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Reviewer: ImCurious (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 6
Really loving the story! Keep up the good work, hope you post again very soon! Curious
Reviewer: Synecdoche (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
sooooooooooo good! More, please, more!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
Thank heavens she finally got him home! I love your Joe character too - he is awesome! I hope we meet the Cullen family down the line? Great story - can't wait for more chapters!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is so sad. Why did he have to leave. Poor Edward, what happen to him?
Reviewer: Miliejolie (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 6
aww so sweet!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
Wonderful chapter! I am hoping for happiness soon for Bella & Edward!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
(Grabbing a kleenex)...That's so sad! poor edward! We love you - come back!!!!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 6
As soon as I saw the new photos of Robs new movie Water for Elephants I thought of this story that would be a perfect banner for you story Rob all dirty and greesey ridinding on the edge of a box car no matter what he wears that smile he has on his face is still worth a million bucks by the way I love the direction you have taken this I am putting this out to all my cyber friends to read your chapter with the together that night was top notch you deserve to be read
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 1
Wow - that was a fabulous chapter! But then Edward left.....oh no! Please bring him back!
Reviewer: tkeaton1 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
I really like Joe! He is a sweetie! So glad they found Edward
Reviewer: aprileaster (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
Really loving it!
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 6
First of all, I *heart* Joe big time! :)
Thank goodness for Angela and her quick thinking with her recorder so the police would go looking for Edward. I'm glad that they were able to go back to the shelter where Joe had Edward's back and would ring when he returned.
*LOL* @ Renee and her practically having a conniption over Bella ringing for advice on how to take care of a sick man. When she had to basically promise to strip naked in front of a fire for some ritual I actually snorted with laughter.
Take care of Edward Bella; he certainly needs you!
Reviewer: amwine (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 6
I am so glad Edward is there with Bella and she is able to take care of him. I'm also glad that Joe stayed there with them! Great job...thanks!!!
Reviewer: Indianwalker (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
love it!
Reviewer: Ala (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 6
I LOVE this storyyyy!!!
Reviewer: sevanderslice (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
So Edward talks in his sleep in this one, that's a reversal. Great chapter, I'm so glad they're back together again!
Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
There are good people in both the military service and the poilce service, but complacency runs rampant everywhere. It's too easy to become jaded. Good chapter, keep it coming.
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 6
What a fantastic story, found this while looking through titles and wanted to check this out. LOVE IT!!! Will be fav this and eagerly looking forward to your next update!
Reviewer: twistedbytwilight (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
He's back! Love this story, so glad you reunited them so quickly. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 6
I'm so glad that Edward is back in the safety of Bella's apartment...even if he IS sick...I'm sure that her TLC will help him be better soon. Thank you for crafting such a wonderful story. Unfortunately too many of the homeless out there are people with military backgrounds suffering from PTSD or something like that as well as people with mental illnesses or those who've just fallen on hard times. It's important for us to remember that not everyone out there is a con artist. Please update soon!
Reviewer: robskitten (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story! Bella is so caring; Edward is almost 2 good 2 b true. And their friend Joe seems 2 b one of the good guys. Love the way Angela got the cops 2 man up n do their jobs!! Keep it up gf!! You're doing great!
Reviewer: Stratyllis (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 6
What about if some of us are Wiccan? I really don't appreciate you making fun of my religion. I liked this story too.
Author's Response: I'm not religious myself and if I have offended you I apologize for that. However, I do believe that I wrote a fairly average reaction to Wiccan religion seeing as Bella has no experience with it. I personally have no issues with any religion and was merely trying to convey that Bella has seen her mother go through a lot of different phases and religions over the years. If that makes you quit the story that is of course your choice.
Reviewer: timidvampire (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 6
thank goodness they found him. I love Joe!! great chapter x
Reviewer: peltohen (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 6
I love this story, it's deep enough ewith a little hint of light. Can't wait for more so keep it coming!
Reviewer: Jessybubblz (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 6
aaaaawww :) uh-MAZ-ing! well, duh!
thank you so so so so so much x 1,000,000,000 for updating so fast!
if it was up to me, this story would DEFINITELY be top 10 most faved! :D
keep writing! can't wait for the next update!
xxx
jess.
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