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Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Acceptance, Moving On, Jade
damn... but I am willing to wait...
hehehe sooo wonderful
Author's Response: Sorry Wicked! Thanks for the review! And sorry to make ya'll wait...
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Acceptance, Moving On, Jade
"He used to sit at his little piano all ‘I hate the world', ‘I'm a monster', ‘I shouldn't be alive'."
LOL I love it! I love how well you have captured the characters. And I can't wait to see what Edward writes either. :) Looking foward to the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
I loved that line to! Hehe.
Glad that you liked it!!!!
Reviewer: Leah (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Fathers
Hey, it's your story for now! You can do whatever you want! Great work so far!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like it!
Not sure why you said that... but thanks! haha!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Wow...this is unbelievable...
Author's Response: Hi Bella's Shrink! Hope that was a good wow! And if it is glad that you liked it!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2009 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
I just hope Edward doesn't screw it up like he usally does. Hopefully the visitors wont cause much of a problem wither. I'm glad Bella and Rose have a friendship (slight friendship) in this story, If anyone would know how to deal with anger it would be Rose. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks Nissa! Glad your liking it so far! Can't say what happens in the future =[ but I think you'll be okay with it =]
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Hey, just started reading your story and it is very good and a very interesting twist on thnigs! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you TeamJasper14 I hope you like what comes next!!
Reviewer: claw (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Unique premise. Very tough to get all the character's voices just right. Well done overall.
Author's Response: Thank you claw. Glad that you like it. It was very hard to get all the characters voices right but I think they came out alright! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
I'm totally addicted! This chapter is so different from the last... I'm impressed with your writing abilities! Gah, what a place to stop the chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you penguin! Glad you liked this chapter, it was very fun to write but more angst is coming. Its not the end!
More is coming!
Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2009 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Bloodlust
Wow! Awesome start! I can't wait to hit that Next button and see what happens!!
Author's Response: Thanks Penguin!
Reviewer: Katikittie (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Eek! A happy Edward? Is that possible?!
HEHE!
I loved the chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Katikittie! glad you liked it! I'm having alot of fun writing happy Edward, but more angst is deffently on the way. Deffently on the way. <-- yes I meant to say that twice.
More is coming!
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Great chapter! (I tend to say that a lot. Doesn't make it any less true though. LOL) While the E/B stuff was great, I love the Alice/Edward interraction more. I love the bond they have with one another. Thanks for putting some of that in there. I hope we'll get to see more too.
Great job! Looking forward to the next one. :)
~Cat~
Author's Response: Thans Cat, glad your liking it and ofcourse more is coming!
Reviewer: evanzmom (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2009 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Great story...keep the updates comming. Do you have this posted anywhere else?
Author's Response: Thank you! I have it posted on ff but that is only one chapter ahead of this one so I don't recomend checking it out just yet....
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
great chapter! Can't wait to read what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks SE!!! Glad you like it
more is coming
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 8 -Ager and Rocks
wow Bella! Never saw that side of her
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
I loved angry, ticked off Bella. Actually, her thoughts are exactly what mine were, as I contemplated the nature of Carlile.
I wonderful story and writing style. I also like the lack of swearing.
Great version of Twilight.
Update VERY VERY soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you Fear! Glad your liking it so far!!!!
I work very hard to keep my story vertually swear-less. Of course a couple here and there either make the work sound better or intensify it but on a regular basis I try to to refrain from including them. I'm glad you like t!
More is coming
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Emotions
So sweet and so sad at the same time
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Thank you for the update... I will admit... I have been haunting this site and checking for updates on several stories... yours though I can't seem to get enough of...
THANK YOU!!!
Author's Response: Awwww, thanks WO!!!
More is coming!!
Reviewer: Soph Cullen (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Yeah! I love "happy Edward"!!
Author's Response: Yes!!!
Me to, although I love the angsty Edward I have created I love a Happy Edward aswell. =]
Reviewer: twlightobsessed (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Mothers
Oh my wonderfully written. I am really enjoying this story so far. On to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Aww thanks TO glad your liking it so far!!
Reviewer: Azrielstar (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Yea- a new chapter! I like where the story is going- Who are the 'visitors'?
Author's Response: Thanks!!
Glad that you like the twisting plot that is Not Her!!!
The visitors.... I guess you'll just have to stick around, read some more, and leave me lovely reviews inorder to find out!!!!
But i am not keeping my story hostage. No way... That ^^^ is just what I hope will happen!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Mmmmm, I loved how much Alice/Edward there was in this. I love to read more of the sibling relationships and supports, which I felt were a bit lacking in the books. They talked about being family, and would defend eachother to the death, but this is different from how human the conversation you wrote is.
Author's Response: Thank you =]
The next chapter is Rose/Emmett/Bella interaction then 11 is Edward/Bella and 12 (my fav so far) is Emmett/Bella!! yaya!!
Reviewer: EmmBonn (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
The whole Edward and Alice playing and laughing in the woods scene just brightened my day considerably! I can't stop smiling thinking about it! :D
Author's Response: Awww thanks!!
Glad that I made your day a little bit better! It means the world to me!
Reviewer: iWant2BaMonsterToo (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
love it!!
Author's Response: Love you!!!
Thank you!!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:31 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
you just cant update this one fast enough for me... I love it.
Author's Response: Sorry!!! More is coming though, more is coming!
Reviewer: PaisleyCrighton (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Alice
Another good chapter. I like seeing Bella really angry about the change. I think it makes it more realistic. I can't wait to see how you handle the introduction of James. I have seen it handled a couple of ways where James meets a Vampire Bella, so I am looking forward to your take on it. No pressure. :o)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!!! Glad you liked it!!
But... uhmm... about James... as much as I love Cam/James... well...
heh well see.
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