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Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Well written . Not too much info just enough to get the idea. I think you did a fine job to write about a terrible subject. And you did give lots warning about what was coming up.
Looking forward to the rest of the tale.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response: Thank you so much for being so accepting and acknowledging the fact that you have been given a fair warning. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: CrisiP2288 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Edward to the rescue? I think so! Great chapter, things are really getting interesting.
Author's Response: The poor guy got really late. But Bella needs rescuing. The story is finally past the background, I am so glad you guys have take this twist so well! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
i was thinking it might have been out of guilt.. but obviously not from your A/N... hmm i still have no idea how they could be forced into marriage!
Author's Response: The A/N says that he won't marry her to comfort her, you never know...what if guilt does play a role? What if it's something else? I have surprises planned for you guys, I think you all are in for quite a mystery. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
That was heartbreaking. If I were Jasper I would be extremely upset. Edward could have had the decency to call the flower shop and tell Bella he would be late or that he wasn't coming so she could have made other arrangements.
Please update asap. I want to know how Bella is and how Edward is dealing with it.
Author's Response: Jasper has a uniquely deep bond with Bella. It's going to hurt. Bad. Update, will try my best for the coming weekend, but it all depends on how fast the chapter is beta'd since the chapter is completed. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Spin
I honestly have no clue how this is going to jump into the marraige train - perhaps he's losing his work visa (joke).
Author's Response: Heh...I wish. It's complicated but I hope you enjoy what I have planned.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
i was so ready for you to pull a twilight and have edward save the day...but totally didn't happen and not what i was expecting. if i was jasper i would have totally blamed edward and alice for this. but blaming gets us nowhere...it will be interesting to see what will happen and what actually gets them together now.
Author's Response: I know, that was quite unexpected. And exactly, blaming gets us nowhere. I think of it as fate, the exact moment varies but you will undergo what you are destined for. I have a complicated set of events that get us to the marriage, let's hope readers enjoy working through this puzzle. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Vision Clash
I love the almost-instant connection. Absolutely not realistic, but it's a great dream to have. :)
Author's Response: I know, I think that's what stories help us find, a fantasy to enjoy that is far, far way from the real world.
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ooh, I'm very intrigued! Reading on...
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad that the prologue popped into my head. It seems to suck people in. And sometimes they don't come back after reading the second chapter ;D So a good intro is a good start, right?
Reviewer: MarathonKeyGirl (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Holy shit. Update, please!
Author's Response: Holy shit it is ;) Update on it's way...I hope we can have an update by the weekend. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: Mirabel (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
My heart broke as I read Bella's final longing for a reunion with Renee. So well written, thank you for this chapter. I have no idea what either Edward nor Jasper will do, but something tells me it won't be pretty.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Your review is the first one I read something about Renee, that was the hardest part to write, so thank you for acknowledging that. Yup, it won't be pretty. Will PM the preview soon! Have an awesome day!
Reviewer: JRbtsn (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
I kept waiting for Edward to save her!!! but he didn't. :( At least it was him that found her and called for help. Thank you for not going into the gruesome detals of Bella's attack. I got the picture without them. Great writing. I can't imagine what the events would be to make Edward marry Bella rather than wanting to. ;) *hugs* Great stuff!
Author's Response: Hello darling ;)
I know. This is what happens when people run late *sigh*. That's what I call optimism. A complicated set of events will get them married. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
I can admit, I was not expecting Bella to be raped by some strangers in the street and Edward to be the one to find her. I can't wait to see what Edward will do now that he's found Bella.Poor Jasper, I got a feeling he is going to feel so guilty about Bella's assault.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. I know all this is so complicated, it's like saying: everyone is to blame and no one is to blame., both at the same time. There is heartbreak but we'll make it out of it. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: zoe1982 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
That was totally unexpected but it was a great change of pace. Almost all the stories at this point have Edward saving her. Interesting so far. Great writing btw!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. I really am thankful for how graciously you guys are accepting the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
What a terrible thing to happen to someone. I'm thinking Jazz is going to blame Edward. If Bella didn't wait around perhaps it wouldn't have happened. I hope she doesn't end up pregnant. I know i'm just speculating. I hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Lot's of J and E in the next chapter. Yes, if she didn't wait around none of this would have happened, but I guess it's fate. You're not the only one who thinks Bella is pregnant, a lot of the readers are! Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
OMG, poor Bella. Edward will kill those bastards dead and then he will blame himself for Bella being there late in the first place on his behalf. Jasper will also see red and the gentleman in him will want his revenge. Difficult to read but you have stated this is an important key to the story so I trust you that this was necessary. I look forward to the next chapter, am intrigued by your story. Thank you for writing this.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. I promise it's integral to the plot line! Have an awesome day! Will PM the preview soon.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
I have a feeling that Edward will feel very bad for not showing up and that she walked home by herself. Jasper will be furious and blame Edward for not showing up....I hope Bella will be ok.
I can tell something will happen from this because of your comment...Will Bella get pregnant?
I can't wait to see what happens next! Please, please, please update soon?
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Lot's of J and E in the next chapter. The next chapter is complete and heading out for betaing, so I hope to have an update next weekend. Will PM the preview soon! Have a awesome day!
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
I think Edward is staying longer than 2 days.
Author's Response: Hello again!
Maybe. Let's see what happens. You're all in for a shocker. Thank you so much for your review (we made it to 160 reviews with your review!) Have a wonderful day, will PM the preview now. -ED
Reviewer: preet123 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
great chp!i hope you update soon
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The next chapter is ready, and on it's way to being beta'd...which takes a while, aiming for 7-9 days, could be earlier, depends on the betas. Preview to be PMed soon. Have a good day! -ED
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
I love Bella's awkwardness.
Author's Response: I know, I love shy and awkward Bella with a sure, powerful and handsome Edward. Thanks for the review and for coming back. Will send the preview soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
um...I like the story, Bella is driving me nuts though, why won't she talk to Edward? Is he that intimidating? and I don't know about you, but I would never leave my flower shop w/anyone who doesn't really know anything about the business, Bella just has so many opportunities to screw up! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Yes, she is intimidated by him, he won't initiate conversation, he just keeps staring on impassively, he's angry one minute and quiet the next, she really doesn't know what to expect. I know what you mean but Angela is taking a long due day off, which doesn't come easy when you have your own shop. So what does one do? Hand it to the person that you trust a lot, besides it's only for a day. Hope that makes it a little more understandable. Trouble is Bella's middle name, she inevitably runs into it every now and then ;) . Preview will be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: deliac (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 1
OMG speechless!! I love it so far and I haven't even gone to chapter 2! ahhhh
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked it. I thought it would be a good idea to give readers a snippet of what to expect later on in the story. I am pleased to say that the response to the first chapter has been positive. Thanks for leaving a review, would love to hear your thoughts about the other chapters and hope you enjoy them. -ED
Reviewer: pie2moon2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
Jazz really does rock our very dull world!
Author's Response: Oh yes, I agree (pumps fist in Jazz style). Thanks for the review! Preview will be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
Love it
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Glad you liked the chapter. Preview will be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
Wow, Edward has multiple-personality disorder. One minute he's checking her out like hot man on campus, next he's raging angry at her, then next moment he's all shy and embarassed around her.
Looking forward to his visit at the flower shop :)
Author's Response: Hi again,
Thanks for the review! Ha Ha, I know this guy is all over the place. Preview will be PMed soon. Have a great day! -ED
Reviewer: Tulips at Twilight (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2010 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Farewell
Edward must use his cold and abrupt attitude to keep people at arms length. He is protecting his feelings.
I'm looking forward to Edward showing up at the flower shop. Hopefully we can start to see what is really happening in his life soon.
Author's Response: Wow, finally someone who isn't as frustrated with Edward's mood swings. Yup, we are going to be moving faster from next chapter onward, so you we will be seeing what's going to happen in his life. Thanks for the review. Preview to be PMed soon. Have a great day ;) -ED
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