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Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
That was heart breaking. Looking forward to the next chapter.
HUGS~~!
Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 9
I guess he is stupid enough to leave her right now
Reviewer: lolabean (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 1
I just stumbled on this gem of a story, and even though its now going to distract me from finals revision I HAVE to read on...its flipping fantastic! (Sorry, British! Thats the ulimate compliment from us lot, we arent all that expressive unfortunatley!) Please keep writing, I cant wait to see what develops! XxLolaxX
Reviewer: NewDAWN (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
WoW! This was just mesmorizing. I never thought I would go for Bella sleeping with a homeless Edward, but this was more beautiful than frightening. Really, your writing is amazing. Now, I know better than to just pick up a homeless man and see if things turn out this well, but really, your writing is so good it made me believe it was a good idea for a moment. Just one.
:D Can't wait to read the next part.
Reviewer: twibec (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 9
I really hope that Edward does not leave, or that Bella can figure out that there is more than meets the eye with Edward. When will she call Alice and find out that (I hope) he still has a family. And what did SHE do to him. War is bad enough but was that really the straw that broke the back. I thnk it is safe to say that I like this story and you have my mind reeling. I look forward to the next chapter, even though I am pretty sure there will be tears and a few four letter words and possible head bonking. Thanks Becky
Reviewer: lionandthelamblove7 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 9
loved the chapter!! Wow. I can't believe he did that! I want to hit him. Loved it and can not wait for more!!
-lionandthelamblove7 .....i'll check out the other story as well....
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2010 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 9
edward is going to run again!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 8
of course I want mike's dick to fall off....hehe...if a small dick falls off in the forest, does it make any sound?? snort snort!
I love the relationship Bella is developing with Edward AND Joe. How nice for Joe to have friends, and something to do, and being able to help Bella and Edward. Bella needs to get him a job at the library! He's sweet and kind, and a reader - it would be perfect for him. He could save up $$ and get back on his feet. And Bella, if you have to, shackle that boy to your bed - don't let him leave!!!!
Angela must get into cahoots with these boys to help it all work out! :)
xoxo
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
fucking NEWTON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 5
FDUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 4
I love Angela, all Angelas. :) And I'm glad ALice might be brought into the search. Pixie Power!!!!!
Gah, poor Bella. Poor Edward, in the snow...what's he going thru, emotionally? Maybe the next chapter will let me know!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 3
I need a hug and a cuddle and a cig and some cocoa and a blankie and a LOTTA cookies!
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
What happened to him??? he needs HELP! VA! STAT!!! something to make him believe in himself again.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
sniffle sniffle....that is just so SAD!!! That note broke my damned heart. :((((
So..is he really homeless? PTSD from service? or is he undercover or something? what is going ON???? (I'm impatient, I know!)
Man, you really have me hooked with this story! Very unique plot line. Kudos!
It is a strange thing when you meet someone and instantly just feel connected and at ease with them. I dated someone once, and felt that within 5 minutes of meeting him....and later dated someone fro 7 years and never felt that sort of connection! Wonder what sort of magic it is. :)
On I go to chapter 2!!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2010 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 8
LOL. Yes make Mike go away. I can't wait for more. XD Update soon PLEASEEEEE?
Reviewer: Nicka (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 8
Excellent chapter loved the sweetness of them.
Reviewer: MaliaMog (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 8
From Chapter 8:
Chapter End Notes:
"I hope everyone enjoyed that.
Leave me a review if you want Mike's dick to fall off. (I can do anything. I'm the writer, lol.) No, that would just be silly...Right?"
concerning author's note: as the Queen of Hearts would say, "OFF WITH HIS HEAD!!!!"
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 7
Fuck Yeah!!!!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
Oh Hell yeah honey have Mike's dick fall off cuz lord only knows he deserves it. I can't believe that ass had the nerve to come back to Bella. Aaahhhh what a selfish bastard. I am relieved Edward was there so maybe the douch can take a hint. I am so excited that Edward is staying for the time being...and hell to the YES that Bella is gonna fight to keep him there! Whoooohoooooo!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 8
Maybe Mike can just get crabs? I can't believe that Bella hasn't gotten a real kiss from Edward yet! I hope that she fixes that tonight!
Reviewer: MaranndaElizabeth (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 8
ohhh, the Mike`s dick thing sounds promising.(;
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 5
Daaaaaamn.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wonder what Alice is like.
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 8
This is a great story! I'm loving it. Oh yeah, I'm all for Mike's member falling off! LOL. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3
Well, fuck.
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2010 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 2
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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