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Reviewer: alecjanes (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2010 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

i love alice and jasper stories they would have to be my favorite couple.

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aw! That was so perfect! The last line, I just loved that! It was so Alice and Jasper! I adored the way that Alice was so happy and waiting for him to smile. And also the way that Jasper was curious, yet didn't run away. Everything about Alice just draws him in.

This was written nicely, too. I like your writing style :)

Reviewer: cekh1908 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2010 02:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

I do so love Alice and Jasper's story. Well written, thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: jujubakiller (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I never get tired off reading about Alice's and Jasper's first meeting. I like to read the different intepretations off it. And yours is extremely cute! I liked that Alice is really happy, but still cautious, because in some fics she comes out almost dumb. And I also loved that Jasper didn't accept everything without caution or question, after all, he didn't have any reason to. Overall I found it great.

Reviewer: vegetarianvamps (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2010 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 1

This was so sweet!

I always thought Alice knew his name, but now reading this, why would she? Unless she had a vision of him saying 'My name is Jasper Withlock' and I don't think so.

Also, I always assumed they went to find The Cullens right away, but they just met at that moment so they should have more time.

I liked this!

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