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Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was a good chapter. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I've already started writing the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
Good shapter, interesting. I look forward to the next.
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is already in the works!
Reviewer: C9E (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 8
Great update!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 8
Excellent chapter!
I loved everything about it!
I never expected that Bella would let Edward calm her down, given the state that she was in, but I'm glad it worked. Hopefully she'll allow him to help her in the future, should she need it.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter is already in the works!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 7
I am unsurprised that Bella is on to Edward, but Rose is right - she's messed up.
I liked Rosalie's introspection here. Very self-aware and processing. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Yeah, Bella is not as naive as she usually is in this story. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 6
It's a nice dynamic to have Bella avoiding Edward. He explained things very well to her and I am relieved she didn't put up a huge snit-fit about returning.
Couldn't BELIEVE Alice was so dense about the scent.
Oh, Alice. LOVED the bit about Bella being able to affect powers, but not intuition. I LOVED THAT. Very nicely put.
And then, when Bella told Jasper they should just be all avoiding each other I respected that. I look forward to seeing how that pans out.
Author's Response: Bella will be very skittish to say the least when it comes to Edward. He'll have to be on his best game. Alice was just stuck on the fact Bella wanted to wear men's clothing. Poor girl. She'll catch on sooner or later. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 7
So I guess that Bella had a controlling stalker type in her past, huh? Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Something like that... Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 7
Definitely Fleetwood Mac - oldschool rocks! Great chapter btw
Author's Response: Lol I like the FM version but I like DC version better. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 7
I prefer the dixie chicks' version.
Author's Response: Me too!
Reviewer: alys (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
great story, love rosalie here.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Jadiona (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
Next chapter please? I really want to see where this story is going.
See I've got my puppy dog eyes out
Author's Response: Puppy dog eyes? Opening a new Word doc...
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 7
ooh. i keep saying that particular chapters are my favorite but i think what im meant to say is every new chapter that you post is better than the last and my new favorite until the next chapter is posted. i like rosalie self-assessment in this one, and bella's knowledge of edward. a bottle of bubbly for the author, because i assume your of age. :)
Author's Response: Oh you're too good to me! I love reading your reviews. I plan for Rosalie and Bella to help each other see themselves more clearly in this story. Bella's older than Edward here, so she isn't as clueless as she usually is. I'm glad you think this is a good thing. Sadly I'm not of age but that has never stopped me before... ;)
Reviewer: TrishaWhitlock (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 7
i'm loving this frequent updating. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I can't promise it'll always be like this, but I'm usually a pretty frequent updater.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great chapter!
I wonder when Bella will talk about her past a little more. I think that if does talk about it soon, then everyone will understand her a lot better.
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! Bella will reveal her past in small doses. But don't worry the Cullens will get it out of her!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 7
I love the Fleetwood version and think the Dixie Chicks one is pretty ok. I don't think I've heard the Godsmack one, though!
I think Edward is in over his head with Bella. And it seems like she either feels nothing (romantic) for him, or just doesn't realize it yet. It's pretty bad when Rosalie of all people says someone is fucked up!!
Author's Response: I like the Fleetwood Mac version too but I just think that the cadence of The Dixie Chick's is better. Godsmack is probably my least favorite though.
Edward will have a bit of a hard time with Bella here. Give Bella time though. I changed the rules up a little with mating here. It isn't a love at first sight and time stood still type of thing. Bella's been hurt and she'd going to try every hard to protect her heart from further damage. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 7
"Wasn't he gay?"
Heh. Oh, Rose.
I like reading about a not-so-naive Bella.
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks so much for reviewing! Naive Bella can get a little tiresome.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 7
poor bella, i wish she could read his mind so that she could see for herself what hes really like on the inside
Author's Response: If only... :( Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: venus308 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 6
LOL poor Alice she just didn't get it!
Author's Response: Lol nope. She couldn't grasp a girl actually wanting to wear men's clothing!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 6
so pleased bella came back with edward, that girl just needs a big hug!
Author's Response: Lol yea she does. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Delicious Dreamer (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 6
oh, im glad that bella is back. and i feel like i must mention this to you, but when i get a whole lot og updates and beyond repair is one of them, i always read it last because i want to "savour the moment" you could say.
Author's Response: Oj you have you just made my day! I know exactly what you mean. I do the same thing when I read Master of the Universe. I don't know if you read that or not but if you don't please go check it out. It's a BDSM story but it's soo well written and emotional and funny. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
I know it's only one minor victory, really, but I'm glad that Edward got Bella to come back... I do wonder how long it'll be before they all realise that she really just wants to be at peace - alone - if that's what it takes :S
Author's Response: Yea Edward will have many more hurdles to jump with Bella, that's for sure. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
Alice isn't normally that dense. hehe What is going on with Jasper? I normally like his character. I hope that you don't make him an ass. LOL :)
Author's Response: Lol she was too fixated on the fashion! Lol Jasper is fav after Edward. (Sometimes before Edward but don't tell anyone!!) I won't deliberately make him an ass. He just needs to get to know Bella a little more. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 6
I think your writing is wonderful I am loving this story. I hope we will really get to see what Bella's story really is. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Lilly
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter will be up very soon!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 6
alice can be a little slow at times, can't she? and jasper and bella, i hope that bella never does anything to make them regret the trust they've placed in her!
Author's Response: Lol yep! You'll have to wait and see how Bella and Jasper get along. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 6
The whole "you stay out of my way, Empath" thing was soooo badass. Go Bella. I wonder what clothing Alice is going to try to buy her now. If it's not Edward-scented, it obviously won't fly!
I'm greedy for the next chapter. Please update soon? :D
Author's Response: Lol. Gotta love some badass Bella! The next chapter is already half way done. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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