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Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Thank you for giving us the answer to the secret of why she married Edward! I love a good "get-em-even"/revenge story! Your story is fabulous!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words! There is more to the secret of why she marries him, stay tuned to find out Edward's reasons. The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: campcathryn (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Love it
Author's Response: Glad you do! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: meldisil (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
whoa, i didnt`t expect this. a marriage proposal. now, I really want to know what happens next. good work!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Yes and you're about to find out how Edward is all set to spin Bella's world if she says "yes." Will she? The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 05:43 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
How did Edward got in Bella's office? Didn't anybody notice him?
I am looking forward for the next chapter.... I can't wait to see what they'll tell people..... please update soon.....
Author's Response: Keen observation, I'll spread more light on that later if I get a chance. Let's just say for now that Edward knows how to get his way clear. Sorry for the delay, I've been out of country for the past few days. In fact, I still am...but the chapter is on its way, its gone to the betas. Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
This is great!
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you're liking it so far... The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
we all love to hate lauren
Author's Response: Yes, we all belong to the "I hate Mallory" club! She's quite a villan, isn't she? Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: AussieECfan (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
I am SO intrigued! Cannot wait to see how Edward thinks that Bella marrying him is going to help right the situation? I mean, other than the obvious which is of course, Bella's diginity and reputation.
Author's Response: Yes, you're right...how is Edward going to play this out. Stay tuned to find out what happens...Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: mariae10 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Malady
Wow! that was aweful but you did warn us. I am guessing that you are eluding to Bella getting pregnant by her rapists and possibly her deciding to keep it and Edward marryi ng her. Great writing. !!!
Author's Response: Thank you! You aren't the only one who thinks so. I'll leave you to read the next two chapters to find out what exactly happens. Thanks for the review. Hope you like the next two chapters... Good day!
Reviewer: salesgirlone (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2010 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
This story has got me sitting on the edge of my seat and I can't wait until the next update. I have thought about what you said about why they get married, maybe they just have this pull toward each other, that they just can't shake. You mentioned fate and maybe fate isn't done with them yet. They both are alot alike in that they hide their feelings, also taking blame for things out of their control. Very good reading..... I am enjoying it!!!!!
Author's Response: Well, I'm at the end of my seat waiting to post the chapter! You're right, fate still has quite a bit in store for the two. And there is this undeniable physical pull or an imaginary rope that they both feel and fail to understand (yes, I am speaking for Edward too!). They hide their feelings since they are not the most vocal people. In fact, I can't wait to get to the marriage...it will be interesting to show how they achieve an understanding despite not being able to express themselves. Thank you for your review and kind words. Will PM the preview soon. Have a good day!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
i still really really want to hate edward but 1) that's not possible and 2) you can't really blame him for trying to save his cousin...
tough situation...
Author's Response: I, too, could never hate Edward (guess all us women our gone hopeless when it comes to him). And you're right he's not the one to be blame, sometimes no can be blamed. Things will get better with time. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: Mirabel (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
I felt so uncomfortable just reading about Bella's discomfort covering herself up in wool, one discomfort trying to suppress the other. You did such an excellent job of portraying her newfound insecurity. It contrasted really well, interestingly enough, with her newfound confidence upon standing her ground against the insufferable Mallory despot.
Edward's letter still leaves me somewhat confused. I have no idea under what circumstances these two will form a marriage arrangement, but as always, I'm looking forward to your update.
Thank you for writing.
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate your kind words, they are very encouraging. You're right, Bella's behavior in Lauren's room was very different from her general behavior. Sometimes strength arises from helplessness, you know you can't give in at any expense, hence the inner tiger decides to take the leap! The reason behind the marriage is about to be revealed very soon. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: MissMartha (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2010 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Wow. I had seen your story recommended on other forums that I had been ghosting, but this certainly wasn't what I expected. You have a gift of being able to draw the reader in as you spin your web of creativity. Fabulous writing. Interesting story, even if I find it a little harsh ( I normally read to get away from angst and drama) thank you for sharing your gift with sll of us.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. It is really motivating to hear this. I totally see where you are coming from regarding the angst. Everything that has happened is crucial to the story line, hopefully the next chapter will help you see so. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
reading this story chapter after chapter, i like the mystery eluding Edward's personality... intrigue w/ Bella & Jasper's friendship.. it is a bit shocking that Bella's being raped yet it added the twist/complication.. so yeah, actually can't wait for next chapter... =)
Author's Response: Thank you for the reviews you left me. Yes, Edward is a mystery character till now...we haven't even glimpsed into his life yet. I know...the attack was unexpected but I assure you it was absolutely crucial to the story. Hopefully, you will see how in the next chapter. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
interesting.
Author's Response: Thank God for that ;D Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: DaisyAllday (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Really good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: zahtarah31 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
So much angst! Well, it was awesome as always.
Looking forward to your next update,
P
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Yeah...so much angst. The story starts off with angst but gets better as we progress through. Besides, hardly anything about E has been revealed yet. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Smoke
dang! wat a bad luck being busted... hahaha... she must be terrified considering the "electric connection" ;p
Author's Response: Ha ha, busted big time. Yes, it's kind of out of this world to have something like the "electric connection" going on.
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
okay, so no baby or disease...I still think its guilt for not being at the shop on time that leads to the marriage. Not that it matters, but I totally forgive Edward. The cousin made a suicide attempt, that sorta knocks all thoughts from ones mind. An EPOV isn't necessary if you put something like a letter, email, text, etc. here and there in a story, gives us the general idea whats going on in his head. I really enjoy the descriptions of Bellas nightmares, which sounds weird, but she obviously has had a major trama and that shit just doesn't go away after 2 weeks. Great chapter!
Author's Response: Yep, no pregnancy or disease. Phew... Oh, I'm so glad you forgive Edward and I appreciate that you understand how shocking it can be to have someone commit suicide. Most people say that E should have called...it's hard to do that when you worrying about someone losing their life. I am grateful that you let me know what you thought of the nightmares...I kept thinking how to frame it. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: beautifullove2 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2010 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Really loving this!! It is very different which is a wonderful thing. I can't wait to read and find out how Bella is going to get over what has happened to her. I really want to know the reason why their will be a marriage. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so glad you like it so far. The reasons behind the marriage will be revealed very, very soon. Thank you for leaving me a thought. Have a great day! Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
I was so happy that Bella stood up to Lauren. What a bitch. It is good to know Edward had a legitimate reason for not showing up on time. It will be interesting to see what Bella thinks of the letter.
Author's Response: I know...I had tremendous fun writing that scene ;D Bella's thoughts about the letter will be revealed next chapter. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Good grief, I hate your Lauren!
Annnnnd I'm still not following how this is going to lead to a whirlwind marriage. Huh. :)
...But I'm still intrigued!!
Author's Response: Ha Ha...I know I hate her too. But it's awesome fun bashing her. The marriage...the reasons are coming very, very soon. You'll be surprised! Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: cher (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
I'm so confused. Bella's attack was a surprise twist. First I thought the marriage was business related. I still havent ruled that one out. After the attack I thought pregnancy thats why theyre getting married but thats not it either. So, I'm back to my first guess until the reason comes out.
Author's Response: You're not the only one who thinks the marriage is business related. Quite a few readers agree. As for the reason...they are going to be revealed very soon. Yep, thank God there wasn't a pregnancy. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
you are such a tease
Author's Response: So I've been told ;D But, hey, you have to admit that we didn't have a cliff hanger this time. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 02:02 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Another good chapter. I like how she stood up to Lauren. I'm glad she found the strength to do that. I am completely baffled about why they would have to get married though. I guess time will tell.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it! Yes, I thinks it was lots of fun writing the scene where Bella bashes Mallory. As for the mariage, th reasons will be revealed soon. Yes, so it will. Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
Reviewer: xxDebbieCullenxx (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Hmmmmm???
Is it maybe monetary related i.e. a large inheritence for Edward should he marry?
Maybe he is gay and wants the smoke screen of a hetrosexual relationship.
Or could he perhaps be impotent and i need to purchase a bride.
Dunno but can not wait to find out - Laters Debs (UK)
Author's Response: The answers are coming very, very soon. You'll be surprised!
Is it maybe monetary related i.e. a large inheritence for Edward should he marry?
A. That's what so many readers believe is going to happen!
Maybe he is gay and wants the smoke screen of a hetrosexual relationship.
A. *snickers*
Or could he perhaps be impotent and i need to purchase a bride.
A. I like this one, perhaps this is the one I've been looking for all along :D
Have a great day! Thanks for the review. Will PM the preview soon...
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