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Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:05 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Wow! Weird twist. Can't wait to see what else you do.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!!rnrnThere will be more soon.
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
Loved it.
Author's Response: Thanks!!!!
Reviewer: rzokian (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
hmm . . . i really don't know how they are going to handle this. can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!rnrnThere will be updates and information coming soon!!! I promise!!!rnrnglad you liked it an thanks again!!
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Great chapter! Very, very good. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I'm gald you liiked it!! There will be updates in the near future.
Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
I've finally caught up to this--I'm all intrigued now, about what's going on with Bella, why the light affected her so, how the Cullens are going to deal with a newborn and if they'll stay in Forks... This is a great start!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I'm glad you like it!!! Updates dates, and inforation are in the near future, I promise!!
Reviewer: claireo (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
ooo how i lurve your writing. ineed more! not a want, a need!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!! I'm glad you like it. I see updates in the near future, I promise!!!!
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Oooh it's so good! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I'm glad you liked it. Updates are in the near future ;)
Reviewer: sedrax (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
wow. that was .... interesting. what happened to bella? she's gone, like, psycho.... need more to find out!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. You find out what happens to Bella in the next chapter. I promise.
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Oh, now, that ought to be traumatic for her parents. They hear her heart stop and then she starts screaming from a pen light. Gave me chills. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I'll update soon!!!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
OMFJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u...need...tew...continue....
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! Haha, I am going to continue. I just got chapters 3-5 back from my beta last night! Yay!! thanks again!!!
Reviewer: MeIshAlice (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
YOU BETTER DO MORE THAN 2 FELIXING CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!! OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND BITE YEWS...not that you'll care ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!!! rnrnThere will be more chappies promise!!
Reviewer: Moodyhorse (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2008 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
I like this! I can almost imagine this happening; an alternate ending.
Author's Response: Awww, thanks!! I'm glad you think it could be an alternate ending!!! I'm happy you like it!!!! Thanks again!!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2008 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
omg i actually cried when charlie was talking to bella. its so touching and tragic. poor charlie. please update soon
Author's Response: I cried when I was writing it. It was so hard to write the chapter and convey all the emotion I wanted to convey but in the end I think it came out all right. Thanks again!
Reviewer: katdan2003 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2008 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Really, Really like the story!! I havn't read any like this. I really want to know what happens!!! post soon!!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I'm glad you think it's original!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
I am totally into this idea. I can't wait to see how you see this playing out if Bella had been turned before any of the "relationship-y" stuff happened... Crying for Charlie, I feel so badly for him.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! I'm glad you liked it!!! And I cried for Charlie to. I was balling my eyes out when I wrote it, but then again I'm a sap for anyhing even remotly sad... Haha, thanks again!!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
I am really liking this story. I can't wait to see what happens. I love that Edward is so drawn to her.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I'm glad you liked my story!!! And their relationship is a big part of future chapters!!!
Reviewer: BettingonAlice (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Very interesting premise--keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Another great chapter! There is only one thing that is confusing. You say that Edward can tell that Jacob is a werewolf, but if he is, wouldn't he be able to tell that Bella is changing becuase here smell is changing? Or is it too early for that? However, she seems to be changing very quickly. I am just curious. Keep it up! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!!!! Jacob isn't a wearwolf yet. He is going to change soon though. That is all he knows. Do you remember when Jacob was going through that akward stage and then he just changed into a super werewolf?? That's what he is going through right now/=] Thanks again =]
Reviewer: dawntwilight000 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Great start to your story. Update again!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! Once I get the next chapter edited and set to go it'll be up!!! Thanks again!
Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2008 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Awesome. I love how Edward and Bella are reacting to each other. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!!!! The whole problem with the upcoming relationship between them is a big factor for me. I'm trying to give it all it's due attention, and make everything accurate at the same time.
Reviewer: hermione4g (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2008 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
Wow! More you have got to continue! I will cry if you don't!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I'm glad you liked it and of course there will be more... But I'm sorry, you might cry if I post chapter 2! I know I did!! Thanks again!!!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: October 23, 2008 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
WOAH, I am not sure what else to say. Can't wait for the next part.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!! I hope that's a good woah! =]
Reviewer: Demetria99 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
This is really good! Are you going to continue? I would like to see what happens from here.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yes I am going to continue, I am in love with the story, I have such big plans for it! Thank you again!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2008 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
Oh wow! I like this idea, and this is a good start. I can't wait to read more of this. Good job! :) ~Cat~
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I am glad you liked it! =]
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: October 22, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
I've read storeis like Edward didnt save Bella from the van but not quite like this good job
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it! And I'm glad you thought it was original! =]
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