Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 16 Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 1
Yes Bella getting drunk well Hell I would too if I was her. Her Dad hung up on her, and we don't really understand that full dynamic going on there. Jazz her oldest and dearest friend won't stand beside her, and Edward is the Coldest of Cold so it would appear to her.. Yup I would get drunk too!!!
But heres to having faith in the story and your vision....
One more chapter to go before i am caught up..
Laters BB ~Kathy~
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 10:43 AM · On: A/N: Summaries for all chapters of story
Great summary, but I will go back and read 14 again...
Thanks ~Kathy~
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Beginnings
Okay great so next chapter, see I am glad I decided to continue going forward rather than start over again.. You are awesome anticipating our needs as readers...
thanks
~Kathy~
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 14 - Falling (EPOV)
I am so loving his story but I think I have to start over again, I must be slow to understand because I am confused, you are a wonderful writer, it's just me sorry! But I am really loving this, Edward is just very cryptic...I know he is falling in love with Bella but ... I'm just confused..
Ready for more chapters!!
~Kathy xoxoxoxoxo~
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 13 - Declaration of Fate
Slick, very slick Edward!!! So Proud of him for playing the media that way
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
this story has really captured me, i cant wait for the next chapters,please let me know when there up.abk
Reviewer: khans (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 1
I have had this on my favorites to read list and am just now getting to this story, looks very interesting.. Here we go!!!
Kathy xoxo
Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: March 08, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
So much more I want to know!!!
Reviewer: publix (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Good chapter, thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Awww, she did it and the realization of Edwards feelings finally hit her!! Thing is, I don't think she has any idea how deeply he cares for her!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!!!
Reviewer: abk (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
cant wait for the next chapters, please keep me informed. abk
Reviewer: crf720 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
really enjoying this story. looking forward to more! please update soon!
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
it was perfection. he gave a lil, be stregthened a lil....cant wait to watch these two morph. BRAVO
Reviewer: ellizabethcullen (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Akelarre (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Deeds are better than words and Edward’s doings speaks volumes. Glad Bella understood it .
Reviewer: cbell (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Another good chapter. I liking this story alot. I think Edward doesn't realizes that he's in love with Bella yet. She's so scared, she doesn't know what she's doing.
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
It's lovely to reread the last part of the chapter.
Now, was it just me, or did Edward have a double vow in there and it disappeared by now? Am I senile? Lol.
Thanks so much for the chapter, hope to see more soon! Especially the smooch! Because I don't think they have yet, have they? *grin*
Spikey
Reviewer: vashbak (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
I really enjoyed Bella's moment of clarity when she realized what Edward's actions were saying. I think that was the best part of the ceremony.
My favorite part of this chapter though, was definately EPOV. I love getting a glimpse into what he's thinking!
Thank you!
Reviewer: justinsgrl22 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 02:27 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
Now things are getting REALLY interesting...
How astute of Bella to realize that Edward's feelings run deeper than she previously imagined. After all, Edward does take the whole "strong, silent type" thing to the nth degree doesn't he? I think this will help her navigate the early days of her marriage much more successfully ~ I hope! I'm so glad Jasper showed up ~ misgivings or not, Bella really needed him.
These two characters are so rich and complicated...you're doing a fabulous job of writing them. Looking forward to what's next!
Reviewer: ast (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
why do you take so long to update??
Reviewer: daggers4u (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
*Whew* I'm SO glad Edward took her aside & talked to her! What he told her--admitted--just blew me away! Apparently it had the same effect on Bella. *swoon* no it wasn't cheesy! Bella just didn't "see" what was there. Now she does! And it's going to make All the difference!
It's gonna get even better from here!
Kudo's to Jazz for showing up, even tho he doesn't approve
How DID Edward know she went to that bar? I'm intrigued
Reviewer: beachlover (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
It wasn't cheesy and I am glad Jasper showed up if only for appearances.
But I do hope Bella comes out of her funk some more. Maybe she should try Tequilla next time.
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
I thought it was great. THANK YOU for updating!!!! can't wait for next chapter.
Reviewer: ocd girl (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
im happy to she an update I miss this story!
Reviewer: twilight_illusion (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2011 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 16 - Becoming Mrs. Cullen Part 2
I just wanted to drop a quick review and say I really like this fic! It took me a little while to get into, but I was soon sucked in! I'm definitely intrigued as to what happens now. I don't think this chapter was cheesy at all. Keep up the great work!
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