dont know where youve been if your last update was before july 24, but you need to finish this. i cant believe you are only 15 years old. you are a wonderful writer and you have a fabulous career ahead of you if writting is what you choose to do. please update soon this story is going to haunt me until i hear the ending. so please dont make me suffer.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I've had quite a busy year and it's just now beginning to calm down. Broken laptop morphed into family drama which morphed into midterms, etc. And through it all, I was working on a 9-month long science research project. Which I just finished last week. Kinda. Lol. So I'm trying to get it done soon, and hopefully I'll have a chapter up within the upcoming week.

And how can you leave it there, and for so long? You are so incredibly mean. But, I am glad I found this story, it's amazing and the emotions are so real! Finally Bella realizes that Edward lied to her, that he does still love her. Of course, it is understandable that after so long, after finally deciding to move on with her life, that she doesn't automatically take him back and pushes him away at first. And it's taken Victoria coming back and attacking, and Bella moving in with the Cullens for them to finalyl come back together, for the truth to finally come out and be heard and understood - Bella's epiphany.

Bella's feinting the first time she saw Edward was perfect, as was his reaction to seeing, and smelling her - being frozen and not knowing what to do, what she would want him to do. Of course he would think that she was happy and moved on, with a boyfriend - namely Mike Newton. *shudder* Eww. Gross. Disgusting. That's what he wanted her to do, and thought she would do right away, in the first place - nevermind the whole vile Newton thought.

I can't help but wonder about Charlie, and Jake as well. Wasn't Bella supposed to call them twice a week? That frist week was spent in a coma, and I'm sure both of them were getting pretty antsy. And now it's been another week at the Cullen house with no mention of Charlie. I am curious about what Edward did when he left the hospital room after learning about the werewolves. Alice saw something, and Bella could tell with the look that was on her face that she wasn't supposed to see. I liked their reactions to hearing about the wolves, and Bella's involvement. I especially like it when Bella stood up for herself. She's is a grown woman, and she has changed, and Edward needs to realize that she's no longer a child, and never really has been. But, in this case, with Victoria after her, again, she needs the extra protection. I like Emmett's idea of an army, consisting of friends, and I'm sure Edward's right and the wolves would help protect Bella - although relutctantly that the Cullens, namely Edward, are back in Bella's life, and would probably insist that she stay in La Puch with them. Again, what did Edward do on his "walk" after leaving the hospital room? Although, I'm sure if Jake, or Charlie, had been called, they'd be there already with a few choice words for Edward with Bella on a flight back to Forks.

Okay, I'm rambling and letting my mind run wild here. Sorry. Lol! Oh,a nd I just have to say, right before reading that it was Alice who found Bella (before clicking the next button to read that chapter), I knew who it was a why the house was empty! Lol! I just knew it! Then, when Alice had that vision, and Edward ran off to Bella's dorm hoping and praying he wasn't too late, then when Bella was going into the room and feeling cold like the window was open, I had a gut feeling that it was Vicoria coming back. She hadn't been mentioned at all before, and since this all started at teh cliffs, that would mean that Laurent was dead and Victoria was the only threat. Although, I did have my hopes that it wasn't like that at all; that maybe Bella passed out from blood loss and no one would find her in time, or something crazy like that. But, alas, it was Victoria after all. And I must say, I can't believe, although a big part of me can, that Victoria would to that to Bella, that she could stand the smell of Bella's open wound just to torture her somemore. She's really out for vengence, isn't she? Laurent wasn't kidding either when he told Bella what she would do to her, although he may have down-played it a little bit. Wow.

Another great chapter, and amazing story! Now, I will leave you with this final plea... PLEASE come back to us and update again soon!!!!! It's been WAY too long!

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Author's Response:

WOW. Thank you so much for that incredible review! All of your questions will be answered within the next few chapters!

Incidentally enough, I'm updating on Sunday, and after that, I'm gonna write like thunder to get the story done and posted. (:

awwww great stuff when will u be putting the next chapter up?

I hope to see an update soon! Still a good fic. ;D

aww...this is so sad...but im feeling happy too...this is awesome!!!

btw unlike most other stories, most of the chapter songs are actually on my favourites! lol and also, i was wondering what exactly it is i have to do to upload a story. im reading the submission guielines now, but i find it quite hard to read the writing (too small) and i probably will have only just finished it by the time you get back lol. any informatin would be helpful and i love ths story!

 

KK

Wow, this is really good. Poor Bella really takes a beating and keeps on ticking. *g* I hope you will update very soon!

Joan

right more please!!!

Great update...have fun but it's too bad we'll have to wait so long for an update :)

Yay! Update!

Victoria, right?

All I'm saying is please no new borns and Victoria.  I'm tired of them reaking havoc before we get to the good parts.  Okay.  I ready for more. 

I am enjoying the story.