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Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2010 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 38
i really hope that bella can keep edward and the cullens safe!
Author's Response: The Cullens are in very capable hands. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 38
Edward needs to get some balls and step up and kick Lucas's ass!! or at least get hurt so Bella can get involved, Please let this work out for the best!!!
Author's Response: Lol Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 38
Lol thanks Alice XD
Can't wait for the next update!
I love the story!
Is there going to come a second story about this bella?
Maybe a coöperation between Maria and lucas?
Author's Response: I'm not sure about a sequel to this story. I've had some thoughts about it but I'm not really good at sequels. The next chapter will be up soon. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: chmcolli (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 38
Interesting enough... I don't hate Lucas at all. I think he is without a doubt a mercernary, but I don't see him as evil. Sadistic maybe- but I feel like he is a victim of his environment, and his true nature as a vampire. I mean, the Cullens rebel against "what they truly are"; Lucas embraces it. Maybe you've just captured the charm that Bella talked about in previous chapters. For all of his behavior, he is charming, and he seems to really care about Bella (as much as he is capable of).
Also love the last line- I like a livid Edward. Makes life interesting!
Author's Response: I really want to hug you right now. In fact I am currently giving you a cyber hug. Can you feel it? Lol jk. You seem to be the only person who reacted the way I wanted my readers too. Lucas is very charming and I wanted people to second guess his evil. He, like Bella, is a product of his environment. The only difference between them is that his history of violence began when he was human which makes him a lot worse off than she is. I like a pissed off Edward too even though there hasn't been much of one in the this story. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 38
oh edward, don't get your pants in a twist!
Author's Response: Lol, Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 38
Oh crap, here we go! Edward is going to insist on coming with her if he can't talk Bella out of going with Lucas (which is just crazy!)!
I can't believe it almost over!
Author's Response: Lol thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2010 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 38
and finally we hear what Lucas has planned... i'm thinking it'd almost be a workable plan except that the risk to Bella is still too great, and I'm not convinced there wouldn't be another war, nor that the Volturi would let Lucas amass that much power... hmm
The argument about to kick off between Bella and Edward should be very interesting... I wonder if they're both going to end up going to China? Or whether Carlisle's going to make a discreet call to his old friends??
The loss of the Denali's (Eleazar and co) might get Aro's attention...
Guess we'll all find out shortly :)
Author's Response: Bella thinks it's a workable plan too. It's partly why she agreed to go with him. The next chapter should be up soon. I've already wrote and send it to my beta for proofreading. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: carog91 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 38
OMG..haha..I'm guessing Lucas ends up dead along the way!!..glad Edward is already putting his foot down!!
Author's Response: Lol We'll see... Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 38
I think thta the Cullens can collectivelytake Lucas down. He deserves it and the Volturi would be grateful. Since your story is folding up this is what I hope . In general terms the Cullens should be more thta upset for what happened to the Deanaky family. So far they seem too unconcerned, but it can't be true. And Bella must see that she must make choices, and kill the worst part of herself by killing Lucas.
Author's Response: Lucas was able to take down the entire Denali coven by himself. It was very possible for him to do the same with the Cullens. Bella could increase their chances but she stated in a previous chapter that she isn't willing to harm Lucas. She truly does love him. The main reason the Cullens weren't upset by the Denali's being gone was because Bella and Jasper worked to keep sedated when their deaths were annouced. I'm not sure whether I'll mention the Denali's again, but if I do, it'll be in the epilogue. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: tracey (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 38
I'm glad that Alice (I'm guessing) saw Lucas and Bella's conversation. And I'm so glad that Edward is standing up to Bella and telling her she is being a dumb ass! hehe Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Alice didn't have a vision of Bella and Lucas's conversation but she did have a vision of Bella actually in China. Thanks so much for reviewing! The next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 38
lol wow....Edward is pissed hehe. I knew he would be.
Author's Response: He is indeed! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 38
Wait no!!! 2 more chapters and then an epi I had no clue we were so close to the end!!! Great Chap I can't wait to see how you get out of going to Asia!!!! Post again soon this was so exciting!
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately this story is coming to a close. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 38
Great chapter!
I knew Lucas wasn't that blind as to not notice the connection Bella and Edward have.
This is going to be quite a fight between them about Bella going to China...I don't think it will end well.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! Lucas is nothing if not observant. The next chapter will be up soon!
Reviewer: amyat (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 38
Oh Bella, Bella, Bella...
She might be scared of Lucas, but she can't go with him. Her burgeoning humanity will be sacrificed to his idiocy.
Well crafted chapter, and your storytelling is excellent.
A
Author's Response: Bella is pretty conflicted trying to appease not only Edward and Lucas but herself as well. Thank you so much for your wonderful compliments and review!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 38
Bout time Edward stood up! Im so glad you post so regularly... atm this story has me hanging on the edge of my seat!
Author's Response: Lol Thanks!
Reviewer: jmszas1979 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 37
okay okay!!! i'm really sorry that i haven't been writing to you in while like i promised in some of the earlier chapters, but i've been kindav'e busyo!! lol!!! anyway hope you make more fantastic chapters!!!!! great!!! so hope you had a wonderful halloween!!!!!!!!! P.S. one of your biggest fans of your writing for "Beyond repair",,,,
Zoey
Author's Response: Hey Zoey!!! It's totally cool! Review whenever you can! I did have a cool Halloween and thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Gwilwillith (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 37
that was hot! Sadly though lucas may cause some problems, i hope edward will be ok?!
Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is already submitted and waiting for validation. It should be up soon!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 37
hmmm I know that we're probably still heading into darker territory than even what we've seen so far... but at least Bella has so far managed to avoid Lucas' attentions and still have a moment with Edward.
Though I wonder what happens when they get back to the house? Lucas would surely smell Edward on her in enough concentration to suspect/know what happened?
I'm also starting to wonder about the Volturi through all of this - if Lucas was single-handedly capable of taking out the Denali's, and presumably would do the same or at least decimate the Cullens, doesn't that make him either a threat or an asset that Aro would be very interested in?
Author's Response: Yes, Bella has held her on so far with Lucas. She's more prepared now that she knows the games he plays. The whole scent will get taken care of in the next chapter. Yes, Lucas would be a huge asset to the Volturi but more so Bella. I was thinking about doing a sequel to this story dealing with the Volturi but I'm not sure because I'm not really good at writing sequels. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: dalzieldawn (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 37
Thank you for letting Bella & Edward be true mates, But I wouldn't mind if the Cullen's ripped Lucas apart
Author's Response: Thank you! I have to admit making them be true mates was not my original plan. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 37
SQUEEE!!!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!! Damn that was one hell of a chapter!!!!!!! I am a little worried as to why hes there and how good he is with manipulating others so Post again soon we need to figure out what this parasitic leach wants hehhehe
Author's Response: Lol Thanks! The next chapter will be up very soon!
Reviewer: VABelle (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 37
wow!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 37
Phew! I was almost tempted to wait until a few more chapters had been posted before I read in case Lucas and Bella interaction proved to be too tragic for Edward and the rest of the Cullens. What a relief to read you had posted this instead.
Author's Response: Lol I'm glad you decided to have faith in me. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: BreyonnaMorgan (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 37
Daaaaaaaaaamn. Edward fucks like a professional.
Author's Response: ROTFL!!!! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Shandi Cullen1978 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
I think it's good so far. I wonder what happened to Bella now.
Author's Response: Thanks! Things get a lot worse!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 01:04 PM · On: Chapter 37
This was a great chapter!
I'm glad that Edward is going to trust Bella with the Lucas situation. It's going to be hard, but I know they can get through it.
Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! The next chapter will be up soon!
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