Reviewer: brandofcullencrazy (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
this is a really great story I love it. can't wait to see what's next
Reviewer: 22Alley22 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2011 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Dangerous Confrontation
Ahhh!! the suspense is killing me
Reviewer: Jane_Cullen (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2010 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
update! update!
love the story;)
Reviewer: IsabellaClark (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
I LOVE IT!!! Please update soon! Pwetty Pweeze :)
Right now my beggings out of the way, let get to the actual review.
The writings good, and I like the fact that the girls are kick ass in it! Most of the stories I have read involve the Cullens girls hiding behind their mates while they fight the big bad. And Kick Ass Bella is even better!! It always annoyed me in the books that she had no back bone, even after she was changed.
Hope for an update soon!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Apple of My Eye (Part 1) (V)
I love how Bellawas in Salem during the Witch trials! I love how others are offering to help Bella & the immortal children!
Reviewer: fleur24 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Calling All Vampires
I love how Bella is almost a myth among vampires!! I also love how she';s friends with Ivy & her 'brothers' & 'sisters.'
Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
please please please post soon this is just getting good and I wanna see Bellas talents and blades in action.
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
OMG this story is amazing. I love the sarcasm in it and the fight scene was amazing. I'm not really good at visualizing action scenes but I saw it all perfectly in my head. I can't wait until the next update!
Reviewer: Mrs J Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Please write more soon love the story
thanks
xx
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Calling All Vampires
pretty pretty please update
Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 2: Into the Vampires Den
This is a really good story. I have just discovered it and I am completely caught up. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while. I love your idea! This is the first story that focuses on the Immortal Children. The Immortal Children in SM's books interested me, but I couldn't never come up with a good story about them. Anyhoo, this is wonderfullt written and it seems that you have put a lot of thought and effort into this story. I can not wait to find out what you give us next! Please update as soon as possible.
Reviewer: jasmineflava (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
I loove this, it's so entertaining :D
Will you be updating soon? :)
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
YOU NEED TO UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE!
Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Please update soon!! Its been so long.... sigh
Reviewer: MyaLuv (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Please update soon!! Its been so long.... sigh
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Calling All Vampires
please update!!!! Its been so long! sniffle!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 1: Calling All Vampires
Please update soon please please please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Thank You for finally updating! I wasn't sure if you were continuing. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for the Review! I love this story myself so it will be finished! Just hit a bit of a snag with work and school! But the next update will be soon! :)
Reviewer: Lizzyliz (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 6: What A Vampire Values Most
I'm enjoying the story, just started reading it. The last chapter though with the flashback wasn't current with the 1600's. Make sure when flashbacks you remember the modern technology may not be apart of it. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: skg910 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Dangerous Confrontation
Agh! What the heck is going on? Fantastic story!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Hopefully you update sooner this time I really was so excited tyo see a new post and it was so long! You go with your bad self! hehe AWESOME can't wait please don't make us wait to long sniffle!
Author's Response: Haha! Your 'bad self' comment made me laugh! But the update will be very soon! I am planning on having the next chapter finished by this weekend! Sorry for the long wait and thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
I have to admit my favorite parts were with Bella and Edward in the meadow.
:)
Author's Response: You can't write a Twilight story without the Meadow! It's the key! LOL! But thanks for the review! Glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
I love this story!!! This is proving to be fasinating!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Yay! My whole goal is for it to be fascinating! Glad your liking it and thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: maddaq (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 7: Running Up That Hill
Thanks for finally updating! please don't wait that long again.
I really enjoyed the part with Bella in Volterra.
Author's Response: Bella in Volterra was my favorite part too! I promise the next update will be MUCH sooner! Thanks for the review! :)
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