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Reviewer: Virginia May (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 8
Awwww... again. Loved it.
Reviewer: maia smith (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I love this! I rarely write reviews but I'm captivated by your story's beginning and trying to imagine where it will go...The dogtags, the previous marriage, the muteness...Very compelling plus you have a nice writing style!
Reviewer: Classical Vamp (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 8
No, not silly. Karma. And I love this story so much! I look forward to every update.
Reviewer: amvel (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 8
What an ass Mike is!!!! But who cares, Edward and Bella found each other again. I love this story!!!!!
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 8
No it wouldn't be silly to have Mike's dick fall off. it would be really funny. I am glad Edward and Bella are back together, this whole chapter made me smile.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 8
Okay, well I was completely wrong about who it was. Seems really obvious now that I know. Lol give Mike an extremely extremely rare illness that has 'loss of dick' as a symptom, it would be hilarious! Can't wait to read more. Hope Edward stays at Bella's permanently. Please update soon!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:51 AM · On: Chapter 8
good job bella. i really liked the last line.
Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 8
Wonderful story! And, since I can't stand the character, turning Mike into a eunuch would be perfectly fine with me.....in fact, I HIGHLY encourage it. ;) As long as Edward keeps his ginormous weiner, it's all good. :P
Reviewer: Flowergirl82 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 7
Wow, what a great story!
I loved each and every bit so far and I can´t wait to read more.
Please update soon, I´m addicted.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Glad Edward's awake :) Judging by Edward's reaction... is it Alice? How did she find them? Did Bella call her? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
Great chapter. Glad Edward's alive, hope he gets better soon. I like Joe and the advice he's giving Bella and Edward. I don't have anything against the army or police either, but we've recently been studying in school how the poorer people in society aren't protected the same way as everyone else by the justice system, so I like how you incorporated that into your story... even though we definitely DO NOT have anything against the police. Can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh no Edward! Will he be okay? Will he go missing again? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 4
aww poor Bella. Hope she fnds him. How is Alice related to Edward? Why is she wealthy when Edward's homeless? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Poor Edward. Hope their paths cross again soon.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Loved EPOV. How did he end up homeless? Will he come back to Bella? Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just started this fic but I love it already, I mean, who wouldnt? Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: owenic (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 7
I just adore this story! I just found it and had to read it through. I think you've set this story up perfectly and look forward to see how you play it out.
I love it!!
Oh, and that's gotta be pin-dick Newton. I hope Bella lets him have it! Mike's walked over her from day one (by the sounds of it) so it'll be good for her to assert herself and kick his ass to the kerb!!
Cheers
Nic
Reviewer: walmartchick (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this story!!!
Reviewer: msbf84 (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love this story!
Reviewer: jewles622 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 7
Wow I can't even begin to tell you how much I love this story! As soon as I started I couldn't stop reading! Not only is it amazingly well written, but the characters captured my heart! Thank you so much for sharing you wonderful story with us! 3
Reviewer: writegina2 (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:11 PM · On: Chapter 7
If reviews make you happy, I'll leave you one because this fic makes me happy... Love. It. Too bad Edward is sooo sick--would've liked him to be able to knock that slimy prick into next week! Mike is always such an ass!
Reviewer: myedward1 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
OMG, this is a fantastic story! Can't wait to see what happens next...I'm sure Mike cock-blocked him...I hope he gets his butt kicked for it :)
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 7
I've just found your story (and read further over on FF) and it's just lovely. Such an unusual premise, and your portrayal of the characters is beautifully done. i look forward to reading more!
Reviewer: PrincessNerra (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 7
I bet it was Mike, that Bastard!
Reviewer: fruitypebbles (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 4
That Fucker Guy...Faulkner.Oh my God. That was so funny!
I really like your story! Glad she is looking for him. As opposed to Canon Bella who sits and pouts for months.
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