for too long!)
Reviewer: Edwardina (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is so unusual! Really, truly lovely -- heartfelt and has so much more depth than most fanfics. Please keep writing!!! :)))
Reviewer: Ready4Jasper (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really like your writing style.
Was a little surprised when she "jumped into bed" with him so quickly but then it really worked. I was not surprised that she woke up alone.
Reading onward now...
Reviewer: k80cue (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hi
Have just read this from start to this chapter (4) - I am really enjoying it.
I hope that Bella finds Edward soon and that he lets her help him, after all they belong together.
If he lets her help him maybe she can help him get over not being able to speak.
Reviewer: Niluvien (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love the story please keep up the good work.
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
i really can't wait for the next chatper.... i hope bella finds edward soon!
Reviewer: GreatEscape (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
Come back Edward!!!
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 2
This just breaks my heart, but I love it!!! Great job...thanks!
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 4
poor Bella, can't wait to read more soon x
Reviewer: megsten (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 4
awww i hope Alice is nice about it and doesn't hang up on her.
i am really enjoying this story...keep it up! next chap in EPOV pweassse?
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
this was fantastic!
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG...this is so awesome!!! I hope she finds him. I can't wait to get caught up. Great job...thanks so much!
Reviewer: Equivamp (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 4
this story is amazing. its sad and sweet and steamy all at once. i can't wait to read more and i am so gonna pimp this out on my blog. update soon!
Reviewer: Bella Frenzy (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2010 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh very interesting story.....make me so curious... Cant wait 4 next chapter...keep writing n I'll keep reading ur story. Hope u can update faster *wink*
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