Bella's blow up was very teenagy. Really liked how you linked Bella's and Rosalie's experiences. A bit of an unexpected pairing but consistent with your story.

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you liked it... 

thanks for the review though!!

You updated! I was checking through some other fic's and saw yours and thought it wouldn't hurt to check it out and lo and behold there was an update! This chapter rocks. I loved the mind reading between Bella and Edward. I hope you don't get any more writers block because I want more soon. Please.

-Me

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review!!  Great story love, I liked it alot!!  I'm glad you liked the mind reading... that worried me but it turns out you guys liked it!! I'm glad!!

I think my writers block is over...  I hope... and updates should hopefully be faster!!

~Ally

Love it! Love you! Love love love!

I enjoyed the private conversation and him being nervous about bringing her up to his room after they're lovely kissy! ^_^

Author's Response:

Thanks girl!!!  Glad you liked it!!!

Yes... my Edward is always nervouse around Bella... Atleast until he tells her the truth!!!  Lol

Awe they finally admitted they love each other!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Glad you liked it!!

Great chapter!  Edward still didn't tell Bella that he changed her, but at least they came clean about their feelings.  I hope your writer's block goes away and you can update again soon! :-D

Author's Response:

Thanks again for your review!  I'm glad you liked it and when Edward does come clean... well... its soon haha :)

Thanks again!

Updates should be coming sooner... I hope

I'm happy that Edward isn't beating himself up TOO much over this.  Of course, he wouldn't be Edward without some amount of self-loathing, but it seems like he's dealing with having Bella as a vampire with him very well.  Probably because she's already that way, but still...

Author's Response:

Thank you again!  glad that you liked it!!!

I hope that you like that he isn't beating himself up to much. haha

Wow, that was some outburst!  Bella sure had a lot of anger.  She still has the misconception that Carlisle created her, though.  I hope she learns that Edward bit her soon, that should be interesting.

Author's Response:

Yes she did!  And thanks for your review!!

Finally!  So glad you updated.  Really looking forward to the story moving along.

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Sorry it took so long, life has just been so hectic lately..

Thanks for sticking with me!

So happy that your back!!!

I was starting to worry that you gave up on this story, but im happy to know that you didn't. Great chapter its great that they admitted their love for eachother, update again soon!

Author's Response:

Oh My Gosh I could never give up on this story! Lol, I'm glad that you liked it!!

I should be updating soon but no promises!

Hey, glad you're back.  I really liked this chapter a lot, it's a relief to have them say ILY and for both to be happy.  I had kind of forgotten how little they actually knew of each other at this point, so it's interesting to see them get to know each other.  I like how Bella is able to share in the others' powers, but am not exactly clear yet how that works.  I'm enjoying this fic a lot and I hope you can keep the writer's block at bay.

I hesitate to say this, and I don't mean to be an anal-retentive beeyotch, but you've got some grammar issues in this fic that stick out to me.  When you mean the word "also", use "too" -- "Edward now knew that Bella loved him, too."  And also use "too" to indicate something is "too much".   "Bella was running too fast." 

Possessives go like this-- Multiple people possessive: "The Cullens' house is very nice.  I am going to the Cullens' party this evening."   Talking about multiple people are a group, non-possessive: "I don't think the Cullens are human.  I wish the Cullens would cancel their party."  Singular possessive:  " Edward Cullen's Volvo is shiny.  Alice Cullen's visions were accurate." 

Please don't hate me!

Author's Response:

Aww honey why would I hate you?  Lol, I like getting critisicm!

Thank you for the review!  I'm not going to lie to you... but I didn't understand half of what you said!  Lol, I did... but I didn't!  I have three beta's so I will make sure they get the memo!  Thank you!

I'm glad that you liked it though!!!  Lol.

Really though, I don't hate yo :)  ♥

I just found your story today and read it all in one sitting, I am really enjoying it.  You write well and are very descriptive!  I especially like your new take on Rosalie, but I feel a little sorry for poor Alice!  update soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review snowgood!  I'm glad that you liked it!!  And yes, Alice is upset about it, but she does get her time with Bella!!

I hope to have updates up faster!!

this chapter was so worth the wait...

I love your writing style and can't wait to read more/...

Author's Response:

Thanks Wicked!  Glad you liked it!!

I'm still sorry it was such a long wait!

The updates should be quicker now....  I hope!

He's a coward not to tell her - I can't believe Rose didn't tell her.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your Review...  I'm not sure if your dissapointed or hate my fic or not but still thank you...