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Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
My heart is breaking for Charlie. That was one POV I wished SM wrote in Breaking Dawn. To see how he was taking her "sickness". Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the chap and sorry that your sad for Charlie! I balled my eyes out writing this.
Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
This is fantastic! I've been reading your mom's story and thought I should check out yours as well.
Author's Response: Aww thanks Hawkins! I'm glad you like it!! And I'm glad you like mama nooches to! She'd be mighty happy :)
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Of course I love you!! And I LOVE te disney movies you quoted!!!
Great chapter! Lots of fun to read!
Author's Response: Thanks girl!! Love you to :)
Reviewer: jazzysallmine (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
loved the disney quotes!!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review jazzysallmine! Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: heatherdawnc (Anonymous) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
This is so good, I can't wait to continue reading the story. I need to find it on fanfic so I can be notified when you update! Your take is wonderful and I am just waiting to see another excursion with Alice!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! glad you liked it!! And aww thanks!!!! I'll Pm your or something if you can't haha :) Don't feel bad PM'ing me... sometimes I forget (don't mean to sound mean! I'm just forgetful :P)
I think you will like chapter 14 if you want Alice bonding time :)
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
lol, sweet chapter, I love Bella/Emmett bonding :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review tneb2009!! glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Nice
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: Laila Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
So sweet Emmett and Bella together like real siblings.
Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review Laila Cullen!!! Glad you liked it :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
thanks for the dedication!!!
this was a cute chapter!
emmett is soo cute!!
hes just so sweet!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews girl! don't thank me, it was nothing but truely desserved :)
Glad you liked it! And I totes agree!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
That was great! Just what Bella needed-Emmett time!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review snowgood! glad you liked it!! :)
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Awww I love Emmett. This was such a sweet chapter, and it was really needed for Bella to truly move on. I sensed that she was really holding on to her family. Thanks for writing for us!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review twogoods!!! Glad you liked this chapter!!! I think Bella needed it to :) Glad you liked my Emmett, means alot to lil'o'me!!
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
thanks for a wonderful story
Author's Response: Tahnks for your review Bellinda!!! don't thank me! Thank yourself and the other reviewers for supporting me!!! Without you all this would be nothing :)
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
I loved the Disney quotes!!! You did a great job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you jbluvs2sing!! Glad you liked it :)
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
What a wonderful chapter!! It was nice to get a bit of Emmett and Bella bonding. I don't think you see that enough in fanfiction:)
Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review jenjan24!! Glad you liked it!!! I have alot in store! Lets just hope it is good enough for my spectacular fans :)
Reviewer: suyapa (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
that was so cute!!!!i love this chapter. good job i love your whole story
Author's Response: Thanks for your review suyapa!! Glad you liked it and I'm glad you liked the story in a whole :)
Reviewer: newtothis (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
i loved this chapter. people do not spend enough time on emmett. what a great character. i love how it has been rose and em that bella has connected with the most.
i am so glad that your dad got on you about writing this chapter. now go to your laptop and write, write, write!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review newtothis!! I'm glad you liked it! And yeah... rose and Em just seemed like a better pair to help bella than Alice and Jasper. And I always felt bad that Rose was portrayed as the bad guy in the book, I think there was a lot more to her character than was shown.
I don't have a laptop!!! :( but I will soon!! And alrighty I'll get right on it for you!
Reviewer: lovetwilightforever (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
oooh, i love the use of disney quotes!
'i hear that name and i shudder'
'mufasa'
LOTFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:D
Author's Response: Thank you lovetwilightforever! glad you liked it :) Glad you liked the Disney quotes to! I was nervous about putting them out there ;P
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Great update. I loved the Disney quotes!!! Emmett is so kick ass! Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Dulcinea21bella!! Glad you liked it :) And yeah the Disney quotes where fun to write!
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Sweet, fun chapter--loved it! It's good to see another side of Emmett than we normally do, being so wise and contemplative, and then getting his ass handed to him by Bella repeatedly! Loved the end.
Author's Response: Thank you my1edward :)!!! Glad you liked it! And yeah I always pictured Emmett deep and complex and not stupid and just... out there like to many fic's paint him as... I see him as the ideal big brother, there for advice yet happy to joke around and lighten the mood.
Glad you liked it all :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
LMAO that was funny! I liekd the easy flow of this chapter definitly a good Emmett Chapter it suited him very well!!!
Look forward to the next one post again soon!!!
Author's Response: Thank you Sarah!! Glad you liked it and I'm super happy I saw your name on the review list today :P Was worried I'd loose you over time! Thanks for coming back girl!!
Glad you liked it and I'll try to get another out for you :)
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Mufasa i love that keep it up update soon
Author's Response: Thank you Lyanna! Glad you liked it!! :)
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Emmett
Awe How sweet Emmett bonding with his little sister Bella!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review krisandrob! It means alot to me !! :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Declarations
that was a great chapter!
cant wait for the next update!
and i wonder who the visitors are. maybe the voultui?
Author's Response: Thank you again!! Chap 12 is with beta!! You must read it... I think you'll like the A/N alot :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Acceptance, Moving On, Jade
aww how cute!
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: xtwilight3 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
the relationship that edward and alice has is so cute!
Author's Response: Awww thanks :)
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