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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
I like this take-charge Jasper! I know he will be there for Bella during this difficult time. I doubt she could be pregant - too soon to know? But I wonder what the test shows? Great cliffie!
Author's Response: Jazz will be there for Bella, but how is she going to handle his overprotectiveness? Promise not to keep you in the dark too long. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: deliac (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
OMG NO!!!! Please don't make us wait for an update!! I love this story! I feel so bad for Bella though! I know you will not keep us in the dark long right? I hope not! Love it love it love it~~~
Author's Response: I promise I won't make you wait too long, I'm just waiting for the next chapter to come back from betaing. Glad you love the story ;)Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Wow - I didn't read your pre-chapter note & was not expecting this, but I know you have a plot full of wonderful ideas! I have not been disappointed yet, so I shall be patient. I am worried about the guilt that Edward will have, since he is (sort of) responsible for her late walk home; Jasper will kill him! Poor Bella...
Author's Response: Hello, I know it was a bit of shocker. Thank you for showing your trust in me, for being patient with me. I will be replying to reviews for chapter 9 as soon as I get done with the next chapter. Yes, Edward did get some from Jazz for the next chapter, didn't he? ;) Thank you again. Have a wonderful day! -ED
Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
i just read this in one night and you stopped it there ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh why **sobs** is she pregnant because OMG that's all kinds of fuck up and Edward better have not been out getting his freak on when he should have been meeting Bella because i would hate him throuh this whole story no matter what i am the queen of Edward gurdges
Author's Response: Edward's reasons will come up soon, I don't think you'll be able to hold a grudge against him for long. Wow, one night, eh? Glad to keep you with me thorough it! Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: Nikki0684 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:59 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
I really hope all the tests come back negative, I don't think she should be put through that. Hope to read the next chapter soon
Author's Response: Promise not to make you wait too long for the results. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: storms (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
This is a good story so far and I feel so bad for Bella but I want to know why Edward didn't show up when he was supposed to. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Edward's reasons will be revealed soon. I know Bella's breaking hearts but I promise things will work out eventually. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: CrisiP2288 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Very well written. I'm very curious to know what the doctor's results will reveal. The anticipation is brutal!
Author's Response: It's coming...won't make you folks wait too long. Thanks for the kind words. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: 1216 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 4 - A Plea
so far, I am enjoying the story. I would like more insight into Edward.. but I am assuming that will come as I read on...
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, Edward will reveal more of himself in a while...
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Wow, leave us hanging, why don't you! Loved Edward and Jazz. And now as to SWAGs: As far as the blood work goes, it's a bit too soon for pregnancy to show (I think). Maybe she has an heretofore undiscovered illness? Or she goes for the trifecta (sp?) - pregnant, with a serious illness, AND an extremely rare blood type. It would go without saying that she would have insufficient funds to cover treatment.....(smile).
Author's Response: That's quite an interesting theory. You're not the only who thinks so :) Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: saene (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
very angst chapter, but lov it.
Author's Response: I know, things will get better eventually! Glad you liked it. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
It would be very hard for me to write about rape so I must give you kudos for such a wonderful job with this chapter.
Author's Response: That's means so much to me. I never know how much to put in and where to stop. Thank for letting me know and thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: heyitsmattkim (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
woah! woah! i love u for this chapter and hate you for this cliffie. i wish with all my heart that no woman had to go through this.
Author's Response: I know...I wish too that no woman ever has to go through this. So you hate me for the cliffie ;) ? Won't keep you waiting long, chapter is on it's way, should be up next week. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: Snickles0203 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
i love this story! i hope bella is not pregnant..i mean didnt she JUST get raped? it seems like its just the same night! dont think they would know that fast! i hope she doesnt have a serious illness either! cant wait to see wtf happened to edward! im impatient for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I promise Edward will make sense soon. The next chapter is gone for betaing. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: TraceyJ (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Wow. What a heartbreaking chapter. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: It's coming...at earliest on Sunday night, probably after. Thank you so much for your kind words and reviewing, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Another good chapter. I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.
Author's Response: I hope you like what I have in mind, thank you for being a loyal reader :) And thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Her thoughts are heartbreaking! Definitely not pregnancy, she was treated on time for the day after pill, I’m crossing my fingers for not STD or uterus damage, so if there is anything wrong could be some previous malady. Jasper was really upset so I can understand his outburst, deep down he is blaming himself as much as he blames the Cullens even though the culprits are others. Still guessing what will bring E & B together
Author's Response: *kisses* Thank you for leaving me reviews on both websites. Keep guessing what brings them together, the union is no longer too far away. You'll be surprised ;)
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
i love jasper! he is amazing :) better than edward *winces slightly* at this point
bella is pregnant isn't she!?
Author's Response: Mixed reactions to Jazz's new side, glad you liked him. I know most hate Edward now, I am postive that won't be the case for long. Hold that anticipation...promise not keep you waiting too long ;) Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
great cliffe cant wait till the next chapter!
Author's Response: It's on it's way. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
Great chapter!
I hope that Bella is ok...I hope she isn't pregnant and I hope she doesn't have an illness.
I knew that Jasper would be mad at Edward...I expected him to yell at Edward, but I never expected him to yell at Alice. Since he said all the things he did, I don't think he'll talk to her for a while.
Please update soon? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I know, most readers are worried for Bella. The fight between E and J was expected, but poor Jazz is in shock. This making him act in ways very unlike him. Won't keep you waiting long for the update:)Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Stand by you
I'm curious how much time had passed from when Edward took her to the hospital and when she regained consciousness? I feel bad for all parties involved. Being raped is bad enough but to have that be your first sexual experience as well is horrible. I'm sure Edward is feeling guilty. If he had shown up when he was supposed to that probably wouldn't have happened. I'm sure Jasper is feeling like he didn't protect her like he should. I hope she lets Charlie know. She needs all the suport she can get. Look forward to the next update.
Author's Response: Yes, I know. It was quite terrible. How Edward feels as well as his reason will be revealed soon enough. Jasper is devastated, more on that coming soon. Thank you so much for your review, teaser to be PMed soon.
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
well i hope jazz has thoughts of suicide cause this is his fault
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I think Jazz will shock people next chapter. How much of a part guilt will play will show in the next chapter. Sending preview now. Have a good day!-ED
Reviewer: vampgirl138 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
You did a really good job with this chapter. Very tasteful and heartfelt. I totally didn't see this one coming. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am glad you thought so. I know...it was quite unexpected. Sometimes, I wonder whether I should have given more of a warning, but I feel that reveals too much of the story. As a reader, I prefer the summary to not reveal too much. The update should be coming any day now...I am really hoping for tomorrow (the chapter is gone in for validation). Thank you for reviewing this chapter, I really appreciate the feedback for this one. I was quite worried about how you all would respond, and I am very thankful that many of you reviewed to let me know your thoughts. Preview coming up now! Good night. -ED
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2010 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
So sad. Really great job with this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am glad you thought so. Sending preview right now. Have a wonderful day!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
That I didnt expect. I just cant believe that Edward didnt show up. I not only think that Jazz is going to be upset but that he is going to blame Alice for asking and then Edward for being late.
Author's Response: Jazz is going to blow minds next chapter, he is a very powerful character in the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have an awesome day!
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Wow....that was intense. Poor Bella! I can't even imagine. I'm looking foward to the next chapter to see what Edward does.
Author's Response: Yes, I know. What would anyone do if they found Bella in that state? It's hard and the fact that E knows B makes things worse. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. I really appreciate that you decided to leave a review for this chapter as I was quite worried about the twist in the story. Will PM the preview soon! Have an awesome day!
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