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Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
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Author's Response: Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Bella's strength in going to work is commendable. Once she read Edward's letter she had the hardest choice in the world to make. Do I forget I ever received the letter and continue on in my numb state? Or do I contact Edward to alleviate his guilt and let him know it wasn't his fault? If Bella took that route what would happen with her? She kept thinking of him and in her dreams Edward was always there with her. A little foreshadowing for the events to happen soon in her life. She felt something was going to happen a dread in the pit of her stomach. Not sure if good or bad. She went to work and normal meeting, attempted to listen to the details, but was seeing and hearing a delusion of Edward. Warning her something will be happening soon. She got an emergency call from Jasper to come home right away. Don't delay. Bella heard the news and saw the picture of her being carried by Edward. Rumors flying with story of her being injured. Jazz implied Edward did it for publicity purposes. That Edward used Bella for it since he was looking directly into the camera. Bella believed him. When she went to work the next day the whole office was quiet except for Lauren. She demanded to know what happened since the scandal with the business dealings with her husband made a connection with the magazine through Bella. She needed to know so she could make a statement to the press. Since Edward was refusing to speak with them. Bella ran to her office to have an encounter with Edward there. She accused Edward of a publicity stunt. He was wounded that she could think he would do that. He suspected Tyler and Lauren Mallory of payback for Edward refusing the business dealings with funds to help Tyler's company and funds to be used with the magazine. He said they have to fight dirty too and they would win. Just needed to know how far Bella would go. She asked how far do I have to go. Edward proposed You have to marry me. Point blank no hearts, no roses, no romance. Stop the scandal and speculation of what their relationship is and how it impacts Bella's employer. I think Bella will be shocked, but if Edward reaffirmed that this was the only solution open to them. Bella will take it and fight with Edward to get to the bottom of where the pictures and partial stories originated from and prove Edward's innocence with the crime committed to Bella. I agree it's the Mallorys. Just by Lauren's action the previous day during the meeting, after the meeting, and when walked back into the office the following day. A solid joint front against the scandal/rumors with a logical explanation as to why Edward was seeing Bella and his frequent trips from Seattle to New York.
Author's Response: Wow, another lovely review! Yes, it was a hard choice to make for Bella. She could ignore the letter or go with her heart. Seems like destiny made the choice for her when she couldn't decide. Bella is shocked with the proposal as the end of the chapter implies. You're right, Lauren's suscipicious behavior definitely adds weight to Edward's theory. Interesting theory at the end, would do a lot for them wouldn't it? Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
That's where marriage comes in! Sneaky sneaky!
Author's Response: Aha! See it now, don't you? ;D
Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Just started your story tonight and am very intrigued. Your attention to detail is amazing, I feel as though I can see it all as it happens! I cannot wait to see the purpose of Edwards proposal, although I am sure that electrifying pull has a wee bit to do with it.
Definitely can't wait for your update!
Reviewer: depper57 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Just started your story tonight and am very intrigued. Your attention to detail is amazing, I feel as though I can see it all as it happens! I cannot wait to see the purpose of Edwards proposal, although I am sure that electrifying pull has a wee bit to do with it.
Definitely can't wait for your update!
Author's Response: Oh, that's so nice of you to say. Thank you for taking the time to leave such an encouraging review. The electric pull definitely urged Edward, but what is his main plan?! Stay tuned to find out more. The update is on its way. The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Again you surprise me! Never imagined this would be the reason for them to get married. Waiting for the next chap to see if it will be for real or just a fake one.
Author's Response: Yep, life sure is full of surprises. Hmmm...perhaps a clue to your questions lies in the teaser. Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 - The Letter
Hard time for Bella to be in her own skin! Glad that Edward had a good reason to not show on time.
Author's Response: Yes, he did. The poor guy got blamed for no reason. He can't stop fate, now can he? Bella's having a bad time, but things will get better. Thanks for the review, lovely to hear from you always!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it. And thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Well......that came out of left field. lol. Interesting....... Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Yes, it did! Jeez, what will it take to make the guy propose in a more decent manner?! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: photogal (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
I could see how marriage will solve Edward's problem, but what about Bella. My thought if I was Bella was okay...how long is Edward planning on staying married to her...what are the terms.
Author's Response: Yes, she'll have questions on the terms and the duration. All of that coming next chapter! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now on the thread. Take care, ED.
Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
lollol. trust edward to go straight to that. Youll have to marry me.. h ahahahah awesome. because it will stop police from suspecting him??? it will make them look in love and he did help her.. or his power/money/safe house will protect her?? from the media??? I dont know edwards reasonings.... but I LIKE IT... lol
Author's Response: Oh, that's a jolly good review. Yes, Edward's reasoning will be interesting. And I had to add a bit drama, so that's why the abrupt proposal ;D Those are interesting theories and come quite close to what I have in mind. Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: Nikki0684 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
I can't wait to read what she decides to do.
Author's Response: Oh jeez, hope the wait hasn't been too long. Well, the bright side is that the chapter is well on its way (with the betas right now). And Bella's answer....hmmm, just you wait and watch! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: twiggs66 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Okay, that came out of left field! Wait! Did Tyler and Lauren have Bella raped? I've suspected that all along. Bella should say yes, Jazz is gonna have a fit, but she should say yes because if nothing else he can protect her from her boss. Wow, this story is getting good, I thought it was going to be another angsty romance, but now its taking a mystery turn....fun!
Author's Response: Yes, Jazz will probably have a fit. The poor guy is going to go ballistic....well, let's see. And could Mallorys drop so low to have Bella attacked? Can't say much right now, but you certainly aren't the only one who thinks so. I like angsty romances, but we all need our punch to keep going with the story. It so much more entertaining to get suspense as a part of the mix.Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: maizeandblueinvalpo (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
I hope Bella agrees if for no other reason than to stick it to Lauren. She really needs Edward to help her to deal with this situatino. I don't think she could manage on her own. I don't think Jasper will be too happy about it.
Author's Response: Jasper's reaction...will be interesting. Lauren deserves payback, but what will Bella's reasons be behind the marriage? Keep guessing! And thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 10:29 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
That evil witch Lauren has to go down!! I'm not sure what advantage marrying Edward given them in their quest to bring her down....but I say hell yeah Bella, marry him...that's one way to get a brooding Jasper out of your apt.!!
Author's Response: Heh...yes, she must go down. Jasper is seriously getting brooding, isn't he? Looks like it's time to tamper with his love life. *sighs.* Here I go again.Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
intense chapter. but we know she will say yes... well eventually if not now then some other time because of the prolouge.
Author's Response: Yes...she will. But when, let's ponder that now, shall we? Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: scricez (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
I have started reading this story out of curiosity, but now I'm completely hooked! The story is so intriguing and your writing is great..I am so very sorry for what happened to Bella but I'm thankful that she didn't get pregnant or get any disease..obviously what happened wasn't Edward's fault but I can't blame Jasper for taking his anger out on him either..it was really horrible to find out that photos have been sent to the media and I'm pretty sure, as Edward said, that the Mallorys are somehow involved, I just don't understand how getting married will help them give those two what they deserve..
I can't wait to see what will happen next!! ;D
Author's Response: Hello and welcome to the story. I am glad you are enjoying it so far. It is good to know you don't blame Edward, some readers still do. Yes, I know that a marriage at this point does seem like confusing idea. But let's see what Edward has in mind! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Wow....this was heart stopping. Someone needs to kill Lauren. Like immediately. So much more makes sense now....
Author's Response: Heh, your review actually comes as a relief. Most reviews tell me, oh...nothing makes sense. Well, thank God it makes sense to someone ;) Though, next chapter will explain Edward's plan.Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: chocolatehurricane (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Yeah... I'm confused. Is he going to try and spin it so that Bella's sick leave was actually their honeymoon or something? If not, then I don't understand what is going through his mind.
Author's Response: That's definitely one I haven't heard before. Keep the speculation alive...Edward's got quite bit going through his head! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: Mrz_Jasperhale4ever (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
**new moon gasp**
Author's Response: You'll need quite a few of them for next chapter *rubs hands in anticipation.* Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: noni LG (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
oh WOW! beating a dirty game with a higher level of game? sounds twisted and awesomely strategic... can't wait for next chapter! njoy ur travel/trip..^_^
Author's Response: Yes, as Edward says in the next chapter, "This is a dangerous game, once you step into it, there's no looking back."
Hmmph, got your own teaser now didn't you?!
Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: need2read (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
That was fantastic. Have a wonderful vacation.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you liked the chapter. And yes, I did have a refreshing holiday. Absolutely thrilling I say. Hope you had a wonderful summer too! Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: animaserena (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
You evil, evil woman!!! EVIL!
Fine, I'll wait.
Author's Response: What?! *shrugs innocently* ;D
Oh don't worry. The update is on its way...it's being beta'd. So fasten on your seatbealts, Ma'am, cause' you're all set to go on a roller coaster next chapter. Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: mayi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
WHATTTTTTT????? HOLLYYYYYY SHITTT I NEVER EXPECTED THAT!!!!! Oh my god I can't wait for the next chapter to see what the hell is going to happend. This story is so goodddd!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the motivating words. They really help. Seriously. A lot is going to happen next chapter. You have no idea how much... Stay tuned to find out more!
Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
Reviewer: carlaking (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2010 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 11 - And so we meet again
Omg !update asap !
Author's Response: Oops, sorry ..I've been out of town, hence the long delay. The postive news is that chp 12 has gone to the betas, so you can expect an update soon. Thank you for the review! The teaser and pictease are now the thread. Take care. -ED
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